Story Board

Shot 1: There is a voice over of the news on TV ( “police are currently investigating the brutal murder of teenager Ryan Ennis who was found dead last week in Eltham”) and a L cut to shot 1b

Shot 2: A close up pan of many gravestones

Shot 3: long shot of jack at grave. Shot 4: A close up side profile of Jack looking down at grave and looking sorrowful. This ends with a fade out.

Shot 5: jack walking past door, stops

Shot 6: the door with the brothers name on it

Shot 7: There is a fade in to jack opening his brothers room and looking in

Shot 8: Flashback of Jacks happy memory of him and Ryan playing video games. (laughing)

Shot 9: Close up of Jack in room looking about in present time

Shot 10: Flashback of Jack on phone asking where his brother is

Shot 11: A medium shot of jack knocking stuff off of brothers table in present time

Shot 12: Flashback of Jack finding his brothers body

Shot 13: Logo

Shot 14: Establishing shot of friends at park (laughter)

Shot 15: The friends talking but Jack is looking down in sorrow

Shot 16: Straight cut to Person A yelling insults about Ryan (“how’s your brother doing”)

Shot 17: Jack walks by the Person A but knocks shoulders as he leaves

Shot 18: Group shot of friends looking confused and angry at Person A

Character List

Dead brother: Ryan Alive brother: JackPerson APerson BPerson CPerson DGirl A

Shot 19: Fade in to long shot of Jack sitting in living room where he hears a loud thump heard so he gets up and goes to kitchen

Shot 20: Finds a mug on floor goes to pick them up, nothing is on the side of the table and is out of focus

Shot 21: Jack stands back up and sees the note on the side of the table, the note goes into focus

Shot 22: Close up of his face showing confusion and a low angle from where the note is

Shot 23: Close up of note that has writing in red pen

Shot 24: Tone card saying payback which fades out to black

Shot 25: Darkness on screen with heavy breathing from Person A running

Shot 26: Straight cut to medium close up of person leaning on tree

Shot 27: Point of view shot looking to right side of tree to find nothing

Shot 28: Straight cut to a point of view shot of looking to left side of tree. Person A seeing the murderer, wearing hood so face is not visible and see the knife being raised by killer

Shot 29: Person A stabbed in neck high angle looking down at body and then fades out

Shot 30: Jump cut to brothers house where a friend is telling Jack that Person A body was found ( “they found a body, it was Matt’

Shot 31: Flash into a tone card ‘justice’

Shot 32: low shot of feet running near puddle

Shot 33: Medium shot of Girl A with killer behind her who wraps his arm around neck from behind her. Then he drags her into the darkness.

Shot 35: Darkness on screen with screaming ‘Why are you doing this!?’

Shot 34: Killer walking holding bloody knife by his side while exiting a dark house

Shot 35: Person C walks through the door

Shot 36: Killer is hiding behind the door

Shot 37: A bloody hand on window sliding down

Shot 38: Tone card of revenge

Shot 39: Hand pulling knife out of drawer

Shot 40: Blood running down floor

Shot 41: Extreme close up of eye

Shot 42: Person D jumping over fence

Shot 43: Person D falling over

Shot 44: Bride scene Killer pulling up victim by front of shirt to stab them

Shot 45: Darkness

Shot 46: Jack in room crying and rocking back and forth

Shot 47: Long shot of Jack in room whispering to someone or himself in room (“its not real”)

Shot 48: Close up of Jack in room whispering to someone or himself in room

Shot 50: Jack looking under bed and being grabbed

Shot 51: Title

Shot 52: Killer standing at door dripping with blood in near darkness

Shot 53: Coming soon