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WELCOME
to the sessions on
NOTING and DRAFTING Principles & procedure.
By
K.S.KUMAR, Joint Director, ISTM
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OBJECTIVES At the end of these
sessions the participants will be able to:
Agree to the need for noting; Describe essential features of
noting; and Write a note.
NOTING
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WHAT IS AN OFFICE ?
Office is a continuous, work-
specific information processing unit;
Reservoir of relevant Rules,
Precedents, data and decisions.
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• Can we process information without examination ?
We need to examine every piece of information that is with us or that comes to us in relation to office work. The examination may be in simple or complex manner depending on the issue. But we can not do without examination.
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Can we examine
without a record ?
We need to keep record of examination, to verify
at later stage that it was done as per :
- The relevant Rules ;
- The set Procedures ;
- The existing Orders ; and through / by an
- Authorised level.
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Can we record without a note ?
“Note” means the remarks recorded on a case to
facilitate its disposal and includes a précis of previous papers, a statement or an analysis of the questions requiring decision, suggestions regarding the course of action and final orders passed thereon.
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Can we note without writing ?
“Note” is a written record of examination of a case.
As per the Office Procedure, we must retain a hard
copy of it for a period appropriate to the relevant
file.
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NEED FOR NOTING
• Instrument of disposal of a case
• Tool for decision making
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DEFINITIONS
• Note:
Remarks recorded on a case to facilitate its
disposal, and includes a precise of previous
papers, analysis of question requiring
decision, suggestion and final order passed
• Minutes
Note recorded by the president, the Vice –
President, the PM or a Minister
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DEFINITIONS,CONTINUED…….
• File
A collection of papers arranged in
chronological order on a subject assigned a
file number and consisting of – Notes – Correspondence – Appendix to Notes – Appendix to correspondence
• Notes portion
The portion containing notes or minutes
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DEFINITIONS,CONTINUED…….
• Correspondence portion
The portion containing ‘receipt’ and office copies of ‘issue’ pertaining to a file
• Appendix to Notes
A lengthy summary or statement containing detailed information concerning certain aspect of the question discussed on file, information of which in the the main note is likely to obscure the main point or makes the note unnecessary lengthy
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DEFINITIONS,CONTINUED…….
• Appendix to correspondence
lengthy enclosures to a communication (whether
receipt or issue) on the file , inclusion of which is
likely to obstruct smooth reading or make
correspondence portion unwieldy
• Case
a current file or a receipt with related papers
• Come-back case
case received back for further action like re-
examination or preparing a draft or summary
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DEFINITIONS,CONTINUED…….
• Docketing
making entries in note portion of a file about serial no assigned to each item of receipt or issue for its identification. Remarks of higher officer on a receipt also to be reproduced on note sheet after docketing.
• Referencing
Process of identifying a document, decision and facts mentioned in a note , draft or office copy of a communication
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GUIDELINES ON NOTING
• Concise and to the point
• Simple and direct style of writing (To
express and not to impress)
• Not recorded on receipt itself except in
routine matters
• Verbatim reproduction of extract of PUC or
of notes of other ministries recorded on the
same file should be avoided
• Businesslike language( courteous even if
disagreeing)
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GUIDELINES , continued…….
• Remarks recorded by Branch officer or
senior officers on receipt should first be
reproduced while docketing the receipt
• Confine note to actual points proposes to
make and not repeat or reiterate the ground
already covered
• If agrees to line of action already suggested
merely append signature
• Sectional note in case PUC raised several
points requiring examination and orders
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GUIDELINES , continued…….
• A self contained summary be put up with every
file put up to a Minister /very senior officers and
also the points on which orders are sought
• Dealing hand to append signature with date on left
below note
• An officer will append signature on right with
name designation and date
• Paragraphs of convenient size, serially numbered
and may have brief titles
• Leave 1 inch margin on all sides
• Always keeps a courtsy sheet
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Noting – Some Must Points
Note Sheet
File #, Subject, Section
Page Numbering
Docketing
No paraphrasing
Concluding paragraph
Signatures & Marking
‘From pre page’ / Courtesy Sheet
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Can we write a Note without learning its structure and language ?
A functional approach to writing a note suggests that we should be very particular about both structure and language of a note. For that, we should be able to identify common faults in noting, determine quantum of noting according to the nature of a case and edit our writing to make it brief, to-the-point and meaningful.
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LANGUAGE – SOME SAMPLES
o Yesterday there was a discussion on eve teasing in the Director’s room.
o She is a person who does an excellent job as a programmer.
o The new building of ISTM at Tughlakabad has now been completed and we have asked the DTC for regular bus services from its main terminals.
