rough cut ‘analysis’
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ROUGH CUT
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FRAME 1
Speed up the typing section, as this is slow and takes up a lot of time on the cut.
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FRAME 7
Fast walk into the workshop from the desk, this will make the music sound more realistic and incorporate a fast pace of editing.
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FRAME 9
Keep up the fast walk until the light switch shot
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FRAME 12
Add in the close-up of the vice (This got cut out of the rough cut)
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FRAME 13
Bang the cupboard doors, make this faster (faster pace of editing)
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FRAME 16
Either edit (make it faster) or delete the file shot. File looks feeble against the previous shot of the saw.
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FRAME 17
Bang the brasso down harder – More of a thriller convention of sudden sound.
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FRAME 19
Shorten down the turning of the Brasso cap.
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FRAME 20
Make the blade down the sleeve brighter, so the audience can see what the character is doing.
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FRAME 21
Add in putting on the coat to block out the camera
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FRAME 22
Add slow-motion of sparks – We didn’t do this for the rough cut as we were stretched for time and it’s technical