Story Board

Shot 1a: There is a voice over of the news on TV ( “police are currently investigating the brutal murder of teenager Ryan Ennis who was found dead last week in Eltham”) and a L cut to shot 1b

Shot 1b: A close up pan of many gravestones

Shot 1c: long shot of people at grave during a funeral. It is raining and the middle of day. Shot 2: A close up side profile of Jack looking down at grave and looking sorrowful. This ends with a fade out.

Shot 3: There is a fade in to Jack in the shower at a medium shot and low angle. The sound of rain turns into the shower water dripping

Shot 4: Flashback of Jacks happy memory of him and Ryan playing video games. (laughing)

Shot 5: Close up of Jack in shower eyes closed in present time

Shot 6: Flashback of Jack walking towards crowds of people at the crime scene of Ryan’s death

Shot 7: A close up shot of Jack grabbing a towel in present time

Shot 8: Flashback of Jack at crime scene as a long shot looking over people in the crowd. You see face turn from curiosity to distraught and barging threw the crowd in slow motion. Then there’s a point of view shot of Jack looking at Ryan’s body. (police saying “stay back” muttering from crowd) Shot 9: There’s a medium shot of him getting out the shower, walks past the mirror with Ryan in the reflection once he has gone past

Shot 10: Logo

Shot 11: Establishing shot of friends at park (laughter)

Shot 12: The friends talking but Jack is looking down in sorrow

Shot 13: Straight cut to Person A yelling insults about Ryan (“how’s your brother doing”)

Character List

Dead brother: Ryan Alive brother: JackPerson APerson BPerson CPerson DGirl A

Shot 14: Jack walks by the Person A but knocks shoulders as he leaves

Shot 14b: Group shot of friends looking confused and angry at Person A

Shot 15: Fade in to long shot of Jack sitting in living room where he hears a loud thump heard so he gets up and goes to kitchen

Shot 16: Finds a mug on floor goes to pick them up, nothing is on the side of the table and is out of focus

Shot 17: Jack stands back up and sees the note on the side of the table, the note goes into focus

Shot 18: Close up of his face showing confusion and a low angle from where the note is

Shot 19: Close up of note that has writing in red pen

Shot 20: Tone card saying payback which fades out to black

Shot 21: Darkness on screen with heavy breathing from Person A running

Shot 22: Straight cut to medium close up of person leaning on tree

Shot 23: Point of view shot looking to right side of tree to find nothing

Shot 24: Straight cut to a point of view shot of looking to left side of tree. Person A seeing the murderer, wearing hood so face is not visible and see the knife being raised by killer

Shot 25: Person A stabbed in neck high angle looking down at body and then fades out

Shot 26: Jump cut to brothers house where a friend is telling Jack that Person A body was found ( “they found a body, it was Matt’

Shot 27: Flash into a tone card ‘justice’

Shot 28: Someone looking around them for danger while it is quiet

Shot 29: Medium shot of Girl A with killer behind her who wraps his arm around neck from behind her. Then he drags her into the darkness.

Shot 30: Person B running from killer in ally way

Shot 31: Darkness on screen with screaming ‘Why are you doing this!?’

Shot 32: Killer walking holding bloody knife by his side while exiting a dark house

Shot 33: Person C walks through the door

Shot 34: Killer is hiding behind the door

Shot 35: A bloody hand on window sliding down

Shot 36: Tone card of revenge

Shot 37: Hand pulling knife out of holder

Shot 38: Blood running down floor

Shot 39: Extreme close up of eye

Shot 40: Jack being punched

Shot 41: Person D jumping over fence

Shot 42: Person D falling over

Shot 43: Killer pulling up victim by front of shirt to stab them

Shot 44: Darkness

Shot 45: Jack in room crying and rocking back and forth

Shot 46: Long shot of Jack in room whispering to someone or himself in room (“its not real”)

Shot 47: Close up of Jack in room whispering to someone or himself in room

Shot 48: Title

Shot 49: Jack looking under bed and being grabbed

Shot 50: Killer standing at door dripping with blood in near darkness

Shot 51: Coming soon