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Student Writing Feedback Using Microsoft Word Templates April Ellenwood Oliver Santa Rosa Junior College ESL Department [email protected]

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Page 1: Student Writing Feedback Using Microsoft Word Templates April Ellenwood Oliver Santa Rosa Junior College ESL Department aoliver@santarosa.edu

Student Writing Feedback Using Microsoft Word

Templates

April Ellenwood OliverSanta Rosa Junior College ESL

[email protected]

Page 2: Student Writing Feedback Using Microsoft Word Templates April Ellenwood Oliver Santa Rosa Junior College ESL Department aoliver@santarosa.edu

Key PointsO Writing instruction emphasisO Role of technology in writing

instructionO My experiencesO Student preparation before

submitting writingO Macro how-toO Follow-up activitiesO Next steps…

Page 3: Student Writing Feedback Using Microsoft Word Templates April Ellenwood Oliver Santa Rosa Junior College ESL Department aoliver@santarosa.edu

Emphasis on Writing Instruction

O Writing instruction push at federal and state levelsO Teaching Excellence in Adult Literacy

(TEAL)O https://teal.ed.gov/resourcesO http://www.otan.us/browse/index.cfm?f

useaction=doc&catid=33567&ref=6168

O CALPRO Research-Based Writing Instruction pilot program

O Need for students to improve writing skills

Page 4: Student Writing Feedback Using Microsoft Word Templates April Ellenwood Oliver Santa Rosa Junior College ESL Department aoliver@santarosa.edu

Role of Technology in Writing Instruction

O New GED testO Students need to use computers for

writing componentO Online classes, distance learning

Page 5: Student Writing Feedback Using Microsoft Word Templates April Ellenwood Oliver Santa Rosa Junior College ESL Department aoliver@santarosa.edu

My ExperiencesO High level credit ESL classes

O Little writing experienceO Unfamiliar with academic language

O Students email me their writing and it is an easy way to give feedback

O Students self-regulate their writingO I note problems, they make the changes

O Saves me time!!!O Poor handwritingO Create macros (similar to templates) to give

students feedback

Page 6: Student Writing Feedback Using Microsoft Word Templates April Ellenwood Oliver Santa Rosa Junior College ESL Department aoliver@santarosa.edu

Student Preparation before Submitting Writing

O Define writing and editing terms for studentsO Topic sentence, thesis statement, etc.O RO, CS, Frag handout

O Feedback Examples:O Thesis statement (or topic sentence) needs to

be more specificO Assignment format incorrectO Run-on sentence

O Students email writing attached as documentO Moodle: Ss upload writing

Page 7: Student Writing Feedback Using Microsoft Word Templates April Ellenwood Oliver Santa Rosa Junior College ESL Department aoliver@santarosa.edu

Macro How-ToO Step-by-step handout for MS Word

2010 (available on TDL website): www.otan.us/tdlsymposium/index.cfm?fuseaction=schedule

Page 8: Student Writing Feedback Using Microsoft Word Templates April Ellenwood Oliver Santa Rosa Junior College ESL Department aoliver@santarosa.edu

Follow-Up ActivitiesO Individualized error/problem log--

handoutO Use of authentic student examples

O Guided practice– correcting writing assignments with feedback as class

O Work as class, small groups, partners to focus on areas of improvement

O Create handouts of errors for in-class work or homeworkO Topic sentence handout– taken from their

writing

Page 9: Student Writing Feedback Using Microsoft Word Templates April Ellenwood Oliver Santa Rosa Junior College ESL Department aoliver@santarosa.edu

Next StepsO Adapt activities for transition class

and noncredit ESL classesO OTAC Moodle project

O Transition class with writing component

Page 10: Student Writing Feedback Using Microsoft Word Templates April Ellenwood Oliver Santa Rosa Junior College ESL Department aoliver@santarosa.edu

ResourcesO http://office.microsoft.com/O TEAL Just Write! Guide

O Section by section: https://teal.ed.gov/tealGuide/toc

O PDF: http://www.otan.us/browse/index.cfm?fuseaction=doc&catid=33567&ref=6168

O Creating a macro in MS Word 2007:O http://youtu.be/RcgzFA4tsGA

O Creating a macro in MS Word 2003 (screencast):O http://www.screencast.com/t/z4eNPt1rSC6

Page 11: Student Writing Feedback Using Microsoft Word Templates April Ellenwood Oliver Santa Rosa Junior College ESL Department aoliver@santarosa.edu

Thank you!O Additional Questions/Suggestions?

O Email me at [email protected]

O Handouts on TDL Symposium website:

www.otan.us/tdlsymposium/index.cfm?fuseaction=schedule