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TRANSCRIPT
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Step 1Take out your homework.
1. Preposition worksheet from 2 lessons ago.2. Thank You, Ma’am story map
Step 2
Write down today’s date and title.
OER Review and Reader’s Choice 10/13/15
Step 3
Welcome Work
Check your prepositional phrase worksheet with your partner!
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Review Preposition Worksheet
• Doc Cam
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Vocabulary 21-24
• Each sentence MUST have a prepositional phrase in it!
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Independent Reading: Reader’s Choice
1. Create a new story map.
2. Choose a story from the options on the Short Story Menu.
• Write 1 sentence from the story that contains imagery and draw it.
When you’re done creating your map:1. Open up to the short story. 2. Start reading.
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Review OER quizzes
• Look at the FROWN column.
• # each of the 8 sub-sections
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1. ANSWER: Does NOT use key words
• Who is a dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous Game”?
• ___________ is a dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous Game.”
• A dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous Game” is ____________.
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2. ANSWER: Contains the wrong answer.
• Dynamic character: A character who changes in the story.
• One correct answer Rainsford
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3. PROOF: No quotes used.
• You cannot just summarize. You need text evidence.
Rainsford is a dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous Game.” Rainsford thinks that there are two groups.
BETTER:
Rainsford is a dynamic character in “The Most
Dangerous Game.” “The world is made up of two classes: the
hunters and the huntees.”
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4. PROOF: Quotations are PLOPPED
• You must introduce text evidence.
Rainsford is a dynamic character in “The Most
Dangerous Game.” “The world is made up of two classes: the
hunters and the huntees.”
PLOP
BETTER:
Rainsford is a dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous
Game.” In the exposition, he explains to Whitney, “The world is
made up of two classes: the hunters and the huntees.”
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5. PROOF: Irrelevant proof is selected
• Make sure you choose the BEST piece of evidence.
BETTER:
Rainsford is a dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous
Game.” In the exposition, he asks Whitney, “Who cares how a
jaguar feels?”
Rainsford is a dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous
Game.” In the exposition, he explains to Whitney, “Do you think
we’ve passed the island yet?”
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5. PROOF: Irrelevant proof is selected
• Make sure you choose the BEST piece of evidence.
BETTER:
Rainsford is a dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous
Game.” In the exposition, he asks Whitney, “Who cares how a
jaguar feels?”
BETTER:
Rainsford is a dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous
Game.” In the exposition, he explains to Whitney, “Do you think
we’ve passed the island yet?”
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6. PROOF: NO parenthetical reference!
BETTER:
Rainsford is a dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous
Game.” In the exposition, he asks Whitney, “Who cares how a
jaguar feels” (Connell 215)?
PR?
Rainsford is a dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous
Game.” In the exposition, he asks Whitney, “Who cares how a
jaguar feels?”
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7. EXPLANATION: Repeats the “Answer” sentence
Rainsford is a dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous
Game.” In the exposition, he asks Whitney, “Who cares how a
jaguar feels” (Connell 215)? This shows he has changed.
BETTER:
Rainsford is a dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous
Game.” In the exposition, he asks Whitney, “Who cares how a
jaguar feels” (Connell 215)? At first, Rainsford shows little
sympathy for animals who are hunted.
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8. EXPLANATION: Does not explain the importance of the evidence selected.
Rainsford is a dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous
Game.” In the exposition, he asks Whitney, “Who cares how a
jaguar feels” (Connell 215)? At first, Rainsford shows little
sympathy for animals who are hunted.
So? Consider the answer. What has changed? Why?
Rainsford is a dynamic character in “The Most Dangerous
Game.” In the exposition, he asks Whitney, “Who cares how a
jaguar feels” (Connell 215)? At first, Rainsford shows little
sympathy for animals who are hunted. After Zaroff has hunted
him, however, he knows what the jaguar feels: fear. After this
experience, he may feel more empathy for animals.
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HOMEWORK: A DAY
• DUE• Vocabulary 21-24 (include Prep. Phrase in the sentence!)
• Short Story Map (Reader’s Choice)
• Some students have to re-write their quiz OER!