By James Cummings

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Since we were asked to create a school magazine cover and contents page I thought of doing something that shows Biddulph High School to be organised, professional and sophisticated. This is what I hope to have created with the design I have put on my school magazine contents page.

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Positives People liked how it was set

out.

Also they said they liked how the image is looking in to the camera so that it makes out he is looking at you.

The school logo

Negatives People said that the contents

heading needs be bigger.

The subheading need to be bigger and more interesting.

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I have made the changes that people made so I increased the size of the title and also made the subheading a lot more neater so that people look at it and think it looks professional. Also I have made the titles more interesting so that people are attracted by them.

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