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Copyright © 2009 by the Office of Letters and Light

100%awesome

workbooks.

We promise!

YOUNG WRITERS PROGRAM

THE SCRIPT FRENZYPRESENTS:PRESENTS:

HIGH SCHOOL

THESCRIPTWRITER

WORKBOOK

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Table of Contents

Introduction Letter 1

Inner Director Containment Button 2

What Makes a Script a Script? 3

Good Script, Bad Script 6

Casting Your Characters 9

- Character Questionnaire 12

Creating Conflict 15

Outlining Your Script 20

"Hollywood Formula" Worksheet 32

Writing Good Dialogue 42

Lights, Camera, Action! 49

Formatting Your Script 53

Script Frenzy Affidavit 57

Commitment Calendar 58

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Hello writer!

Congratulations. You did it. You’ve thrown caution to the wind, eradicated the word “impossible” from your vocabulary, and signed up to join thousands of other ambitious people just like you in writing an entire script in 30 days!

Even if you have no idea how to write a script, you can participate in Script Frenzy. We believe that if you love movies, plays, TV shows, or comic books, you can (and should) write them. All you’ll need this April is your imagination, determination, and something to write with.

This workbook will also come in really handy as you prepare for the Frenzy. It's designed to teach the tricks of the scriptwriting trade to even the most inexperienced scriptwriter. It will also help writers at all levels of experience create amazing casts of characters, come up with thrilling storylines, and outline blockbuster plots.

The only thing that this workbook won’t do is write your script for you. That is up to you, and we wish you the best of luck as you embark on your journey from your title page to “The End.” May you be blessed with a creative spirit, an ambitious heart, and a preposterous amount of caffeinated beverages.

Happy writing,

The Script Frenzy Team

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Inner Editor Containment ButtonBefore we get started, you're going to have to temporarily do away with your Inner Director. Who is your Inner Director? He is the nagging, no-fun beast you bring along with you on all your scriptwriting endeavors. The Inner Director sits on your shoulder and points out all the ways you could write your script differently. He points out every little mistake and second-guesses what your characters say and do. When the Inner Director is in a particularly nasty mood, he might try to tell you that your ideas will not work and you shouldn't even be allowed to put pen to paper. The Inner Director is very helpful to have around after your script is written, when it's time to revise and even create a real play or film from your script, but this pest can really stifle your creativity if you let him sit on your shoulder as you write your first draft!

No matter how ridiculous this might sound, close your eyes and imagine your Inner Director. Think about what he might look like. Is he chasing after you with a clapboard? Once you get a good picture in your head of what he looks like, open your eyes and push the button below.

Warning: Pushing the button will vacuum your Inner Director right out of your head until May 1. He'll be transported from your brain into an Inner Director Containment Cell, where we'll put him to use proofreading our Young Writers Program website. We have lots for him to do! And we promise that after Script Frenzy is over, we'll give him back to you (so you'll have him around to help out with your script rewrites).

Congratulations. Your Inner Director has been successfully contained. It's time to move on.

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What Makes a Script a Script?

What do plays, TV shows, movies, graphic novels, and comic books have in common? For one, all are stories told visually—either with movement, on stage or screen (plays, TV shows, and movies) or without movement, on paper (graphic novels and comic books). For another, they’re all based on scripts! But what is a script, exactly?

A script is a map or outline that a director/artist will use to make a movie, play, comic book, or television show. When someone writes a script, he or she can only write what the audience of the movie/play/TV show/comic can see (action and description) and hear (dialogue).

So that’s what all scripts have in common. But each script can be different, too. Stage plays, movie screenplays, TV scripts, and comic books each have special ingredients and special advantages.

Stage PlaysIf you’ve read any script in the past, chances are you’ve read a stage play. Many stage plays are divided into three “acts,” or big sections. Romeo and Juliet is one stage play you may have read or heard about.

Writing a stage play is wonderful because you don't need much to bring it to life. You can write one, grab a few classmates, and perform it just like that. You can ask the drama department at your school to produce part or all of your play. It can easily be performed over and over by different groups of actors, giving it a whole new life each time.

But having few props, effects, and scenes limits what you can do in a play. Showing a whole rock concert or a rocket launch, for example, could be difficult. Because building sets can be expensive, many stage plays use little background decoration and few scene changes. Sometimes an entire play is set in a couple rooms, much like a TV sitcom. As with TV, when there are very few visuals and only a handful of characters, the dialogue really has to be strong to carry the story.

On the other hand, having fewer scenes, props, and effects means you will write less description when you write a play. Plus, there will be fewer settings and scenes to keep track of!

Below, list some stage plays that you’ve seen (or read!) and liked:

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Screenplays “Screenplay” is just a fancy word for “script for a movie.” Like plays, movie screenplays are often written in three big acts. Writing a screenplay is wonderful because you can do all kinds of fantastic things in movies that are very hard to do on the stage. You can cover great distances in a second. You can jump through time and space. You can create a scene that takes place in a stadium with 10,000 roaring fans or on a battlefield with 2,000 soldiers. The sky's the limit. However, having so many options in a screenplay can be overwhelming. You'll likely have a ton of scenes, which can mean a lot of settings, scene changes, and characters to keep track of. Plus, like stage plays and graphic novels, you'll have to develop a plot that involves your protagonist facing challenges to reach his or her goals. By the end of the journey, your character has to change, whether or not he or she gets what he or she wanted. Coming up with a good plot with a character arc is necessary if you want the audience to walk away satisfied. The biggest challenge comes if you decide to bring your screenplay to life. You or someone you know will have to track down a camera and computer editing software. If you love movies though, don't let this scare you! Writing a movie, even if it never gets made, is still a great creative adventure. Besides, as you've no doubt seen on YouTube, anyone with a video camera can make a movie and put it out there for the world to see (and post sarcastic comments about). Below, list some movies you’ve seen (or read scripts for!) and liked:

TV Scripts, or “Teleplays” If you put a stage play and a screenplay in a blender on high speed, you’d get a TV script. Some TV shows are similar to movies in that they jump through space and time and have special effects. Others are more like stage plays in that they are filmed in very few locations, usually in front of a studio audience. This is the great thing about writing for television—there are so many choices! You can write an hour-long drama, sci-fi, or mystery show. You can write a 30-minute sitcom or cartoon. You can even write a script for a new episode of your favorite existing TV show. Plus, TV scripts' plots are usually less involved than those of most screenplays and plays. Though your characters usually go after something they want in each episode—whether it is solving a crime or getting a date with a girl or boy at school—it is usually not life changing! As a matter of fact, you don’t want your characters to change very much at all. The reason people keep watching a certain show is because they love the characters just the way they are. You might want your protagonist's ultimate goal to be more life-changing than getting a date—like saving the world from evil vampires—but if he or she does this in the first episode then you’ll have nothing to write about in the next.

