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Second Year Dialouge Exercise script 2010

Working Title: CINDERELLA

Team:

Written & Direction: Ranjit Kumar

Cinemotography : Surendra Doria

Editing : Ranjeet Kumar Singh

Audiography : Smijith Kumar

Production Design : Ujjwal Gawand


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SYNOPSIS:

This the story of the girl belonging to lower middle class who is

oppressed by her step mother and step sisters. She wants to escape

from that place and dreams that one day someone will come and take

her away. Its her wish.

One night a man does comes to her house. He convinces her thatprevious night she had come to shehjadas palace and later,ran away

from there. And he had come to take her back to shehjada.

She thinks that finally her dream has come true and she being

recused by none other but by a Shehjada. She goes along with the

man.

But there she is thrown back to lifes reality. Her dreams of

freedom are all illusions and the world is deception.

The story is set in some dreamy unrealistic space.

Sound of rain drops on tin roof

Fade in


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1 EXT/TEA SHOP/NIGHT

Flames of match stick comes and the shopkeeper lights the laltern.

He passes the cup of tea to a man, (Anwar Sajjad, age 30) who face

is partially lit by the laltern and wet.

Shop keeper:

Shayar miyan, yeh adrak wali chai apke gale ko rahat

degi.

The poet anwar sajjad who is covered in a shawl with stub (khichadi

dhadi) and spoofy eyes, smiles at this and takes the cup of tea.

Drinks the first sip and then gives a melancholic smile. Slowly he

murmurs.

Sajjad:

Koi haath bhi na milayega jo gale miloge tapak se

Yeh naye mizaz ka shehar hai, zara fasale se mila karo.

We see another three people holding tea in their hand and one among

them is also smoking beedi. They are looking at Sajjad with

expecting eyes and asks.

Man 1:

Sajjad saab, shayar ka sher uske mureedon ke liye

hota hai. Zara hum bhi toh sune.

Sajjad:

Amma miyan badru, hum jaise shayar ka na din ka thik na

duniya ka. Kam se kam tum jaise kuch fakkad mureed hi

sahi.

Man 2:

Shayar miyan, bahar se toh hum bheeg hi gaye hain.kuch

aisa sunao ki andar tak bheeg jayein.

Sajjad :

(smiles), Aaj bhi aadam ki beti huntron ki jadh mein hai.

Har gilhari ke badan par dhariyan hogi zaroor.

All of them praises him.

Man 3:

Yeh shayaron ki bhasa who hi jaane zara hamein tafteesh

se batayeye.

Sajjad:


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Hu(deep breath, a sip of tea), toh lijeye.

INT/ROOM/EVENING

INSIDE THE ROOM:

We see a young (18 yrs)girl cindrella ,who is sitting on a rug in

the middle of the room (dimly lit) and is making wollen balls of it

again at the one corner of the room we see a jar filled with

pebbles.Cindrella is encircled by the woolen ball and it appears as

if she is trapped in the haphazard condition.She is knitting and

there is a tinge of tears in her eyes which are bright ,she is

beautiful but in rags. Suddenly the wall-clock produces an metallic

sound and she looks at the wall clock,she moves from her place and

gets near the window looks outside,turns and touches the Pebbles

smiles a bit and with smooth steps she moves towards the door as if

she doesnt want to produce any sound ,again she looks a bitfrightened and looks behind so that no one will see her and knocks a

cylindrical box in which there are a lot of kniting needles and it

falls and spreads on the ground,she collects it in hurry and places

it on the Rug,then with slow steps she moves to the gate opens it

slowly and moves out.

