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Minimal

Level 110 – 23

marks

Basic

Level

224–

35

mark 

s

ProfciencyLevel 336–47 marks

ExcellenceLevel 448–60 marks

framing a shot, including

and excluding elements

as appropriate

47 – The shots

across the

magazine are

framed well and

elements are

used

appropriately.

using a

variety of

shotdistances as

appropriate

45 – There is a variation

in shot sizes extendingfrom a medium close up

through to a long two

shot which allows for

variation and appeal.

shooting

material

appropriate to

the task set

! – "hilst it isn#t $uite

clear what genre of music

this magazine is

supposed to %e& the

images look appropriate

for a music magazine.

selecting

mise'en'

sc(ne

including

colour, )gure,

lighting,

o%*ects and

setting

+ – The mise en scene in

terms of costume and

makeup work well and the

lighting is very eective.

-owever, the image on

the contents page looks

slightly odd as the girls

clothes don#t look right as

she looks like she is

wearing stockings whichisn#t appropriate or

relevant.

manipulating

photographs

as

appropriate to

the context

for

presentation,

including

cropping andresizing

! – ropping and

resizing has %een done

well and the images have

%een well placed.

-owever, the image on

the contents page looks

slightly too %ig.

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accurately

using

language and

register

; – anguage and

register is mostly used

accurately.

appropriately

integrating

illustration

and text

; – 2llustrations and text

have %een integrated wellapart from the image on

the dou%le as the text

%lends in with the image

%ehind it.

showing

understandin

g of

conventions

of layout and

page design

49 – nderstanding of

page layout and design is

appropriate and

consistent throughout the

magazine.

showing

awareness of

the need for

variety in

fonts and text

size

49 – <ariety in fonts and

text sizes has %een used

eectively and

appropriately.

using 2T

appropriately

for the task

set

4 – 2T has %een

correctly and eectively

to complete this task.

Maa!ine "i#le$ %&'E

'(mmary )ommen#$

2n summary this magazine has %een made well, however the image placements

and size could have %een %etter thought out.

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