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Writing for the small screen has other challenges. For example, TV shows have a lot of talking. Without suspense, action, and fancy effects, you’ll have to move the story forward and keep your audience's attention using a lot of really witty and quick dialogue. But don’t be discouraged. If you're like a lot of people, you already know a lot about television from watching it. And if you choose to write a TV script, you’ll have the perfect excuse to watch even more television. Below, list some TV shows you’ve seen (or read scripts for!) and liked:

Comic Book/Graphic Novel Scripts You may not know this, but you don’t have to be a talented artist to write comic books or graphic novels. Many begin with a script similar to those written for movies, plays, and TV shows; many of these scripts are not even written by the artist who ends up drawing them. Even if you are an artist, the first step in creating a comic book is writing the script.

The cool thing about writing a comic book or graphic novel is that you have a lot control over the product. Usually, you will either create the art yourself or work with another artist to create it. Not only do you get to decide on the characters, story, and dialogue, you get to decide what goes in each panel. That’s like a screenwriter getting to decide what goes in every shot of a movie, which is hardly ever the case.

A great thing about comic books in particular is that they’re pretty easy to produce. They're typically short, compared to graphic novels. That means that if you or someone you know is a good artist, you can draw the comic book after April and make copies for all your friends and family, or have it printed through a print-on-demand publisher. You can even take your new comic to a local independent bookstore to see if they will carry it along with comics and “zines” by other local writers!

But writing comic books and graphic novels isn’t as easy as it may seem. Like all writers, comic-book and graphic-novel writers have to think about character, plot, setting, and dialogue. You also have to think about all the elements of a story visually, frame-by-frame. You have to be the writer and the director, and you have to know both the story you want to tell and how it is going to look on the page. And graphic novels in particular tend to be lengthy and contain complex story lines, similar to those of novels. For all these reasons, creating a comic or graphic novel can take a lot of time and patience.

Below, list some comics you’ve read (or read scripts for!) and liked:

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Good Script, Bad ScriptOut of all the movies, TV shows, plays, and comics you’ve come across in your life so far, there were those that were ridiculously awesome and those that were as enjoyable as studying for the SATs. Before you start thinking about the script you’ll be writing this April, it’s helpful write down what, to you, makes a script “good” (intriguing, exciting, etc.) and what makes a script “bad” (painfully boring, stupid, etc.).

Good ScriptLet’s start by making a list of movies/TV shows/plays/comic books you love. The scripts you list here should be in line with the type of script you'll be writing in April. For example, if you’re writing a screenplay, then write down three of your favorite movies.

1. Title

2. Title

3. Title

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Now, write a list of things that made these movies/TV shows/plays/comic books so amazing. You can be as general or as detailed as you like; include anything from “believable and well-developed characters” to “righteous fight scenes = 80% of the movie.” If you get stuck, here are some questions to think about:

• Did the story have a message that really spoke to you? • Was there anything unique about the look of it, such as its artwork or special effects?

Once you have finished this list, keep it with you at all times during April. Why is this list so important? Because, as you might imagine, the things you like watching or reading are going to be things you are best at writing. As you write your script, refer to this list of ingredients, and consider adding them to your script whenever you're stuck for ideas or story directions.

Bad ScriptNow, make a list if all those movies/TV shows/plays/comic books that put you to sleep within minutes. Again, this list should depend on what kind of script you plan on writing. If you’re writing a TV script, then jot down three TV shows you’d rather eat sand than watch ever again.

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1. Title

2. Title

3. Title

Now, write a list of things that make these movies/TV shows/plays/comic books so horrible and boring. You can be as general or as detailed as you like; include anything from “cheesy dialogue” to “I don’t like TV shows staring talking French fries.” Again, here are some questions to think about:

• Did some of the characters seem unbelievable or stereotypical? Why? • Did the story seem like a "stretch"? Why? • What message do you think the people who made it were trying to send? Do you think that's a worthwhile message?

Just like the list of things you love in a script, keep this list with you at all times during April. It might seem strange to remind yourself of the things you dislike in scripts, but these items are experts in the art of ending up in your story without your permission.

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Casting Your Characters

Most people think that an exciting and well-developed plot is what makes a script good, but even the most intriguing plot won’t hold someone’s attention if the action is performed by flat, unoriginal characters.

Flat Characters vs. Original Characters

Flat character: Joe is 20 years old. He likes football and eats a lot of bacon.

Original Character: Tucker Wallace is the coolest nerd on Earth. This month, he’s been on the cover of Popular Science, Time, People, Cosmo, and GQ. He’s been a guest on Oprah, hosted Saturday Night Live, and has been offered a job at, literally, every pharmaceutical company in the world. One magazine deemed him the “most sought-after bachelor in the world,” while another claimed that his “discovery will change life as we know it forever.” While spending hours upon hours in a makeshift laboratory in his parents' basement as a boy, leaning over test tubes, pushing up his glasses, and wiping the sweat from his forehead, Tucker never thought his efforts would come to this. Never did he think he would be sitting where he is right now, under the bright lights in front of another live studio audience explaining how he feels now that he discovered the Fountain of Youth. What Tucker won’t tell the person interviewing him is that he is terrified. Terrified of being in the spotlight and even more terrified about some unexpected side-effects starting to appear in his patients."

Which movie would you rather watch? The one about Joe or the one about Tucker?