Outside at the gate:

We see a dog is siting at the gate as if it is a watch dog it is

really dangerous and it growls on Cindrella. Her mother and her

sister can be seen at a distance they are approaching towardsher,she looks frightened and runs inside the room,and she shuts the

door,the dog is still barking and her heart beat is increasing,she

sits on her rug,suddenly her step mother enters in side and she

shouts

MOTHER

Kaha bhag rahi thi? subah se ek bhi kapde nahi bune tune,

The step-sister comes inside and the dog has stopped barking,

STEP SISTER

Maa isne Monty ko mara,

MOTHER

Agli Baar agar Bahgne ki koshish ki

STEP SISTER

(She looks at cindrella and ties to tease her),Chalo na maa humkoparty me jana hai.

Mother gives an angry look at cindrella and both of them moves from


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there,and they bangs the door from outside

She starts crying and tears roll down her cheek,

V.O:kabhi woh sochti ki uski umra ek lamha hai,kaabhi sau saal

SCENE 3:

INT- CHAI TAPARI NIGHT

We see Sajjad is narrating the story to all the people sitting

nearby,there is complete silence over there

V.O:jawani ki is dehleez pe uski ek tamanna hoti ki kabhi koi aayega

aur use

Man 1

(And he smiles)Bhagaa ke leke jayega

SAJJAD

Smiles , Hu..

MAN 2

To aaya koi chahnewala,koi mureed

SAJJAD

Tha Ek Diwaana jiske pyar karne ka Andaaz hi Anokha tha

SCENE -4

INT.CINDRELLAS ROOM NIGHT

A stone comes through the window and it hits cindrella who is busy

in knitting,she picks the pebble and looks to the window and smiles

again,suddenly her smile is broken by the loud sound of the dog who

is at the gate,she is frightened she moves near the door then again

she looks at the Window and smiles and moves towards it,She moves

slowly towards the window and looks outside as she has hidden

herself behind the Wall,It is the same person(Sajjad)in torn clothes

and he is looking at the Window,she looks at him and again hides

herself totally,even we can see him.

GIRLS V.O :Tum Raah me chup-chap khade to ho gaye ho,Kis-kis ko bataoge ki Ghar kyo nahi jaate

Wo Deodaar Ki tehni par Ruk gaya sa chand

Hawa chale to abhi karwate badal lenge

Deewana is still waiting, Finally He waited for her and then he


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moves from there,She also returns from the Window and puts the

pebble in the vase where she has collected them in large number,She

looks sad.

SCENE-5

INT. TAPARI NIGHT

Sajjad is lost in his thought and everyone is silent,one of the

person picks the groundnut and puts it in the mouth.He is chewing it

funnily,

MAN 1

Toh Cindrella Deewane Ke saath nahi gayi

SAJJAD

Hu..Aaj tak kabhi Dewano ko cindrella mili hai,Ek to

Deewana thahra fakkad jiski Zindagi Gumnami ke andhere methi ab Cindrella ek andhere se dusre Andhere me kaisi

jati.

MAN 2

To phir Cindrella ki kahani khatam

SAJJAD

Huh(Smile),nahi Kismat Ne uske liye Ek Shahjaada

Bheja,jo use Beintehaan Mohabbat karta tha,Aur Cindrella

ko apne paas bulane ke liye usne ek Pyada bheja.

SCENE 6:

INT. CINDRELLA ROOM- NIGHT

Cindrella Looks surprised at the arrival of an unknown at

this point of Night,

CINDRELLA

(IN FEAR AND SURPRISE)Kaun ho tum? Andar kaise pahuche

CROANY

Mai shehjada ka pyada hu ,Duniya me Kahi Bhi,Aakash me

Patal me,jal me,Thal me kahi bhi Kisi Bhi pahuch sakta

hu..ha ..ha,Aur mai tumhe yaha se lene yaha hu.

CINDRELLA

MujheLekin Mai shehjade ko janti tak nahi,Tum Yaha se

Chale jao Agar meri maa ne tumhe yaha dekh liya to

CROANY

Ek samay pe mai ek hi jawaab deta hu,Lekin Aapke liye (He


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bow his head),Jab se Aap kal ki party bich me chod ke

Bahg gayi,Shehjada apni Neend,Chain ,Sukh Sab bhool ke

Dukh ki Tonic le raha hai.Ye jute Aap hi ke hai na,Aur

Tumhari us Sadi Budhiya aur uski Bewkoof Beti ko maine

Bahar jate dekha jab Mai hawa me udte hua tumhe yaha lene

Aa raha tha.

