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HOW TO ASSESS WRITING PART 1 FOR PET Exercise 1 You have had an accident and can’t go to your friend’s party. Write a card to him/her. In your card, you should: -describe how the accident happened -say how you are now -suggest when you could meet again WORDS: ____ POINTS COVERED: _____ MARK: _____ ...Dear Tommy, I realy sorry that I can’t take part your party tonight. Yesterday, I fall off ladder when I was fixing the neon light. Fortune no problem wasn’t very damage even though I was very hurt. Doctor Paul said that rest in bed for few days. Hope I can see you Monday. Dinh. Exercise 2 You have a party, write a card to your English friend Belinda. You should: -explain why you’re having the party. -tell her when and where it is. -say who will be there. WORDS: ____ POINTS COVERED: _____ MARK: _____ ...Hi Belinda, My family is organizing my sister’s engagement ceremony at 9.00 a.m. on 7 May. Guests are consisting of our relatives and our best friends. Would you like to come? We’ll be happier with your appearance. Best regards, Dinh. Exercise 3. You are going to move to a new home. Write a card to your English friend, Carl. You should: -describe your new house -say when you are moving -invite Carl to visit WORDS: ____ POINTS COVERED: _____ MARK: _____ ...Carl, On Saturday, I want to a new house. I like beautiful views of lake in a quiet countryside, away from the city centre. What about you? Write to me soon. Kind regards, Dinh. Exercise 4.

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Page 1: Pet Model Answers for Assessment

HOW TO ASSESS WRITING PART 1 FOR PET

Exercise 1You have had an accident and can’t go to your friend’s party. Write a card to him/her. In your card, you should:-describe how the accident happened-say how you are now-suggest when you could meet again

WORDS: ____ POINTS COVERED: _____ MARK: _____...Dear Tommy,I realy sorry that I can’t take part your party tonight. Yesterday, I fall off ladder when I was fixing the neon light. Fortune no problem wasn’t very damage even though I was very hurt. Doctor Paul said that rest in bed for few days. Hope I can see you Monday.Dinh.

Exercise 2You have a party, write a card to your English friend Belinda. You should:-explain why you’re having the party.-tell her when and where it is.-say who will be there.

WORDS: ____ POINTS COVERED: _____ MARK: _____...Hi Belinda,My family is organizing my sister’s engagement ceremony at 9.00 a.m. on 7 May. Guests are consisting of our relatives and our best friends. Would you like to come? We’ll be happier with your appearance.Best regards,Dinh.

Exercise 3.You are going to move to a new home. Write a card to your English friend, Carl. You should:-describe your new house-say when you are moving-invite Carl to visit

WORDS: ____ POINTS COVERED: _____ MARK: _____...Carl,On Saturday, I want to a new house. I like beautiful views of lake in a quiet countryside, away from the city centre. What about you?Write to me soon.Kind regards,Dinh.

Exercise 4.You have recently a new hobby. Write an email your English friend, Tim. You should:-tell him what your new hobby is-say why you enjoy it-suggest a time and place to meet...

WORDS: ____ POINTS COVERED: _____ MARK: _____

What you think about life sientist famous are extremely interestingwe can learn many useful stuffs from them. I enjoy those in libraries, in science magazines. Dinh.

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HOW TO ASSESS WRITING PART 1 FOR PET

Exercise 5You are going to get a new pet. Write an email to your English friend, Alice. You should:-tell her what pet you are going to get-say why you choose it-suggest when you could meet

WORDS: ____ POINTS COVERED: _____ MARK: _____...Dear Alice,My aunt’s cat has got four extremely cute baby cats. And My aunt want to give me one as a gift. I am going to purchase the white one on Sunday. I firmly believe I am really attracted by their magnific eyes. And they look very lovely and very funny. Let go my house and see my new pet on Sunday evening. Perhaps, it’ll be of your interest when you see it.Cordially,Dinh.

Exercise 6.You visited your English friend, Sarah, last week. Write an email to Sarah. You should-thank her for having you-tell her about your journey home-suggest a time when she can visit you

WORDS: ____ POINTS COVERED: _____ MARK: _____...Sarah,I was really really happy and funny with staying four days at your house last week. Thank you for everything you gave to me.I returned to my home this morning. No trouble happended with me in whole my journey, excepted I was slightly tired because of the long trip. Now I feel better. This summer we haven’t go to school, so shall you visit me? The weather is always nice in my country in this season. Write to me if you can and if you not pleaase tell me when is good for you! I wish you the best.Cordialy,Dinh

GLOBAL ACHIEVMENT MARK SCHEME

All 3 elements covered appropriately.Message clearly communicated to the reader. 5 MARKS All content elements adequately dealt with.Message communicated successfully, on the whole. 4 MARKS

All content elements attempted.Message requires some effort by the reader. 3 MARKSOROne content element omitted but others clearly communicated

Two content elements omitted, or unsuccessfully dealt with.Message only partly communicated to reader.ORScript may be slightly short (20–25 words). 2 MARKS

Little relevant content and/or message requires excessive effort by the reader, or short (10–19 words). 1 MARK

Totally irrelevant or totally incomprehensible or too short (under 10 words). 0 MARKS