Not only are characters with hidden depths and secrets more fun to read about, they're also more fun to write about. Though you'll end up writing about a bunch of different people in your script next month, all of them will fall into one of three categories: the protagonist, the supporting characters, and the antagonist.

The Protagonist The protagonist has the starring role in your script. In most scripts, the protagonist is on a journey to get what he or she wants more than anything else in the world. Your protagonist could be after fame, revenge, or something much more elusive, like overcoming poverty or cancer.

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The Supporting Characters Supporting characters have an important role in your protagonist’s life. Some may be around for the protagonist’s entire journey, some for only part. Supporting characters can be friends, close relatives, or love interests—you name it. These characters also have dreams of their own, and their adventures will add even more excitement to your script.

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The Physical Antagonist A physical antagonist is a living, breathing character in a script that is standing in the way of the protagonist achieving his or her goal. This does not mean that all physical antagonists are evil monsters. Some antagonists stand in the way simply through jealousy, or misunderstanding, or by having a set of goals that conflicts with the protagonist’s. If Gavin is your protagonist and he wants to take Kim to the dance, but Chet asked her first, this doesn't mean Chet is a “bad guy.” He's just another guy who likes the same girl. Then again, there are those antagonists that are just plain evil. It's up to you to decide who's going to stand in your protagonist's way, and how he or she is going to do it. OR The Abstract Antagonist Though a lot of antagonists are living, breathing beings, some are not. Some protagonists face off against illness, grief, or the powers of a corrupt government. We like to call these kinds of antagonists abstract antagonists because they don't take actual physical form. If your script’s antagonist is not a living person/animal/entity, you have an abstract antagonist. It may be easier think of it this way: if your protagonist cannot physically kick your antagonist in the knee, he or she is probably abstract.

Physical Antagonist A racist or intolerant character

A character who is working to make sure your protagonist lives a poverty-stricken life

A character who is forcing your character to struggle against nature (e.g. someone who has left your character stranded in Antarctica)

A character whose religious beliefs oppress your protagonist

A government official such as a dictator who has it in for your protagonist

Your protagonist's evil boss

A character whose sole mission is to make sure your protagonist becomes ill (e.g. through poisoning or exposure to a deadly disease)

Abstract Antagonist Racism/intolerance in a community or in general

Poverty or the economy in a community or in general

Nature as an entity (e.g. a natural disaster or an extreme climate) A religion or all religions A corrupt government A corporation/company

Disease/illness in general

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It's a great idea for you, the author, to try and get to know your characters before you begin writing. We asked a team of scientists, mathematicians, and creative writing gurus from around the world, "What's the easiest way for writers to get to know their characters?" Hands down, the experts all agreed the single best way is to fill out a Character Questionnaire for all your characters.

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Character QuestionnaireIn your notebook, answer the questions in this questionnaire about your characters.

Section One: Core Character Questions Complete Section One for every character in your book. If you have an abstract antagonist, try to answer as many questions as you can from this section for them then move on to Section Four.

Section Two: Questions for Your Supporting Characters Complete Section Two just for your supporting characters.

Section Three: Questions for a Physical Antagonist Complete Section Three if you have a physical antagonist. OR Section Four: Questions for an Abstract Antagonist Complete Section Four if you have an abstract antagonist.

Section One: Complete this section for all your characters!

1. Name:

2. Age:

3. Height:

4. Eye color:

5. Physical appearance:

6. Strange or unique physical attributes:

7. Favorite clothing style/outfit:

8. Where does he or she live? What is it like there?

9. Defining gestures/movements (i.e., curling his or her lip when he or she speaks, always keeping his or her eyes on the ground, etc.):

10. Things about his or her appearance he or she would most like to change:

11. Speaking style (fast, talkative, monotone, etc.):

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12. Pet peeves:

13. Fondest memory:

14. Hobbies/interests:

15. Special skills/abilities:

16. Insecurities:

17. Quirks/eccentricities:

18. Temperament (easygoing, easily angered, etc.):

19. Negative traits:

20. Things that upset him or her:

21. Things that embarrass him or her:

22. Things this character really cares about:

23. Any phobias?

24. Things that make him or her happy:

25. Family (describe):

26. Deepest, darkest secret:

27. Reason he or she kept this secret for so long:

28. Other people's opinions of this character (What do people like about this character? What do they dislike about this character?):

29. Favorite bands/songs/type of music:

30. Favorite movies:

31. Favorite TV shows:

32. Favorite foods:

33. Favorite sports/sports teams:

34. Political views:

35. Religion/philosophy:

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36. Dream vacation:

37. Description of his or her house:

48. Description of his or her bedroom:

39. Any pets?

40. Best thing that has ever happened to this character:

41. Worst thing that has ever happened to this character:

42. Superstitions:

43. Three words to describe this character:

44. If a song played every time this character walked into the room, what song would it be?

Section Two: Supporting Character Questions1. Relationship to the protagonist:

2. Character's favorite thing about the protagonist:

3. Similarities to protagonist:

4. Differences from protagonist:

Section Three: Antagonist Questions1. Why is he or she facing off against the protagonist?

2. Any likeable traits?

3. Weaknesses:

Section Four: Abstract Antagonist1. What is your abstract antagonist? Is it a disease like cancer, a social ill like poverty, or something larger than life, like grief?

2. How is this antagonist affecting the protagonist?

3. Do other characters notice? How does this antagonist affect the other people in your script?

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Creating Conflict

Ok, so you know who your characters are. Excellent. Now it is time to figure out what your characters are going to do. Most scripts are ultimately about the same thing—the journey a protagonist goes on to get what he or she wants. Whether his or her goal is to get the girl or save the world, the journey is never easy, and your character will encounter many setbacks along the way. Though they’re painful for your protagonist, these obstacles are what will make your script exciting to read.

Imagine a story about a guy named Gavin who wants to take Kim to the prom more than anything in the world. How boring (and short) would the story be if Gavin just went ahead and called Kim up, asked her to prom, and got the answer he was hoping for? What if Gavin is the shy nerdy type and has a serious fear of talking to girls, and he has to convince Kim that she should go with him instead of Chet, her current date and the captain of the football team? Now, that’s a story!