CINDRELLA

Party? mai to kabhi party me gayi hi nahi

CROANY

Shehjade ki party tab hoti hai jab din Puri tarah se nahi

Dhalta aut shaam puri tarah se nahi hoti..Shehjada aapke

in khubsurat kadmo me Duniya ke sari khusiyyan rakhna

chahta hai,(He passes the Boot to her hand)

She takes the shoe in her hand and looks happy

CINDRELLA

Kya Shahjada Mujhe itni Mohabbat karta hai.lekin mai Apni

maa aur bahar us kutte se darti hu,

CROANY

Phir Do Sawal,(He bows his head)Shehjada aapke intezar me

Deewana hua ja raha hai,Aur wo kutta bahar Aaram sebotiya tod raha hai,(the dog barks)Abe chupp..Ab jaldi

Chaliye..Ha..ha

Cindrella looks convinced as she is looking at the boot

and at smiling at him while he is talking.

SCENE 7:

INT.CHAI TAPARI NIGHT

The Tapari is closed and there is no one except them,its

still raining outside.

SAJJAD

Aap logo ko ghar nahi jaana,

He is reading there faces and they looks mesmerizes in

the story,

MAN 1

To Cindrella shahjade ke saath gayi,Aur Deewane ke kya

hua ?

SAJJAD


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Deewana to Deewana tha..

SCENE -8

EXT. ON THE STREET-NIGHT

Deewana is under the same street lamp in the tatterd clothes,A

vintage looking Car comes and stops near Him,

DEEWANA

Dekho mai Tumhara ab bhi yahi intezaar kar raha hoon,

CINDRELLA

(With brightness in her eyes),Mai Aapne Shahjade ke Pas ja rahi hun,

DEEWANA

Phir Laut ke na aa paogi

CINDRELLA

Shahjade ke pass jannat hai,Wo mujhe behad Mohabbat karta

hai.

DEEWANA

Ye Tumhara sapna hai ,Shahjade kabhi Mohabbat nahi

karte,Tum laut ke Aaogi.

Cindrella looks irritated ,The car moves away,But she is still

looking at him who is left behind

DEEWANA CONTD

Jab waqt Thahar jaega aur marta hua lamha Dusre me janam lega us

waqt ke pehle tum laut Aaogi,Aur shayad tab tak.

He leaves the frame and the car looks tiny in the frame as it has

moved distant.

SCENE 9:

Cyndrilla enters the ball-room and she is surprised to see the

lavishness of the Room,She is looking Extremely preety and her eyes

looks brightened,Shehjada comes down the staircase who looks

extremely handsome.He stretches his hand and she also gives her

hand,

SHEHZADA

Tum sapney me jaise dikhte ho,Haqqeqat me usse bhi zyada Khubsurat

CINDRELLA

ye Sapna hai ya haqeeqat

SHEHZADA


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Sapna kal tak tha jab maine pehli Baar tumhe dekha tha,Lekin aaj ye

haqeeqat hai (he kisses on her hand)

CINDRELLA

She blushes and smiles),Mere liye to ye sapnay ke jaisa hai

SHEHZADA

Lo abhi tumhara bhram dur karte hai,(he Announce her to People)Jiska

Intezaar Aap log ghanto se kar rahe they wo Aapke samne hai,ye hai

humari malika Aapki nayi Shahzadi,

Every one tosses to her,

PEOPLE IN CHORUS

Welcome shehzadi

She smiles and covers her face as if she cant believe it.The light

goes off,Shehzada with courtesy and romance in his eyes takes her

hand out of her face,And they starts dancing.First the Shehzada has

put his Arm around her shoulder,she has closed her eyes ,Soft and

Romantic Music in the background,they dances she giggles in joy and

romance,Looking straight in his eyes ,then there is a tinge of tears

in her eyes,others are also dancing and enjoying the moment.Shehzada

says something in her ear,she looks happy and she also says

something which is not Audible.