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LANGUAGE – SOME SAMPLES o It may be pertinent to point out at this
juncture that the discrepancy that exists in our planning is………….
o The trouble with the new form is that it was designed in a far from proper manner in the first place.
o The reason the attendance figure is so low today is due to the fact that the DTC has followed the practice of keeping the buses off road to avoid confrontation with its agitating employees.
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PROCESSING STEPS
FILING
DOCKETING
NOTING
REFERENCING
SUBMISSION
DECISION
DRAFTING
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QUANTUM OF NOTING
STRATEGIC/POLICY/PLANNING MAXIMUM
PROBLEM SOLVING MAXIMUM
ACTION-IN-
CORRESPONDENCE
MINIMUM
ROUTINE & REPETITIVE STANDARD
PROCESS
SHEET
EPHEMERAL NIL
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Structure of a Note
BACKGROUND
(Where are we?) FACTS
PROBLEM ANALYSIS
(Why this situation?) BRING OUT ALL POSSIBLE ISSUES
SUGGESTIONS
(How to overcome?)
IMPLEMENTABLE SOLUTIONS
OPTIONAL
OBLIGATORY
DECISION
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Noting Skills - Commands
Introduce :: Issue / Background
Check up :: Facts
Supply :: Missing Facts
Refer to :: Rules / Regulations
Quote :: Precedents
Suggest :: Alternatives
Assess :: Implications
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NOTING ON FILES FROM
OTHER DEPARTMENTS
• If reference require factual info or action
based on clear precedents dealing hand may
record a note
• If reference need opinion /ruling/
concurrence examination on shadow file
and final decision recorded
• Copy of note recorded retained with shadow
file
• ID note will bear shadow file no
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STATEMENT OF CASE
• Brief heading
• Chronological facts of case
• If concern other dept., recommendation of
other dept/and in case of disagreement , the
point of diference
• Concluding paragraph –point on which
decision sought
• If lengthy –relegate to appendix /annexure
• Appendix/annexure to be linked
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REFERENCING
• Each page in each part be consecutively numbered in pencil
• Each item assigned a separate serial no displayed in red ink on first page
• Flag ‘PUC’ and latest fresh receipt as ‘FR’
• In referring to PUC or FR page no be quoted in margin
• Recorded file be flagged with alphabetic slip. Only one such slip.If more than one the relevant page no to be given
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REFERENCING, continued……
• To facilitate identification of such papers, the no. of file referred to/relevant page no/ with alphabetic slip no be indicated in the margin
• Rules referred need not be put up and this fact be indicated in the margin of noting
• When a no of papers are to be flagged they should be spread over entire width
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ARRANGEMENT OF PAPERS FOR SUBMISSION
REFERENCE BOOKS
NOTES PORTION
RUNNING SUMMARY
DRAFT
CORRESPONDENCE PORTION
APPX. TO NOTES / CORRESPONDENCE
STANDARD GUARD FILE/ STG NOTE/
REFERENCE FOLDER
EXTRACTS FROM GAZETTE
LINKED FILES
ROUTINE NOTES & PAPERS
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12 F.No.A.33083/ 1/…
S.No.17(R) Pg. No.22/C
“ Link-up the minutes
of the previous meeting
and consult DoPT”
Sd/-
(Jafar Ali)
DS(A)
5.5.05
This relates to creation of
a post of Agricultural Scientist
at ICAR.
2. Minutes of the previous
meeting are linked - up.
A self contained I.D. Note is
put up for approval, please.
Pg 10
-12/C
S.No.17(R) 22
New Delhi
Dated -- -- --
Secretary
DARE
Subject :----
Sir,
This is to bring to your
kind notice that ….
--……etc. etc.
(Dr.M Mahadevan)
Scientific Advisor
Link-up the minutes of the
Previous meeting and Consult DOPT DS(A)
No.F.42-34/2005-TKM
Govt. of India
Office of the PSA
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DRFTING PRINCIPLES &
TECHNIQUES
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OBJECTIVES
• TO BE ABLE TO :
- MAKE A SYSTEMATIC APPROACH
TOWARDS DRAFTING.
- DESCRIBE VARIOUS FORMS OF
COMMUNICATION & THEIR
TARGET GROUPS.
- MAKE A DRAFT EFFECTIVE.
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WHAT IS A DRAFT ?
A rough sketch of a communication to be
issued after approval by the officer.
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Searching questions before
Drafting
• Is a draft necessary?
• Who should be addressed & who will sign?
• What is the relationship?
• What should be the form?
• What is the intention of the decision?
• What details to call for?
• Should a proforma be prescribed?
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Prescribed in MOP, Appendix 9
• Letter
• D.O.Letter
• O.M.
