Georgiya JonesKieron DavisTom HallCharlotte AddisonHannah Dunn Harry Quarendon

I asked..

The following questions..

RATE THE VIDEO ON A SCALE ON 1 - 5 -4

-3-4-4-3-4

What do you like about my video?

- I like the opening sequence because it gives a positive feel to the documentary. It instantly grabbed my attention

- I like the music because it’s upbeat and happy

- I like the part where you are travelling, the sped up clips work really well

- The colour scheme

- I like the opening titles and music with it because it’s positive

- I really like the overall feel to it, it gives Autism a more positive representation. The documentary is also very informative

Does it look like a professional documentary?

Yes, good quality filmYeah

Kind ofYes

YeahYes

What improvements could you suggest?

- I think that the interview could be slightly shorter

- Making the words bolder at the beginning

- Perhaps having more footage of Darcy- You could make some of the transitions

smoother- Some of the titles could be made to

stand out more - You could put more clips of Darcy and

her brother in

Do you understand the narrative/my ideas?

- After looking at your blog and seeing that you want to raise the awareness of Autism I do. I think that your documentary would raise awareness of Autism well.

- Yes, it’s easily understandable and obvious.- Yeah- Yes, they’re obvious and clear- Yeah, there’s nothing not to understand- Yeah

From this Audience feedback, I have learnt that if I were to do it

again I would..

- Make the interview shorter- Put more clips of Darcy and

Harrison in- Make the on screen text more

visible and clear- Make the transitions smoother