SCENE-10

INT.BEDROOM OF SHEHZADA NIGHT

Shehzada and Cindrella are dancing and the music is playing in the

Background, she flops on the cozy Bed and he also falls on the bed,

She has closed her Eyes. Shehzada is humming some romantic tune and

he is releasing his tie, He asks Cindrella

SHEHZADA

To kaisi lagi tumhe Shehzade ki duniya

CINDRELLA

Mujhe Ab bhi Vishwaas nahi hota..

SHEHZADA

Ki ye sab Tumhara hai,Shehzade ki sari daulat tumhari

hai,Hire,jawaharat,mahal,Rupaye, Aur ye shehzada bhi.

He puts his hand around her belly,Cindrella opens her eyes.Shehzada

comes closer,she looks Frightened

SHEHZADA


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Bahut jaldi mai tumhe Apna bana lunga aur tumhe apni shehzaddiyo ke

mahal me rakhunga phir tum bhi meri aur

He comes closer to kisses her,she moves her face away and He laughs

in a demonic way and again comes near to her she struggles to

relieve herself from his clutches and in the process to run her

clothes are torned,and a bit comes in his hand,he flops on the bed

and puts the torn piece of cloth in his mouth,she is running hereand there to find the door,but its an elusive room with curtains all

around,she removes one curtain and finds the wall ,she again removes

a curtain and there is a window on which her mother and sister are

seen in a demonic way,she again opens another curtain and they are

on the another Window, Shehzada and The mother are laughing and she

is trapped in between them,Sound of barking door is heard.Everything

is spinning around her.Suddenly there is silence a typical numbness

and the same sound of the wall clock,superimposed with sound of

Deewana:

marta hua lamha Dusre me janam lega us waqt ke pehle tum laut

Aaogi,

She comes to her sense the numbness is gone and she runs out of the

another door and shehzada is still laughing in the room.

SCENE-11

EXT.OUTSIDE ON THE DOOR NIGHT

We see cindrella in her old clothes running on the deserted road

there is nocuternal sound seen,she comes from a distance to near andcrosses the tapari running.

Scene 12:

INT.TAPAARI NIGHT

We see that all of the people around have numb faces after listening

the story,All of them are silent including Deewana,The rain has stop

outside

MAN 1

(Clearing his throat)To Phir cindrella ka kya hua?

Deewana smiles,

MAN 2

Aur Deewana kaun tha? Uska kya hua

SAJJAD

(He smiles)Ghajab kiya tere wade pe aitbaar kiya tamam raat Qayamat

ka intezaar kiya

Sajjad stands and Moves from there,everyone looks surprised at his

sudden departure,we see him going on the lonely road,he goes away


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and away from the frame.

Slow fade-out

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Voice over of Sajjad:

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INT/ROOM- NEAR THE DOOR /EVENING

The girl gets up slowly and cautiouly walks towards the door(looking

back)slowly opens it and tries to get out.She slowly lift her leg

over the threshold while looking back.

But she stops suddenly(hears dogs growling), she finds a dog

outside watching her.She tries to shoo him away but the dog starts

barking, making her frightened. She rushes back to her room.

INT/ROOM/EVENING

The girl is sitting on the rug, completely being aware that she has

been caught. She is casting fearful glaces.

Barking sound makes her step mother and step sisters to come to her

room. They are all wearing nice dresses.

Step mother:

Lagta hai isne aaj phir kuch gadbad karne ki kosish ki


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hai.

Step mother goes upto door,sees the dog, taps on his head. She

realises that she was trying to run. Her step mother starts to beat

her up while her step sisters watch smiling.

Step sisters put more bundles of tangled wool in front of her.