That story has both external conflict and internal conflict.

External Conflict The external conflict is the one between a protagonist and antagonist. In the above story, the protagonist (Gavin) has a goal (to take Kim to the prom), but a motivated antagonist (Chet) has his own agenda (to also take Kim to the prom). The struggle between Gavin and Chet over Kim is the external conflict in this story.

Internal Conflict The internal conflicts are the fears and insecurities that a protagonist has to overcome in order to get what he or she wants. In the story above, Gavin has to overcome his fear of talking to girls in order to convince Kim to go to the prom with him instead of Chet.

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If you have completed the questionnaires for all your characters, you already know a good amount about the major players in your script. Now it’s time to answer some deeper questions about your characters’ hopes and fears in order to create the conflicts that will make your script interesting.

Take out and review your character questionnaires, then fill in the blanks below.

Your Protagonist

More than anything in the world, my protagonist wants:

But he/she is afraid of:

And his/her greatest weakness (is it something like dishonesty or shopping?):

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Physical Antagonist

Complete this section if you have a physical antagonist.

More than anything in the world, my antagonist wants (this can be as simple as humiliating the protagonist, or something a little more ambitious like world domination):

My antagonist’s “beef” with the protagonist is:

My antagonist is afraid of:

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His/her greatest weakness is:

Abstract Antagonist

Complete this section if you have an abstract antagonist.

The antagonist in my script is not a living, breathing being. It is

If my protagonist does not battle against this antagonist, it will eventually (ruin his or her life or cause death?)

My protagonist is battling against this antagonist by:

Congratulations! You now have the two basic ingredients for an excellent story: external conflict and internal conflict. Know that your internal and external conflicts will overlap throughout your novel. Once your characters find out about each others’ fears and weaknesses, you better believe they will use them against each other mercilessly as they fight to make their dreams come true.

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Bonus Challenge: Ask Me About My Logline

Now that you know the basic story of your script, we challenge you to write your logline. A good logline should tell the story of your script in less time that it takes to eat a mini-cupcake.

Write your logline below.

Even if you’re not writing a screenplay, it’s good to have a short summary of your script’s storyline. We suggest that you write this logline on a sticky note and stick it to your computer screen or on your desk. It will help keep you focused on the big picture—what your script is ultimately all about.

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Logline: a one-sentence, "25 words or less" description of a screenplay.

It should have a clear beginning, middle, and end, and will usually start by introducing the main character like so:

The president of the chess club...

Then describing the character’s journey:

joins the football team hoping to impress a girl...

And finishes by summarizing the story’s outcome without giving away the ending:

...only to find that what works on the chess board doesn’t necessarily work on the football field ... or

in the game of love.

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Outlining Your ScriptNow that your story has conflict and a catchy logline, you probably have an idea of what is going to happen in your script this April. You may know what kind of journey your protagonist will undertake, and you know what will stand in his or her way. Now it's time to take the next step and map out how everything is going to happen.

Writing an entire script from beginning to end may seem pretty daunting, but it is not as hard as you think once you have a plan. Trust us. Most stories have the same structure, and they break down into the same six sections that make up a plot. See the diagram below.

This diagram may look familiar to you. It is most commonly in the shape of an inverted checkmark, but we think a plot rollercoaster is much more fun than a checkmark, so we're going with that.

Even if this is stuff you already know from English class, read all the sections below carefully before you move on to map out your own plot.

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The Set-Up

What kind of rollercoaster are we getting on?Though some scripts begin with an “inciting incident”—which you will read about in just a second—many of them start by telling the reader a little bit about the characters, the setting, and the conflict before jumping into the action. Just like you'd want to know what kind of rollercoaster you're getting on before waiting in line, a movie executive might want know what kind of script he or she is about read before reading the whole thing.

Here is an example of a story’s set-up:

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INT. BORIS’ BEDROOM - DAY

BORIS’ mohawk bobs up and down as he a plays guitar in his room filled with ROCK BAND POSTERS, GUITAR MAGAZINES, and many different GUITARS, AMPS, and GADGETS. His mom, WILMA, walks into his room with a plate of UNCOOKED POP-TARTS. BORIS swings his GUITAR behind his back.

BORIS Mom, I’m SO over it!

WILMA Over what? What does that even mean?

BORIS Everything. I am bored with everything.

WILMA I don’t understand you at all, little man. You have every guitar and guitar gadget in the world! What else do you need?

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Okay, that was a good set up. We have been introduced to the protagonist and the story’s main conflicts: Boris wants to join a rock band and travel the world, but he has crippling stage fright (internal conflict). Plus, it has been hinted that Mr. Van Carnage is also going to pose a problem for Boris (external conflict).

The Inciting Incident

Getting on the rollercoaster.The inciting incident launches your protagonist into the adventure whether he or she is ready or not. It can be a pretty scary moment for your main character. Once it happens, there's no turning back.

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BORIS shoves a POP-TART in his mouth.

BORIS How many times do I have to tell you to stop calling me “little man?” I’m 18! I’m way too old to be sitting in my bedroom like a loser. I want to be in a band. I want to travel the world...

WILMA Why don’t you try out for that new reality TV show, So You Think You Can Rock?! I hear auditions are coming to Detroit next weekend, and the grand prize is a two-million dollar contract with Sony Records.

BORIS Yeah right! I’d pass out cold in front of an audience that big. And that judge, Billy Van Carnage, is a total jerk. I get nervous just thinking about him.

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Here is the inciting incident that happens in this story:

If an inciting incident never happened, Boris would more than likely continue to eat outdated breakfast pastries and play guitar alone in his bedroom. This might sound like a pretty fun life to live, but it is not a very fun life to watch.

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INT. GUITAR CENTER – NIGHT

BORIS is looking at a STRATOCASTER when he sees ABIGAIL at the counter. BORIS ducks behind a DRUM SET, but it’s too late. He’s been spotted.

ABIGAIL That guitar you were looking at is pretty awesome. You should get it. It matches your shirt.

BORIS (Stammering) Yeah, totally.

ABIGAIL So guess what? My band is trying out for So You Think You Can Rock?! this weekend.