• I.D.Note
• Telegram
• Office Order
• Order
• Resolution
• Notification
• Press Communique/
Note
• Endorsement
• Circular
• Advertisement
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FORMS OF COMMUNICATION
TARGET GROUPS
• LETTER: (I) FOREIGN GOVTS.
(II) STATE GOVTS.
(III) HEADS OF ATTACHED /SUBORDINATE OFFICES
(IV) STATUTORY AUTHORITIES
(V) PUBLIC ENTERPRISES
(VI) PUBLIC BODIES
(VII) MEMBERS OF PUBLIC
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• D.O. LETTER: (I) ANOTHER GOVT.
OFFICER FOR PERSONAL
ATTENTION
(II) NON OFFICIAL
• OFFICE MEMORANDUM:
(I) INTER DEPARTMENTAL
(II) WITH GOVT. EMPLOYEES
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• I.D. NOTE: (I) TO OBTAIN, ADVICE,
VIEWS, CONCURRENCE,
COMMENT
(II) TO SEEK
CLARIFICATION
• OFFICE ORDER:
OFFICERS/SECTIONS WITHIN DEPTT.
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• ORDER: (I) FINANCIAL SANCTIONS
(II) DISCIPLINARY CASES
• NOTIFICATION:
(I) STATUTORY
RULES/ORDERS
(II) APPOINTMENTS/
PROMOTIONS
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• RESOLUTION: PUBLIC ANNOUNCEMENT
OF IMPORTANT GOVT.
DECISIONS
• PRESS NOTE/COMMUNIQUE: WIDE
PUBLICITY TO GOVT.
DECISION THROUGH MEDIA
• TELEGRAM: ENCLAIR
CYPHER
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• TELEFAX
• CIRCULAR
• ENDORSEMENT
• ADVERTISEMENT
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DRAFTING
LANGUAGE
• PRECISE & UNAMBIGUOUS
• COMMON TERMINOLOGY
• DO NOT INCLUDE ANYTHING MORE THAN
NECESSARY
BASIC REQUIREMENT
• CLARITY OF CONTENTS
• BREVITY
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LANGUAGE – COMMON
DEFECTS
• DISORDERLY ARRANGEMENTS
• INSINUATIONS
• MISSING IDEAS/MISSING CONNECTIONS
• PADDINGS
• LENGTH OF A SENTENCE
I) FOG INDEX
II) ONE IDEA IN ONE SENTENCE
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DISORDERLY
ARRANGEMENT
• THE OFFICIAL STATEMENT ON THE
MARRIAGES OF REFORMED PRISONERS
WITH THE INMATES OF THE NARI
NIKETAN, HELD IN THE JAIL COMPOUND,
IN THE LOK SABHA MADE IT VERY
CLEAR…………
• A DISCUSSION WAS HELD ON EVE-
TEASING IN THE MANAGING DIRECTOR’S
CHAMBER
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INSINUATIONS
IT IS VERY SURPRISING AND
EXTREMELY PAINFUL TO NOTE
THAT DESPITE THERE BEING FIVE
REMINDERS NO INFORMATION HAS
YET BEEN FURNISHED.
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MISSISNG IDEA
F.R. IS A REFERENCE FROM EXECUTIVE
ENGINER (CIVIL) CPWD. THEY HAVE
ACCEPTD OUR REQUEST TO UNDERTAKE
CIVIL REPAIR WORKS FROM THE NEXT
WEEK. COORDINATION WING HAS
ALREADY ISSUED DIRECTIONS FOR NOT
ACCEPTING NOMINATIONS OF OUT-
STATION APPLICANTS
SUBMITTED FOR INFORMATION PLEASE.
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PADDINGS
1. I AM FURTHER TO POINT OUT…….
2. I WOULD ALSO LIKE TO ADD THAT….
3. MOREOVER, YOU WILL ALSO OBSERVE THAT ………
4. THE QUESTION IS UNDER ACTIVE CONSIDERATION.
5. IT IS AN ESSENTIAL CONDITION.
6. THE BOARD HAS EXAMINED OUR REQUEST. THEY ARE PREPARED TO ALLOCATE TWO ACRES OF LAND TO US.
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AN EFFECTIVE
COMMUNICATION SHOULD
• IDENTIFY SENDER;
• ADOPT RIGHT FORM;
• VISUALIZE RESPONSE;
• AVOID REDUNDANCY/VERBOSITY/
REPETITION;
• STEER CLEAR OF CIRCUMLOCUTION;
• BE UNIFORM & CONSISTENT; AND
• ADD A SUMMARY IF LENGHTY & COMPLEX.
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