Step mother:

Jab tak yeh sulajh nahi jati tab tak khana nahi milega.

They all leave.

INT/ROOM/EVENING

The girl is somber after being hit and is sitting. She slowly picks

up the tangled wool and starts making ball out of it.

After sometime she hears a sound. A pebble has fallen at her feet

after hitting the window.She knew who has thrown it. She goes up to

the window though she resists herself initially and slowly opens the

window and looks at him. A man(dressed in rag) is standing on the

other side of the street under the shed like thing, looking at her

and is smiling at her.

.

/ - Amir aaga kajalwash

/ - Vimal krishna ashk

She looks at him for a moment then she comes back to her place.

She picks the pepple and keeps it along with other pebbles. She had

collected all the pebbles. She runs her fingers over pebbles that

was thrown by him before.

Voice over of Mirza:

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EXT/TEA SHOP/EVENING

Mirza is surrounded by the few people who are listening to him.

Man 1 picks up the ground nuts from the plate and puts in his mouth.

Man 1(while chewing):

Phir?

Sajjad:

Phir (pause).Ek raat hamesha ki uski sauteli maa aur

uski bahene dawat par gayi thi. Aur who ladki apne kamere

mein baithi apna dil behlani ke liye kankad ko gin rahi

thi. Tab ek din...

All are listening intently to him. Camera pans/tracks though all the

faces.

2 INT/ROOM/NIGHT

Camera pans/tracks to reveal the girls face.

The girl is sitting and to cheer herself she is counting the

pebbles.

Suddenly the room is lit up by bright light (as by a passing

vehicle). She gets startled and looks towards the window.

She can hear the sound of the car engine.

She slowly on her knees goes up to the window. From behind the

window pane she looks out.

3 EXT/STREET/NIGHT

A beautiful car halts near the house. Car looks completely out of

place for this deserted street at late in the night.

A young man of age around 24-25 years gets out the car. He is


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smartly dressed in black suit, tie and pant. He walks up to the

window as he work with his tie.

He comes near the window and whispers.

Young man:

Tum ho?

Inside the room, the girl is in her own dream world.She leans

herself on the wall and closes her eyes.

Young man knocks on the window and calls out again.

Young man (little louder):

Tum ho ?

She comes back to reality, opens the window and answers him back.

Girl:

haan.!

Young man:

Good!

As he answers her he jumps in through window.

The girl gets frightened. She moves forward to stop him.

Girl:

Nahi nahi, tum chale jao yehan se. Meri maa sauteli

hai.

Young man is not worried about that. He tries to calm her down.

Young man:

Ghabrao nahi, koi baat nahi. Wah yahan nahi

aayegi.

He takes out a box.He opens it and takes out a very beautiful

sparkling shoe from his pocket which has got diamonds studded on it.

Young man:

Lo yeh pahen kar dekhao.

She looks at shoe with awe. She hesitates and is in the state of

confusion. She looks at shoe, then at the man.

Young man(in little commanding voice):

Paheno.


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She is standing there paralyzed, slowly she sits on the chair next

to her and wears the shoe. The young man is watching.

Young man(happily, excitedly):

Bilkul fit hai. Tumhara hi hai.

The girl is confused.

Girl:

Mera?

Young man:

Haan.. Tumhara. Tum kal raat Shehjade ki dawat se

bhagte waqt chhod aayi thi.

She is perplexed. She stands up.

Girl:

Main..?

Young man:

Haan. Tumhain yaad nahin ? Ek pari tumhein hamare

Shehjade ke mahal mein le ke gayi thi aur tumne usse wada

kiya tha ki

Girl interrupts.

Girl:

Lekin (pause). Wah tho khawab tha

Young man:

Wah khawab tha ya nahi tha, muje safai paesh karne ka

hukam nahi hain. Mera kaam tumnein yehan se le ke jana

hai. Shehjada tumhare intezaar mein bekarar hain. Chalo.

She is happy but there is little hesitation, doubt and fear in her.