BORIS You’re so cool. I mean, that’s so cool.

ABIGAIL And I am so glad I ran into you. Our lead guitarist is MIA, and we’re totally freaking out. If he doesn’t show by this weekend, will you fill in for the tryout?

BORIS Wow . . .

ABIGAIL I’ll take that as a yes. I’ll be at your place at 8 AM sharp Saturday.

ABIGAIL hands BORIS a CD.

ABIGAIL Just make sure you know the solo on the first track. See ya Saturday!

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Rising Action

Climbing the big hill.This will be the longest section of your script. You will develop your characters, deepen their relationships with one another, and lay out everything that happens to them before the climax. Think of the rising action as the biggest hill on the rollercoaster—the higher you go, the more suspenseful it gets. The rising action is made up of many events, each of them building to the most exciting part of your story.

Here is a summary of some of the rising action in this story: 1. Abigail pulls up outside in her beat-up Volkswagen Jetta and Boris–trying not to look back to his room where his guitars, amps, and pedals are looking sad and deserted–says goodbye to his mom. Abigail honks until Boris finally hugs his mom, grabs his vintage Fender Jaguar and runs out the door.

2. As soon as they arrive at the auditions, Boris starts to get nervous. He can barely talk to people, but Abigail and the other two band members, Zach (the drummer) and Megan (the bassist), do all the talking. Though Boris is nervous about getting on stage, he finds himself becoming more and more comfortable around Abigail. She is unlike any other girl he has ever met. And she seems to like him.

3. When it’s time for Crude Medicine to get up in front of the judges to play, Boris can hardly see straight. Boris knows the song like the back of his hand, so all he has to worry about is not throwing up or passing out. Boris makes it all the way through the song just fine, and Abigail sings lead and nails it. All the judges are blown away, except one. Billy Van Carnage comments that chick singers are totally "last year" and that the greenish tinge to Boris' skin during their performance was making him nervous. But the rest of the judges outvote him. Crude Medicine is on its way to stardom.

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4. Crude Medicine makes it all the way to the final episode and each performance gets easier for Boris. Boris figures they are going to win, and spends less time worrying about impressing the judges and more time daydreaming about all the ways to spend his part of the prize money—a six-month tropical vacation with Abigail, a new house for his mom, or maybe a large donation to a local music school for urban kids. Losing, at this point, is not an option.

The Climax

The top of the rollercoaster.This is the moment at the very top of the rollercoaster, right before your high-speed drop. This moment doesn’t last long, and neither does the climax in your script. It can be as short as a couple scenes—just enough to make your readers hold their breath in suspense and ask, “What’s going to happen next?!”

Here is an example of a climax:

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INT. SO YOU THINK YOU CAN ROCK!? AMPHITHEATER – NIGHT

The members of Crude Medicine run on stage in their new matching ORANGE JUMPSUITS and WHITE SUNGLASSES. The audience cheers. ZACH counts them in with a few clicks of his DRUMSTICKS.

They begin to play, but all the INSTRUMENTS are out of tune, including the MICROPHONE. Within seconds, they are booed off stage.

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The Falling Action

The high-speed drop.The falling action is what happens next. It is the fast-paced, action-packed part of your script. You’re finally speeding down the tracks of the rollercoaster with your hands in the air! Does the antagonist get defeated? Do the protagonist’s dreams finally come true? If so, how?

Here is an example of falling action

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INT. SO YOU THINK YOU CAN ROCK!? JUDGES TABLE – NIGHT

The judges sit around a table. BILLY has a huge smile on his face.

GILL I just don’t get it. They were doing so well.

BILLY I told you that chicks can’t rock.

A STAGE HAND runs up to the judges table with a DVD in his hand. Without saying a word, he pops it in the PLAYER. The DVD is of BILLY, messing with the band’s equipment before the show.

BILLY It’s not what it looks like . . .

Before BILLY could say another word, two beefy SECURITY GUARDS come in and drag BILLY out of the room.

CUT TO:

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The Resolution

Getting off the rollercoaster.The resolution is how things work out in the very end, after your protagonist gets (or doesn’t get) what he or she wants. It has been said by creative writing sages that your characters—especially your protagonist—must change over the course of the script. This change happens gradually as your character battles his or her fears, defeats villains, and forges friendships and relationships with a cast of amazing characters. All of these adventures will end up changing the way your main character sees the world and his or her place in it. Try to use the final scenes to highlight those changes.

An example of a resolution:

INT. SO YOU THINK YOU CAN ROCK!? STAGE – NIGHT

CRUDE MEDECINE takes the stage once again. This time they nail the song and the crowd cheers.

CUT TO:

INT. SO YOU THINK YOU CAN ROCK!? STAGE – MINUTES LATER

GILL We are proud to announce that the winner of the 2009 season of So You Think You Can Rock!? is Crude Medicine!

INT. SPORTS ARENA - NIGHT

Crude Medicine is playing to an arena full of rabid fans.

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Now it’s your turn to create your plot. Take out your notebook and answer the following questions. We promise that if you do, writing your script will be ten times easier in April. You don’t have to describe everything that will happen in your script here. This is just to help you get an idea about what will happen in the beginning, middle, and end of your script.

1. Describe your set-up:

In one to two paragraphs, describe a scene that introduces your characters, your setting, and the main conflicts in your story. You may want to review your conflict worksheet before you do this.

2. Describe your inciting incident:

In one paragraph, describe the event that causes your protagonist to begin his or her adventure.

3. Describe some of your rising action:

Write a list of five events that build up to the climax of your script. Don’t forget to include all of your supporting characters.

4. Describe your climax:

In one paragraph, describe what will happen in the climax of your script.

5. Describe your falling action:

In one to two paragraphs, describe what happens after the climax. Does your protagonist get what he or she wants? Does the antagonist get defeated? How?

6. Describe your resolution:

In one to two paragraphs, describe how everything works out in the very end. Remember to show how your characters changed because of their journey.

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BORIS Hello Detroit! It is good to be home!

ABIGAIL and BORIS kiss and the fans scream.

ABIGAIL All right, enough of that. Let’s rock!

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FINAL NOTE ON PLOT!

