SYNOPSIS

FIRST SYNOPSIS:

The opening scene begins with a unemployed father who wakes up to go to a job interview but while he is travelling there is a car chase in which guns are involved. Tragedy strikes when the father gets shot, this is witnessed by his little boy. The death of his father has a big impact on him and it becomes his mission to seek revenge. As he grows up he trains to become a skilled fighter. He finds information about the people that killed his father and discovers that it’s a secret organization that kills individuals who pose a threat to them. He realizes that his father was at the wrong place at the wrong time, strengthening his determination to find the people who killed him.

CRITICISM: it was too advanced for us to do as we can’t really create that scene. It was not within our budget.

SECOND SYNOPSIS

The opening scene would start with a flashback of two little boys running around and playing in a park. The two siblings fight over a toy arrow that they discovered while playing. They get a huge shock as the oldest boy gets kidnapped by an assassin. The flashback ends with the boy waking up in a hospital bed in anger as he realizes that he had lost the fight with the enemy. As he looks to the left we see a red arrow. The scene ends with him talking about his quest to find his missing brother.

CRITICISM: it was too early for the guy to be already in a fight with the

villain. In action films it usually takes place later within the film.

THIRD (FINAL) SYNOPSIS:

Instead of starting with a flashback, we would hear the ECG machine beeping. It would then open with two nurses talking about his health deteriorating. One of the nurses discovers a picture of a boy and a girl. The camera then zooms into the guys face and we are taken into a flashback. The flashback consists of a younger version of the guy, playing with his friend in a park and suddenly a hand takes the little girl. He runs away but when he looks back he visualizes a red light flashing, coming from an arrow. He picks it up and is left with a permanent scar. It then goes back to the hospital and the camera pans up towards his scar. The ECG machine beeps rapidly ending with his eyes opening revealing his different eye colour. The scene ends with the title, ‘Red Arrow’.

We felt this was the best one as we can easily film this and it

makes more sense.