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Page 1: Summary: Disposition of Comments for PDTR3 20943-5 SMMP Taesul SEO/Sungjoon LIM KISTI/KDB, Korea 2012-06-061 Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5 WG2N1668

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Summary:Disposition of Comments for PDTR3

20943-5 SMMP

Taesul SEO/Sungjoon LIMKISTI/KDB, Korea

2012-06-06

WG2N1668

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Overview

• PDTR3 of 20943-5 SMMP obtained substantial support (32N2225)

• Comments to be resolved– Canadian : 36– Japanese : 1– United States : 33 (Non-official)

2012-06-06

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Summary of Canadian Com-ments (1)

• Comments for errors in transforming MS Word file into PDF format– 11 cmmnts : CA01, CA13~18, CA30~31,

CA34~35

• Editor’s action : To request SC32 Sec-retariat special care while transform-ing word to pdf

2012-06-06

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Summary of Canadian Com-ments (2)

• Structure of the manuscript– 5 cmmnts : CA04~05, CA09, CA25,

CA27

• Editor’s action : Restructure the rele-vant parts of the manuscript reflect-ing the comments

2012-06-06

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Summary of Canadian Com-ments (3)

• Unclear words or inconsistency of some words– 6 cmmnts : CA07~8, CA11, CA20~21, CA32

• Editor’s action : Make the unclear words clear and use some inconsistent words consistently

• Data, data element, metadata element set, primary/secondary data element, mapping, …

2012-06-06

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Summary of Canadian Com-ments (3)

• CA02 : The text doesn’t includes se-mantics and many-to-one/one-to-many mapping.

• Proposals : Remove “semantic” from the title or add more description on semantics.

• Editor’s action : Remove “semantic” from the title.

2012-06-06

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Summary of Canadian Com-ments (4)

• CA03 : Define heterogeneity, add why it is important, and explain the relationship with factoring

• Editor’s action : Accept all

2012-06-06

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Summary of Canadian Com-ments (5)

• CA10 : Add DE and DEC to Abbrevia-tion Clause

• Editor’s action : Accept all

2012-06-06

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Summary of Canadian Com-ments (6)

• CA12, CA19 : Change “semantic mapping” to “data element concept mapping”

• Editor’s action : Change “semantic mapping” to “data element map-ping” because mapping is performed at data element level under same data element concept.

2012-06-06

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Summary of Canadian Com-ments (7)

• CA22~24 : Increase the complete-ness of the examples

• Proposals : Modify some table field names and add DC as primary data elements

• Editor’s action : Improve the example reflecting the comments

2012-06-06

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Summary of Canadian Com-ments (8)

• CA26 : Questions about value map-ping

• Editor’s action : Improve the relevant parts reflecting the comments

2012-06-06

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Summary of Canadian Com-ments (8)

• CA06, CA28~29 : Some advices for improvement

• Proposals : Adopt heterogeneity type number and add/complete bibliogra-phies

• Editor’s action : Accept all

2012-06-06

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Summary of Canadian Com-ments (9)

• CA33 : Necessity of Annex B• Proposals : Remove or add explana-

tion• Editor’s action : Enhance Annex B

and the text to include clear explana-tion about the relationship with fac-toring

2012-06-06

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Summary of Canadian Com-ments (10)

• CA36 : General comments• No specific action is needed.

2012-06-06

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Summary of Japanese Com-ments (1)

• JP01 : Comments for errors in trans-forming MS Word file into PDF format

• Editor’s action : To request SC32 Sec-retariat special care while transform-ing word to pdf

2012-06-06

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Summary of US Comments (1)

• Typing errors and English problems– 10 cmmnts : US05~07, US09, US12~13

US29~32

• Editor’s action : Accept all

2012-06-06

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Summary of US Comments (2)

• US01~03 : Make the scope simple and rewrite the content

• Editor’s action : Rewrite the scope re-flecting the comments

2012-06-06

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Summary of US Comments (3)

• US10~11, 26 : Structure of the man-uscript

• Editor’s action : Restructure the rele-vant parts of the manuscript reflect-ing the comments

2012-06-06

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Summary of US Comments (4)

• US14, US16~17, US19 : Make un-clear words clear

• Proposals : Explain “less important” and “primary data element”

• Editor’s action : Change “less impor-tant” to “to expect not to be used” and explain

2012-06-06

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Summary of US Comments (5)

• US18 : Remove the sentence includ-ing “standardization”

• Proposals : Same as above• Editor’s action : Remove “standard-

ization” from the sentence because the sentence is important part of this TR

2012-06-06

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Summary of US Comments (6)

• US33 : Change the title• Proposals : Change title to “Semantic

Mapping Procedure”• Editor’s action : Change title to

“Metadata Mapping Procedure” (cf. CA02)

2012-06-06

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Summary of US Comments (7)

• Need discussion to resolve– US04, US08, US15, US20~25, US28

2012-06-06

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232012-06-06

DATA ELEMENT CONCEPT DATA ELEMENT

(1:1)(1:N)

(1:N)

Property

Object Class

(1:1)

(1:N)

Property

Representation

(1:1)

Object Class

CONCEPTUAL DOMAIN

VALUE MEAN-ING

PERMISSIBLE VALUES VALUE DOMAIN(1:N) (1:1) (N:1)

DEC CD

DE VD

(1:N) (1:N)

(N:1)

(N:1)

Conceptual Level

Representational Level

Mapping is performed at representational level, DE and PV.