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Students Writing For Students

Spencer Hamblen

McDaniel College

November 5, 2016

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Writing History

McDaniel’s Mathematics major:

Theoretical (or CS)

Problems Solving

Long-form Capstone presentation

Can they write?

Best students could write.

No structured writing outside of problem sets

No way to check whether graduates could write mathematics

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 2 / 11

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Writing History

McDaniel’s Mathematics major:

Theoretical (or CS)

Problems Solving

Long-form Capstone presentation

Can they write?

Best students could write.

No structured writing outside of problem sets

No way to check whether graduates could write mathematics

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 2 / 11

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Writing History

McDaniel’s Mathematics major:

Theoretical (or CS)

Problems Solving

Long-form Capstone presentation

Can they write?

Best students could write.

No structured writing outside of problem sets

No way to check whether graduates could write mathematics

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 2 / 11

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Writing History

McDaniel’s Mathematics major:

Theoretical (or CS)

Problems Solving

Long-form Capstone presentation

Can they write?

Best students could write.

No structured writing outside of problem sets

No way to check whether graduates could write mathematics

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 2 / 11

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Writing History

McDaniel’s Mathematics major:

Theoretical (or CS)

Problems Solving

Long-form Capstone presentation

Can they write?

Best students could write.

No structured writing outside of problem sets

No way to check whether graduates could write mathematics

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 2 / 11

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First Steps

More writing assignments (projects, papers)

Required paper for Capstone project

Required drafts for Capstone, revisions in Problem Seminar

Results – better, but:

Just receiving and processing feedback

Not necessarily thinking about writing

No exposure to other writing (good or bad).

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 3 / 11

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First Steps

More writing assignments (projects, papers)

Required paper for Capstone project

Required drafts for Capstone, revisions in Problem Seminar

Results – better, but:

Just receiving and processing feedback

Not necessarily thinking about writing

No exposure to other writing (good or bad).

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 3 / 11

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First Steps

More writing assignments (projects, papers)

Required paper for Capstone project

Required drafts for Capstone, revisions in Problem Seminar

Results – better, but:

Just receiving and processing feedback

Not necessarily thinking about writing

No exposure to other writing (good or bad).

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 3 / 11

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First Steps

More writing assignments (projects, papers)

Required paper for Capstone project

Required drafts for Capstone, revisions in Problem Seminar

Results – better, but:

Just receiving and processing feedback

Not necessarily thinking about writing

No exposure to other writing (good or bad).

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 3 / 11

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Current Efforts

Number Theory

Capstone

Abstract Algebra

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Current Efforts

Number Theory – Full course notes

Capstone

Abstract Algebra

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 4 / 11

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Current Efforts

Number Theory – Full course notes

Capstone – Drafts, more drafts, and peer reviewed drafts

Abstract Algebra

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 4 / 11

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Current Efforts

Number Theory – Full course notes

Capstone – Drafts, more drafts, and peer reviewed drafts

Abstract Algebra – Big Theorems

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 4 / 11

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Number Theory

Transitioned to completely IbL with no lecturing after the first week.

Version 1 – each student turns in a chapter’s worth of handwrittencourse notes

Version 2 – each student writes 3 weeks’ worth of notes in a TeX file

Version 3 – each student writes a day’s worth of notes on Overleaf

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Number Theory

Transitioned to completely IbL with no lecturing after the first week.

Version 1 – each student turns in a chapter’s worth of handwrittencourse notes

Version 2 – each student writes 3 weeks’ worth of notes in a TeX file

Version 3 – each student writes a day’s worth of notes on Overleaf

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 5 / 11

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Number Theory

Transitioned to completely IbL with no lecturing after the first week.

Version 1 – each student turns in a chapter’s worth of handwrittencourse notes

Version 2 – each student writes 3 weeks’ worth of notes in a TeX file

Version 3 – each student writes a day’s worth of notes on Overleaf

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 5 / 11

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Number Theory

Transitioned to completely IbL with no lecturing after the first week.

Version 1 – each student turns in a chapter’s worth of handwrittencourse notes

Version 2 – each student writes 3 weeks’ worth of notes in a TeX file

Version 3 – each student writes a day’s worth of notes on Overleaf

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 5 / 11

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Number Theory

Moderate success!

Weekly review meetings, opportunities to fix issues

Essential part of grade; students only worry about writing clearly

Prize at end of semester!

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 6 / 11

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Number Theory

Moderate success!

Weekly review meetings, opportunities to fix issues

Essential part of grade; students only worry about writing clearly

Prize at end of semester!

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 6 / 11

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Number Theory

Moderate success!

Weekly review meetings, opportunities to fix issues

Essential part of grade; students only worry about writing clearly

Prize at end of semester!

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 6 / 11

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Number Theory

Moderate success!

Weekly review meetings, opportunities to fix issues

Essential part of grade; students only worry about writing clearly

Prize at end of semester!

