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Page 1: Simpsons, Fireworks and Dancing Animals!!!!!!!. Outside Source Quotes Reinforce central point(s) of your essay. Reinforce central point(s) of your essay

Simpsons, Fireworks and Simpsons, Fireworks and Dancing Animals!!!!!!!Dancing Animals!!!!!!!

Page 2: Simpsons, Fireworks and Dancing Animals!!!!!!!. Outside Source Quotes Reinforce central point(s) of your essay. Reinforce central point(s) of your essay

Outside Source QuotesOutside Source Quotes Reinforce central point(s) of your essay.Reinforce central point(s) of your essay.

– Defines symbols or motifsDefines symbols or motifs– Clarify themes or purposeClarify themes or purpose

Do:Do:– Need examples from text to proveNeed examples from text to prove– Need explanation to connect to your examplesNeed explanation to connect to your examples

Do not:Do not:– Summarize textSummarize text– Need to literally mention example you are discussing.Need to literally mention example you are discussing.– Need to even mention the novel you are discussingNeed to even mention the novel you are discussing

When incorporatingWhen incorporating– Quotes still have same meaning as original contextQuotes still have same meaning as original context– Quotes cannot explain themselves or literally explain a quoteQuotes cannot explain themselves or literally explain a quote

Page 3: Simpsons, Fireworks and Dancing Animals!!!!!!!. Outside Source Quotes Reinforce central point(s) of your essay. Reinforce central point(s) of your essay

Thesis and TopicThesis and Topic

Kino’s interaction with the doctor and pearl Kino’s interaction with the doctor and pearl dealers help to prove that oppression stemming dealers help to prove that oppression stemming from racism leads to resistance from the from racism leads to resistance from the oppressed.oppressed.

You are now writing the paragraph with the You are now writing the paragraph with the following topic sentence: The doctor’s refusal to following topic sentence: The doctor’s refusal to see Coyotito stems from racism and causes Kino’s see Coyotito stems from racism and causes Kino’s first act of resistance.first act of resistance.

Page 4: Simpsons, Fireworks and Dancing Animals!!!!!!!. Outside Source Quotes Reinforce central point(s) of your essay. Reinforce central point(s) of your essay

Choose the best example of Choose the best example of oppression based on racismoppression based on racism

1. The doctor put his cup down gently before 1. The doctor put his cup down gently before he let his anger rise.he let his anger rise.

2. “Have I nothing better to do than cure insect 2. “Have I nothing better to do than cure insect bites for ‘little Indians’? 3. I am a doctor, not a bites for ‘little Indians’? 3. I am a doctor, not a veterinary.”veterinary.”

4. “Yes, Patron,” said the servant. 4. “Yes, Patron,” said the servant. 5. “Has he any money?” the doctor demanded. 5. “Has he any money?” the doctor demanded.

“No, they never have any money. 6. I, I alone in “No, they never have any money. 6. I, I alone in the world am supposed to work for nothing—and I the world am supposed to work for nothing—and I am tired of it. 7. See if he has any money!”am tired of it. 7. See if he has any money!”

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Pick the best quote that proves the Pick the best quote that proves the author intended to show racist author intended to show racist

oppressionoppression 2. “I am a doctor, not a veterinary.”2. “I am a doctor, not a veterinary.”

1. Orville Prescott, in his 1947 review of 1. Orville Prescott, in his 1947 review of The Pearl The Pearl for the for the New York TimesNew York Times, argues that the novella is , argues that the novella is “permeated with the special sort of impotent and “permeated with the special sort of impotent and sullen bitterness which only an oppressed and sullen bitterness which only an oppressed and subject people know.” 2. Prescott notes that subject people know.” 2. Prescott notes that Steinbeck has often turned his attention to the Steinbeck has often turned his attention to the oppressed. 3. “His admiration for them seems to oppressed. 3. “His admiration for them seems to have been a conscious protest against the have been a conscious protest against the decadence and cruelty and stupidity which have decadence and cruelty and stupidity which have been so prevalent in this century among so-called been so prevalent in this century among so-called civilized people.” 4. Kino and his family suffer the civilized people.” 4. Kino and his family suffer the cruelty of so-called civilized people because their cruelty of so-called civilized people because their race is different from that of the ruling class.race is different from that of the ruling class.

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What information do you need to lead-in to the quote from the What information do you need to lead-in to the quote from the story?story?

“ “I am a doctor, not a veterinary.”I am a doctor, not a veterinary.” Kino has requested help from the doctor, the doctor is Kino has requested help from the doctor, the doctor is

doing the speaking, the doctor is a part of the ruling classdoing the speaking, the doctor is a part of the ruling class

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What do you need to explain?What do you need to explain?

How diction reflects racismHow diction reflects racism

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What do we need to What do we need to connect?connect?

4. Kino and his family suffer the cruelty of so-called 4. Kino and his family suffer the cruelty of so-called civilized people because their race is different from civilized people because their race is different from that of the ruling class.that of the ruling class.

Doctor represents these “so-called civilized people”, Doctor represents these “so-called civilized people”, reinforce cruelty of doctor.reinforce cruelty of doctor.

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Are we done yet?Are we done yet?

What else needs to be proven?What else needs to be proven? 1. For a long time Kino stood in front of the gate 1. For a long time Kino stood in front of the gate

with Juana beside him. 2. Slowly he put his with Juana beside him. 2. Slowly he put his suppliant hat on his head. 3. Then, without suppliant hat on his head. 3. Then, without warning, he struck the gate a crushing blow with warning, he struck the gate a crushing blow with is fist. 4. He looked down in wonder at his split is fist. 4. He looked down in wonder at his split knuckles and at the blood that flowed down knuckles and at the blood that flowed down between his fingers.between his fingers.