Girl:

Lekin?

Young man:

Lekin wekin kuch nahi. Shehjada tumhein iss kaid se

nizad dila kar rahega. Phir tum saari umar us shaandar

mahal mein rahogi, jahan

Young man:

Jahan tumein is jahan ki sab sahuliyetein milegi.


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Naukar-chakar, Ghoda- Ghadi,keemati kapade, heere

jawaharat. Roz sair sapata hoga. Tum shehjadi ki tarah

rahogi aur raaj karogi..

The young man explains all the luxuries of palace and life over

there. After finishing, he turns to her.

Young man (looking at her):

Ab chalein..

The girl seems eager to go along with him but stood there looking at

her dress which are dirty. He give a casual look at her and her

cloths.

Young man:

Uski fikr tum mat karo. Car mein Shehjade ka bheja hualibas rakha hai.

Now also the girl is hesitant. She looks at the window.

Girl:

Magar who kutta jo bahar hai?

In reply the young laughs and jumps out of window, he gestures

towards his legs. Girl comes to the window and sees that dog is busy

eating dog food. Young man smiles at her and gestures her to come.

Young man:

Ab Aao.

The young man walks towards the car. The girl climbs on the window.

4 EXT/STREET/NIGHT

The girl gets down from the window and walks towards the car. The

young man already near the car and opens the door of the car for

her.

She is about the step into car when she hears a voice na jana from

back. She turns around to find deewana standing at his usual place,

from where he used to watch her, in front of his room.

She gets startled and gestures him to go away. But the deewana

stands there with little smile on his face.

She turns and looks at the young man who is still holding the door.

He too is in a kind of confused state and watching all this drama.

She is feeling embrassed. She quickly turns towards foot board.

Deewana again calls out to her (this time little louder).


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Deewana:

Ruk jao. Mat jao

Now the girl turns, pauses and walks up to him. The young man

watches this little confused manner.

Girl:

Mein shehjade ki jannat mein ja rahi huin.

Deewana:

Phir wapas na aa paogi.

Girl:

Tumhe isse kya? wah bahut khoobsurat hai, Shehjada hai.

Deewana:

To meri ek baat maano, jab waqt thahar jata hai aur

marta hua lamha doosare mein janam leta hai, us lamhein

se pahele pahele laut aana.

The girl giggles and laughs. She turns to leave.

Deewana:

Main tumhara intezar karunga.

.

She turns and laughs little louder. She goes and sits into the car.

Girl(to herself):

Deewana..!

Young man:

Kaun Deewana?

Girl:

Tum nahin jante.

She turns and through the back glass pane of the car as it moves.

She sees the deewana standing there, watching her go. He is standing

in the front of his room in diminishing red/warm light falling on

him from behind.

EXT/TEA SHOP/EVENING (LITTLE DARK)

The people around Mirza are listening to the story with great

interest. In the back , a boy is lighting the laltern.


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Man 2:

Phir who gayi us aadmi ke saath?

Mirza pauses for a while and he looks into void.

Anwar:

Haan. Jahan uske sapno ka Shehjada milta hai.

5 INT/PALACE LIKE STRCTURE/NIGHT

A big grand,enterance door opens slowly and the girl enters into big

and beautiful ball room.

Fade in sound of people and music.

We see her completely transformed. She is now the most pretty lady

in the room. All eyes are on her.

She enters into the lavish ball room. Every thing are made up of

glass and silvery material. Lighting gives it a spectacular

silverish look.

There is soft music in the background.

She is eagerly and exitedly looking around the lavishness and beauty

of the place.

There are many different people dressed nicely (in whites andblacks), looking at her. In the center there is handsome man smiling

who comes up to her and takes her in his arms.

Shehjada:

Tum aa gayi. Main kab se tumhara intezaar kar raha

tha.

She looks at his face. For her it is all dream. She feels as if she

is in cloud nine,in heaven.

Ball dance music starts playing.