As you probably know, no two rollercoasters are the same. They all have different hills and drops, twists and turns, and loops and tunnels. The same goes for scripts. That is what makes them different and exciting. Sometimes they begin with the inciting incident or work backwards from the resolution to the beginning. Scripts are filled with flashbacks, flash-forwards, and unexpected plot twists. And scripts don’t have to have happy endings either. Just like life, sometimes things don’t work out exactly as planned. In April, experiment with the plot you create by thinking beyond the “typical one-hill rollercoaster” formula. Rearrange events, add some twists, and flip that resolution on its head. You’ll be surprised at how much this can energize your story.

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“Hollywood Formula” Worksheet

If you’ve decided to write a screenplay this April, you can use this worksheet to break your script down into even smaller sections than the ones you just learned about in the plot worksheet. You do not have to use this "formula," but it might be helpful if you're still not sure what to do with the characters you've created.

Screenplay writers use similar outlines to write their scripts, but it doesn’t mean that you have to. Many writers, however, feel that formulaic writing hinders their creative process. If that’s the case for you, you may wait to use this—if you use it at all—until after you’ve completed your first draft.

Note that this worksheet is modeled on a 100-page screenplay. If your page-count goal is less than 100 pages, you can break this down by percentage. We’ve included the percentages along with the page numbers, so you can write in the right page numbers for your script. For example, if your script is 60 pages long, the 10% mark will be page 6 (.10 multiplied by 60), the 25% mark will be page 15 (.25 multiplied by 60), and so on.

Script Title

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Opening Scene Page 1

The opening scene is an opportunity for you to give the audience the starting point of the protagonist’s journey. It can be an image of your protagonist, an important setting, a revealing conversation between characters, an object that is essential to the plot, etc. This should give your audience a “snapshot” of what the rest of your film might look like, or what your film is all about. The opening scene in the Wizard of Oz depicts Dorothy and Toto running down a dirt road with storm clouds approaching in the background. Once you watch the whole film, you realize how important that first scene really is. And remember, just as the first page of a script needs to draw the reader in, the opening image of a script needs to draw the audience in.

Describe your opening image in the space below.

Setting Up the Story Pages 1-10 or Pages 1 - ____ (the 10% mark)

All the important characters (your protagonist, antagonist, and supporting characters) in your main plot will be introduced during the first ten pages, or at least hinted at. You want your audience to know all your characters’ strange tics and behaviors—basically, what makes your characters unique. You will also want to set up your internal and external conflicts. By page 10, your audience needs to feel for and identify with your characters enough to care about their stories.

Below, write down your conflict and a few distinguishing features that make each of your characters unique. In the first 10 pages of your script, make sure you set up this conflict and portray your characters’ unique personalities.

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Inciting IncidentPage 10 or Page ____ (the 10% mark)

In the set-up, you have told us all about the world of your script. The inciting incident will turn that world upside down. Protagonists get fired, find out they have a long-lost brother, get news that they have three days to live, meet the girl or boy of their dreams, get transported somewhere over the rainbow by a powerful tornado, etc. This is what forces your protagonist out of a daily routine and into the adventure of a lifetime.

Describe your inciting incident in the space below.

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The Big Decision Pages 10-25 or Pages ____(the 10% mark)-____(the 25% mark)

Page 25 is the point of no return. From page 10 until this point, your protagonist should be debating whether to embark on his or her journey or just continue living his or her uneventful, everyday life. Your protagonist should ultimately choose the more dangerous and exciting path towards his or her goal, but it won't be an easy decision to make.

Below, write two lists from your protagonist’s point of view: one stating why he or she should keep things as they currently are, and one stating why he or she should embark on the adventure.

Reasons why I keep things as they are:

Reasons why I should embark on the adventure:

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Into the Wide Unknown Page 25 or Page ____(the 25% mark)

This is a big moment for your protagonist, and you want to make sure that your audience knows it. He or she is leaving the old world behind, and stepping into the unknown. Because these two worlds are so distinct, the act of actually stepping into the new one must be unmistakable. A great example of this is in The Wizard of Oz when Dorothy steps out of her house and into the Munchkin City.

Below, describe the moment where your protagonist steps into the "new world."

Subplot Page 30 or Page ____(the 30% mark)

The subplot, also known as the “B story” should be introduced on or around page 30. A common subplot is a love story involving the protagonist, but it can also be based around supporting characters or even a brand new gang of characters. The subplot will make your script more dynamic and exciting.

Using the space below, brainstorm some ideas for various subplots, and how you will to introduce them into your script. You may want to go back to the questions you answered about your supporting characters on the "Character Questionnaire" on the "Creating Conflict" worksheet.

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Having Fun and Getting to Know Your CharactersPages 30-50 or Pages ____(the 30% mark)-____(the 50% mark)

This is the portion of a film where most of the trailer clips come from. As you might guess, this part of the script is more upbeat; it is less about your characters moving towards an end goal and more about your characters having fun and getting to know each other. This does not mean that it is less important, since each scene in a script must move the story forward. This part of your script helps your audience get to know what your characters and your story are all about. For example, this is the part of Wizard of Oz where Dorothy sings and dances along the Yellow Brick Road with her newfound friends.

Write out some rising action that might fit into this section of your script in the space below.

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The 50% MarkPage 50 or Page ____(the 50% mark)

The fun is now over, and it's time to get back to the story. The midpoint of your script can be tricky. This is where your protagonist thinks that things can’t get any better or any worse. The trick is that neither is true. The movie is only halfway over, and things are going to get worse before they get better. This is the moment when Dorothy looks across the poppy field and sees the Emerald City. Though it looks like her journey is almost over, it has only just begun.

Below, describe the midpoint of your script.

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The Antagonist Returns! Pages 50-75 or Pages ____(the 50% mark)-____(the 75% mark)

Your protagonist has already had some run-ins with the antagonist, and has been successful so far in keeping him or her out of the way. At the 50% Mark, your protagonist may believe that he or she has seen the last of the “bad guy or gal.” Unbeknownst to your protagonist, the antagonist has been getting ready to come back with a vengeance.

