pingyang no. 2 vocational school catherine how to do proof-reading april 10th, 2007
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Now here are the weather report for our city. Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature 3 ℃ in the daytime. In the nights, the temperature will fell down below zero. The temperature will be - 8 ℃. The day before tomorrow, there will be the strong wind and the temperature will be low. It will fall down to - 10 ℃. You had better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a driver, you’d better be more carefully when you are driving because the strong windTRANSCRIPT
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Pingyang No. 2 Vocational School
Catherine
How to do Proof-reading
April 10th, 2007
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1.We all had a good time today.
2. I can return to school now.
3. I like playing piano.
4. I major at accounting.
the
Wrong word
∧Missing word
in
toUnnecessary
word
√right word
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Now here are the weather report for our city.
Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature
3 in the daytime. In the nights, the temperature℃
will fell down below zero. The temperature
will be - 8 . The day before tomorrow, there ℃
will be the strong wind and the temperature will
be low. It will fall down to - 10 . You had ℃
better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a
driver, you’d better be more carefully when
you are driving because the strong wind.
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3 steps of doing proof-reading
1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .( 浏览全文,掌握大意)2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes. (分句阅读,逐行找错)3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones.
(检查核对,攻克难点)
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项目年度 正确 多词 缺词 错词2004 1 1 0 82005 1 1 1 72006 1 1 1 7
改错命题改错命题统计统计
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年度介词
动词
形容词或副词代词
名词 连词
冠词
总计2004 1 2 1 1 1 1 2 92005 4 2 1 0 1 0 1 92006 1 3 2 1 1 1 0 9
错误类型统计测试点
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动词形,名词数.还要注意形和副.代词格,细领悟介词短语须关注.习惯用法要记住.冠词连词常光顾.
A Limerick
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At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
They put them in the corner of the sitting
room. Kate was covered it with a lot of
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
really beautifully at the moment. There was
a fire burning in the fire place, but the Chistmas
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his
parents singing and dancing happily.
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2006 高职考试题目链接
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3 steps1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .( 浏览全文,掌握大意)2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes. (分句阅读,逐行找错)3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones.
(检查核对,攻克难点)
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This passage is about______
A. Jim’s family.
B. Christmas lights.
C. How Jim’s family decorated the Christmas tree on Christmas Eve.
C
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At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
They put them in the corner of the sitting
room. Kate was covered it with a lot of
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
really beautifully at the moment. There was
a fire burning in the fire place, but the Chistmas
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his
parents singing and dancing happily.
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2.
3.
4.
5.
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8.
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10.
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At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
1._____
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
2._____
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
3._____
They put them in the corner of the sitting
4._____
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on
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chose
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tall
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it
动词形介词短语常常考,习惯用法要记住
还要注意形和副代词格,细领悟
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room. Kate was covered it with a lot of5._____Christmas light. The sitting room looked6. ____really beautifully at the moment. There was 7. ________a fire burning in the fire place, but the Chistmas8. ____tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his9. ____parents singing and dancing happily.10.____
\was\
_______
lights_____________
beautiful_____
and
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∧were
动词形
还要注意形和副
动词形
名词数
冠词连词须关注
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Four points that you should pay attention to
①标点符号不改 . ②大小写不改 . ③词序错误不改 . ④在纲外生词不改 ( 带汉语注释的词 ).
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Discussion
What did you learn from this lesson?
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1. He who makes no mistakes , makes nothing . 不犯错误的人必然一事无成。2. By ignorance we mistake, and by mistakes we learn . 吃一堑 长一智。3. A stupid person always tries to justify himself for his mistak
es; but a wise man tries his best to correct his errors.
愚蠢的人总是为自己的错误辩护,聪明的人则力求改正。4.Don't make the same mistake twice.
不要重复犯同样的错误。
Proverbs
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Homework
Finish the exercises
on the paper.
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Byebye!
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一、动词形 1. 动词的时态和语态错误 . 2. 主、谓不一致的错误。高考链接1:
When the air move, we have wind.moves
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二、名词数 指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。
高考链接 2 :We write to each other all the times. time
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三、还要注意形和副1.修饰名词, be 动词,系动词要用形容词2.修饰动词,形容词,过去分词,整个句子用副词3.比较级和最高级的使用
高考链接3:
It is still hardly for me to write in English. hard
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四、 代词格,细领悟1. 人称代词,物主代词的使用.2.反身代词 oneself 的使用.3.人称代词的主格和宾格.4.不定代词的使用.5. Both, all, either, neither, none 的使用 .6. Whose 和 who’s , its 和 it’s 的区别.高考链接4:I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English this term.
us
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五、介词短语须关注, 习惯用法要记住. 主要考查固定短语,固定介词的搭配。高考链接5:The man is sitting next his son.
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1 . 冠词 a, an 和 the 的用法错误. 2.连词 but , and , or, so 和 although 的用法错误.高考链接6:1.What a good news we’ve heard.
2. I’m sorry, and I won’t be able to come tonight .
but
六、冠词连词常光顾
a
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This passage is mainly about
_____________________________.the weather report in our city
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Now here are the weather report for our city.
Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature
3 in the daytime. In the nights, the temperature℃
will fell down below zero. The temperature
will be - 8 . The day before tomorrow, there ℃
will be the strong wind and the temperature will
be low. It will fall down to - 10 . You had ℃
better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a
driver, you’d better be more carefully when
you are driving because the strong wind.
1.
2.
3.
4.
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10.
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Now here are the weather report for our city.1. _____Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature2. _____3 in the daytime. In the evenings, the temperature℃3. ______will fell down below zero. The temperature 4. _____will be - 8 . The day before tomorrow, there℃5. _____
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evening
fall
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will be the strong wind and the temperature will6. ____be low. It will fall down to - 10 . You had ℃7. ____better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a 8. ____driver, you’d better be more carefully when9. ____ you are driving because the strong wind.10. ____
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