Shehjada takes her hand hand on his and takes her to floor. She

hesitantly goes with him.

Both are dancing on the floor, holding each others arms.

Shehjada:

Kal tum chali kyon gayi thi?

Girl:

Der ho gayi thi..is liye.

Shehjada:


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Ab na jana

Girl:

Kabh nahi jaongi..

And she goes into his arms. Both of them seems to be happy and

enjoying.

Montages of few dance sequences.

6 INT/BEDROOM/NIGHT

Both of them enters into bedroom. Sound of people slowly fades out

as they enter. They are still in the dancing mood.

The door closes behind him.

Both of them fall on the bed exhaustedly with their legs dangling

down. The bed is made up of white material like feathers. They are

lying next to each other. The girls eyes are closed.

Shehjada raises his hand and points towards the table where all the

valubles are kept.

Shehjada:

Yeh sab tumhari hain..

Girl:

(eyes closed, half sleepy)

Hmmm.

Shehjada:

Ab tumhein kisi cheez ki zaroorat nahin.

Girl:

(eyes closed, half sleepy)

Hmmm.

Shehjada:

Ab tum to meri ho, meri.

Shehjada slowly moves his arms towards her. He is over her holding

her on shoulder. Her eyes is still closed. Shehjada holds her by

shoulder.

Shehjada:

Tum meri ho

She gets startled and opens her eyes. Her expression changes from

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Suddenly there is sound of the clock bell and also Waqt ruk geya

geya hai. Laut aao (DeewanaVoice).

Shehjada is transformed into some sort mad man who is

pulling/tearing out her dress which she finds that it is just made

up of ordinary wool. His eyes had become red and only canines(teeth) are visible which has blood stain on it.

She pushes him back and gets off from bed. She turns and looks at

him. He falls back (he is somehow sure that she will not be able to

get out this place) on the bed giving out a loud laugh.

Shehjada:

Yehan se kaise jaogi?

He keeps on laughing.

Sound of clock bell(This time more louder)plus Deewana voice.

The girl turns and runs from there.She pulls open the door. She

finds her step mother and step sisters standing there with the shoes

in their hand and laughing. She runs to another door but she find

them there too, trying to catch her. She is running from one door to

another.

Sound of clock getting louder and louder, following her. Sound of

Shehjada laughter is following her.

8. EXT/STREET/NIGHT

Finally she manages to exit through one door and come out of the

palace building to a street. She is running on the long deserted

street.

The clock sound, laughter and other sounds are slowly fading out as

she runs away into dark.

9. EXT/TEA SHOP/NIGHT CONTINUATION WITH THE PREVIOUS SCENE

Camera cranes up as she runs into the dark, stays there for sometimeand then,slowly comes down back to the tea stall where Mirza is

narrating the story.We can see the girl running in the background.

Man 3:

Sajjad saab, par us ladki ka anth mein kya hua..?

Man 4:

Aur uss Deewane ka kya hua ?

Anwar:

Ladki..(pause) woh andere mein kho gayi. Aur

Deewana aaj bhi uski talash kar rahah hai.


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There is blank expression on their face.

Man 1:

kahani toh badi acchi hai. Par iska shirshak..title

kya hai.

Anwar:

TitleahCinderella

Man 3:

Cinderella ? Goya..yeh kya shirshak hua..?

Anwar smiles.

Anwar:

HaanCinderella.Aaj ki Cinderella. Chalo main

nikalta huin.Zaroori kaam yaad aa geya hai aur

barish ruk gayi hai.

Anwar picks up his things from the table.He gets up and walks into

street. People watches him going and start to disperse.

Yeh kya iski khud ki kahaani hai.

Pata nahi. Shyaad ho sakti hai. Yeh writer log

ajeeb hote hain. Yeh inke zindagi ka hi ek phalsafa

bhi ho sakta hai.

Fade in

Film Title

CINDERELLA (English and hindi)

Fade out

--End Credits Roll--

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