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 6 / 11

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Senior Capstone

Semester-long independent project

Was: give report on published paper

Is: write paper and give presentation, wider possibilities for project

Initial issues:

Had trouble finishing in one semester

Students were unsure of scope, often taking easy routes

Writing wasn’t very good

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 7 / 11

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Senior Capstone

Semester-long independent project

Was: give report on published paper

Is: write paper and give presentation, wider possibilities for project

Initial issues:

Had trouble finishing in one semester

Students were unsure of scope, often taking easy routes

Writing wasn’t very good

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 7 / 11

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Senior Capstone

Semester-long independent project

Was: give report on published paper

Is: write paper and give presentation, wider possibilities for project

Initial issues:

Had trouble finishing in one semester

Students were unsure of scope, often taking easy routes

Writing wasn’t very good

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 7 / 11

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Senior Capstone

Semester-long independent project

Was: give report on published paper

Is: write paper and give presentation, wider possibilities for project

Initial issues:

Had trouble finishing in one semester

Students were unsure of scope, often taking easy routes

Writing wasn’t very good

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 7 / 11

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Senior Capstone

Semester-long independent project

Was: give report on published paper

Is: write paper and give presentation, wider possibilities for project

Initial issues:

Had trouble finishing in one semester

Students were unsure of scope, often taking easy routes

Writing wasn’t very good

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 7 / 11

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Senior Capstone

Semester-long independent project

Was: give report on published paper

Is: write paper and give presentation, wider possibilities for project

Initial issues:

Had trouble finishing in one semester

Students were unsure of scope, often taking easy routes

Writing wasn’t very good

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 7 / 11

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Senior Capstone

Semester-long independent project

Was: give report on published paper

Is: write paper and give presentation, wider possibilities for project

Initial issues:

Had trouble finishing in one semester

Students were unsure of scope, often taking easy routes

Writing wasn’t very good

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 7 / 11

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Senior Capstone

Version 1 – two drafts of paper

Version 2 – two drafts of paper (peer review of 4 page draft), practicepresentation

Version 3 – three drafts, two peer reviews, two practice presentations

Student work improves each time I increase the number of deadlines!

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 8 / 11

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Senior Capstone

Version 1 – two drafts of paper

Version 2 – two drafts of paper (peer review of 4 page draft), practicepresentation

Version 3 – three drafts, two peer reviews, two practice presentations

Student work improves each time I increase the number of deadlines!

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 8 / 11

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Senior Capstone

Version 1 – two drafts of paper

Version 2 – two drafts of paper (peer review of 4 page draft), practicepresentation

Version 3 – three drafts, two peer reviews, two practice presentations

Student work improves each time I increase the number of deadlines!

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 8 / 11

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Senior Capstone

Version 1 – two drafts of paper

Version 2 – two drafts of paper (peer review of 4 page draft), practicepresentation

Version 3 – three drafts, two peer reviews, two practice presentations

Student work improves each time I increase the number of deadlines!

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 8 / 11

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Abstract Algebra

Very theoretical, mostly lecturing.

Version 1 – Similar to Number Theory, full course notes

Course has less structure than Number Theory

Too much work

Version 2 – Big Theorems

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 9 / 11

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Abstract Algebra

Very theoretical, mostly lecturing.

Version 1 – Similar to Number Theory, full course notes

Course has less structure than Number Theory

Too much work

Version 2 – Big Theorems

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 9 / 11

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Abstract Algebra

Very theoretical, mostly lecturing.

Version 1 – Similar to Number Theory, full course notes

Course has less structure than Number Theory

Too much work

Version 2 – Big Theorems

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 9 / 11

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Abstract Algebra

Very theoretical, mostly lecturing.

Version 1 – Similar to Number Theory, full course notes

Course has less structure than Number Theory

Too much work

Version 2 – Big Theorems

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 9 / 11

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Abstract Algebra

Very theoretical, mostly lecturing.

Version 1 – Similar to Number Theory, full course notes

Course has less structure than Number Theory

Too much work

Version 2 – Big Theorems

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 9 / 11

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Abstract Algebra

Scaled back, focused version of Number Theory writing, plus peer review

Twice a week, a student writes up the statement and proof of a BigTheorem or Important Example on Overleaf

Another student is responsible for proof-reading, editing, andcomments

2 Theorems/Examples on each exam

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Abstract Algebra

Scaled back, focused version of Number Theory writing, plus peer review

Twice a week, a student writes up the statement and proof of a BigTheorem or Important Example on Overleaf

Another student is responsible for proof-reading, editing, andcomments

2 Theorems/Examples on each exam

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 10 / 11

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Abstract Algebra

Scaled back, focused version of Number Theory writing, plus peer review

Twice a week, a student writes up the statement and proof of a BigTheorem or Important Example on Overleaf

Another student is responsible for proof-reading, editing, andcomments

2 Theorems/Examples on each exam

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 10 / 11

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Abstract Algebra

Scaled back, focused version of Number Theory writing, plus peer review

Twice a week, a student writes up the statement and proof of a BigTheorem or Important Example on Overleaf

Another student is responsible for proof-reading, editing, andcomments

2 Theorems/Examples on each exam

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Future Projects

Where to improve, and where else can I apply this?

Streamline Abstract Algebra

TeX in Fundamentals of Mathematics (intro to proofs)

Calculus?

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Future Projects

Where to improve, and where else can I apply this?

Streamline Abstract Algebra

TeX in Fundamentals of Mathematics (intro to proofs)

Calculus?

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Future Projects

Where to improve, and where else can I apply this?

Streamline Abstract Algebra

TeX in Fundamentals of Mathematics (intro to proofs)

Calculus?

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 11 / 11

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Future Projects

Where to improve, and where else can I apply this?

Streamline Abstract Algebra

TeX in Fundamentals of Mathematics (intro to proofs)

Calculus?

Spencer Hamblen (McDaniel College) Students Writing For Students November 5, 2016 11 / 11