Describe how your antagonist rears his or her ugly head again in your script in the space below.

The “All is Lost” MomentPage 75 or Page ____(the 75% mark)

Just like the 50% Mark, the “All is Lost” Moment is a false defeat. Everything that could go wrong has gone wrong. The antagonist has come back with a bigger army and a brilliant game plan right when your protagonist thought all his or her problems were gone for good. After such a huge defeat, it is no wonder your protagonist is ready to throw in the towel and give up on his or her dreams.

Describe the “All is Lost” Moment in your script below.

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The “Ah Ha!” MomentPage 85 or Page ____(the 85% mark)

This is the moment when your protagonist pulls him or herself off the floor and back into action. Oftentimes, with the help of the supporting characters, he or she will come up with a brilliant plan (ah ha!) to finally defeat the antagonist—this time for good.

Describe the “Ah ha!” moment of your script below.

The Final PushPages 85-100 or Pages ____(the 85% mark)-____(the 100% mark)

These final pages of your script typically contain your climax, falling action, and your resolution. This is where your protagonist learns to overcome his or her fears in order to defeat the antagonist, consequently changing—and sometimes even saving—the world!

Describe all the events that make up your climax, falling action, and resolution below.

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Don’t worry about getting all this down right off the bat. There is a lot of information here. An easy way to break this worksheet in before Script Frenzy is to use it to outline your favorite films. You may need to watch them again; as you do, we bet you will be amazed at how closely they follow this formula. Remember that one page of a screenplay is approximately one minute of film time, and that some movies are longer or shorter than 100 minutes, so this won’t always be exact.

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Writing Good Dialogue

Scripts are made up of the following four things:

1. Dialogue 2. Character Names 3. Action 4. Description

Let’s start by going over the first two: dialogue and character names.

Dialogue is what happens when your characters speak to one another. Above each line of dialogue is a character’s name, which should always be written in ALL CAPS and centered above the dialogue like so:

In a script, dialogue should do one, if not both, of the following:

1. Reveal characters’ relationships to one another. 2. Move the story forward.

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BILLY I told you that chicks can’t rock!

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Here's a couple of example exchanges to illustrate each.

Dialogue that shows the relationship between characters:

From this conversation, we can safely assume that Palmer and his mother have a strained relationship. Jane has done something to hurt her son so much that he won’t even call her “mom,” and no amount of apologizing is going to make up for her mistake.

PALMER Hi Jane, haven’t seen you around here in a while. How’s life?

JANE Could you just try to call me “mom” every once in a while? That’s what I am you know—your mom! You call your dad, “dad.”

PALMER Maybe you should think about why that is for a few seconds. It’s not a hard one to figure out.

JANE How many times do I have to say I’m sorry? I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry! Is that enough?!

PALMER You can’t apologize your way out of this one, Jane!

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Dialogue that moves the story forward:

Dialogue like this can change the course of a script’s storyline, moving the story to a whole new level. A matter a fact, this is a great example of an inciting incident. After this short exchange, Agent Smith’s life is changed forever.

AGENT BURNHAM We found the missing file.

AGENT SMITH So, was I right? Is Mr. V in fact a serpent-human hybrid?

AGENT BURNHAM Yes, but there’s something you might find even more interesting.

AGENT SMITH (Laughs) Can’t imagine what that could be.

AGENT BURNHAM Mr. V is your father.

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Define Relationships Between Characters

In the lines below, write a short scene of dialogue between two characters in your script that helps define their relationship with one another. This can be a positive relationship or a conflicting relationship.

Dialogue

Dialogue

CHARACTER NAME

CHARACTER NAME

Dialogue

Dialogue

CHARACTER NAME

CHARACTER NAME

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Move the Story Forward

In the lines below write a short conversation between two of your characters that moves your story forward. Tip: You may want to look back at the inciting incident in your plot outline.

Dialogue

Dialogue

CHARACTER NAME

CHARACTER NAME

Dialogue

Dialogue

CHARACTER NAME

CHARACTER NAME

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Bonus Challenge: Character Monologue

So you’ve practiced writing dialogue for some of your characters, which has probably given you some pretty awesome insight into what they are like and how they get along. Sometimes, though, you may want a character to say something to him or herself. You see this in plays a lot. This is called interior monologue, and you will likely want to use it if you are writing a play—and maybe even if you aren’t!

Monologue what happens when a character talks to him or herself, usually to reveal private feelings. Monologue does more than just expand on characters’ feelings; it also provides information that’s new to the audience.

Here’s an example:

From this brief monologue, we learn that Rodrigo is very nervous around Karla. Karla is kind of a wild lady, so much so that Rodrigo fears for his life participating in a magic show with her. He can't tell her that though, which is why he is talking to himself.

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RODRIGO Well, I guess I've lost my chance. I've seen Karla at rehearsal every day for a week but I get so distracted by her great height, and her wild blue hair, I forget the words I've spent so much time rehearsing in my mirror: "No, Karla! I can't be your apprentice for the magic show! I'm afraid of your trick saw, I'm afraid of your disappearing bunny, I'm afraid of YOU!" But now it's too late. The show is this evening, and it'll either be the greatest night of my life—or the last.

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Reveal a character's private feelings

In the lines below, write a short interior monologue for your script that shows one of your important character's private feelings. Remember: your monologue should not just expand on something the audience already knows, but rather, it should provide new information.

Awesome. Now let’s move on to the other two script ingredients: action and description.

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Dialogue

CHARACTER NAME

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Lights, Camera, Action!Now that you know a lot about dialogue and you know how to format character names, we’ll move on to talk about the other two important ingredients in a script, the action and description. If dialogue in a script is what’s said, action and description are what’s seen. Basically, these two elements make up everything that is not dialogue.

Facts about Action and Description:

1. Action is what your characters are doing in a scene. 2. Description adds details to a script about a scene’s location, important props within a scene, and the time in which a scene takes place. 3. In a stage play, action and description are referred to more generally as stage directions. 4. Action and description are always written in the present tense. 5. You can only write about what you can see. That means you can’t write about what a character is feeling or thinking. You can only describe what he or she looks like from the outside. 6. Use as little detail as possible in your action and description. Only describe what a director/artist needs to know in order to make your script come to life. 7. Character names within action are always written in ALL CAPS. 8. Important props, sound effects, and actions in a screenplay are often also written in ALL CAPS. 9. If you want to read more about the action and description or stage directions read “How to Format a Screenplay” and “How to Format a Stage Play” on the Writer’s Resources page on Script Frenzy’s YWP website.

