Author’s Name:_______________________Editor’s Name: _______________________

Date: ________ Per ____

Peer EditPLEASE MAKE SURE THAT YOU HIGHLIGHT YOUR PAPER ACCORDINGLY:

PINK – lead insYELLOW - quotes

BLUE- commentaryUNDERLINE – topic sentence

CIRCLE- transitions

1. Do they have a catchy title? Give one suggestion for a better title:

2. What kind of hook do they use? Write it below:

3. Did they use “I” or “You”? (Cause they shouldn't have)

4. Does it [hook] make you want to continue reading the paper? Any suggestions?

5. What is their main point? WRITE OUT THEIR THESIS BELOW.

Write out their three main points:a. b. c.

6. Word choice – do they need to step up the vocabulary?

7. Is it written in PRESENT TENSE?

8. Transitions: How well does their paper flow from one idea to another? Is it well organized? Any suggestions?

9. Do they vary their sentences from long to short?

10. Does the conclusion bring you full circle? Any suggestions?

a. How well does the author state THEIR opinion?

11. What is one strength in this paper?

12. What is one thing that needs work or was unclear?

DRAFT 1 2 FINAL