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You will find action and description at the beginning of each scene in a screenplay like this:

This is a slugline. Sluglines are only found in screenplays and are written in ALL CAPS. They state whether a scene takes place inside (INT.) or outside (EXT.), where a scene takes place (the location), and whether it takes place during the DAY or at NIGHT.

You will also find action within blocks of dialogue like so:

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INT. SO YOU THINK YOU CAN ROCK!? AMPHITHEATER – NIGHT

All the members of Crude Medicine run on stage in their new matching ORANGE JUMPSUITS and WHITE SUNGLASSES. The audience cheers. ZACH counts them in with a few clicks of his DRUMSTICKS.

They begin to play, but all their INSTRUMENTS are out of tune, including the MICROPHONE. Within seconds they are booed off the stage.

WILMA I don’t understand you at all, little man. You have every guitar and guitar gadget in the world! What else do you need?

BORIS shoves a POP-TART in his mouth.

BORIS How many times do I have to tell you to stop calling me “little man?” I’m 18! I’m way too old to be sitting in my bedroom like a loser. I want to be in a band. I want to travel the world . . .

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You will also find long sections of action/description within a script. You may find whole scenes that are just action like this:

Let’s practice writing action and description for your script. Take out your "Writing Really Good Dialogue" worksheet and answer the following questions for one of the conversations you wrote.

1. Where does this scene take place?

2. Is it daytime or nighttime?

3. What are your characters doing in this scene? Are there any important props? Is there anything important about the setting that a director/artist might need to know? Remember that you can only describe what can be seen.

Now let’s practice putting it all together in an introduction to this scene.

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BORIS shoves a POP-TART in his mouth, picks up one of his GUITARS, and continues to rock out.

He JUMPS in the air and does a couple of HIGH KICKS, the second knocking over his SODA, which spills all over one of his AMPS.

The AMP shorts out and BORIS POUNDS on it until it turns back on.

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If You’re Writing a ScreenplayCircle the appropriate slugline descriptions and write your action and description in the space below the slugline.

If You’re Writing a Stage Play The stage directions in an introduction to a scene in a stage play are called scene directions. Notice how little space you have to write your scene directions. You have to say a lot in very few words.

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LOCATIONSLUGLINE INT./EXT.

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Formatting Your Script Script formatting is a lot easier than you might think. If you’ve completed the last two worksheets, you probably have a pretty good idea about how a script is put together. Plus, we’ve created some scriptwriting templates that will guide you through the process.

If you’re writing your script on a computer, check out the last week of the Scriptwriting Boot Camp for High School Students to find out more about formatting your script using a word processing program.

Take out your "Writing Really Good Dialogue" worksheet and your "Lights, Camera, Action!" worksheet. Copy your dialogue and scene introductions into the script template appropriate for the kind of script you are writing. We’ve provided both a "Stage Play Template" and a "Screenplay Template." We’ve even provided a space for you to add some action/description between the dialogue in your scene.

STAGE PLAY TEMPLATE (

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Scene Directions

Dialogue

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Write some action between the dialogue here if you’d like!

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SCREENPLAY TEMPLATE

SLUGLINE

Action/Description

Dialogue

Write some action between the dialogue here if you’d like!

CHARACTER NAME

INT./EXT. (circle one)

DAY/NIGHT (circle one)

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Script Frenzy AffidavitThis is an agreement that lays out your rights and responsibilities as a scriptwriter. Make sure that both you and a teacher, parent, or reliable friend sign this contract. Once this affidavit is signed, the contract will broadcast your scriptwriting intentions throughout the universe. Really.

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YOUR SIGNATURE DATE

TEACHER/PARENT/RELIABLE FRIENDS’ SIGNATURE DATE

By taking on this absurd month-long deadline, I understand that notions of craft, brilliance, grammar, and spelling are to be chucked right out the window, where they will remain, ignored, until they are retrieved for the editing process. I understand that I am a talented person, capable of heroic acts of creativity, and I will give myself enough time over the course of the next month to allow my innate gifts to come to the surface, untouched by self-doubt, self-criticism, and other acts of self-bullying.

During the month ahead, I realize I will produce clunky dialogue, clichéd characters, and deeply flawed plots. I agree that all of these things will be left in my rough draft, to be corrected at a later point. I understand my right to withhold my manuscript from all readers (except possibly my teacher) until I am ready. I also acknowledge my right to brag about the perils of the writing process, should such bragging prove useful in garnering me respect, attention, or freedom from household chores.

I acknowledge that the month-long, - page goal I set for myself is absolute and unchangeable, and that any failure to meet the deadline, or any effort on my part to move the deadline once the adventure has begun, will result in well-deserved mockery from friends and family. I also acknowledge that, upon successful completion of the stated writing objective, I am entitled to a period of gleeful celebration and revelry lasting days, if not weeks, afterward.

I, , hereby pledge my intent to write a

-page script in one month’s time.

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Script Frenzy 30-day Commitment CalendarYour page-count goal for the month may seem impossible from where you're sitting now. That's totally okay. Big creative projects like writing a script are daunting even for professionals, but we’re here to tell you a secret: If you break big goals into a series of smaller goals, the impossible becomes totally possible. Easy, even. To help make next month's challenge a piece of cake, we’ve come up with this commitment calendar.

It is best to set aside time each day to write, but be realistic with your scheduling. If you can only write three days a week because you have soccer practice, be make sure to take that into consideration when filling in the calendar. Jot down the number or hours and words you plan on writing each day.

Tip: If you want to find out just how many pages you will need to write each day, divide your total page-count goal by the number of days you've set aside for writing during the month. For example, if your page-count goal is 50, and you can make time to write on 25 days, you will need to write 2 pages each day you’ve scheduled.

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