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The whole page was just a bit too much, it had too much on the page and the pictures, colour scheme and fonts didn’t blend well. Also doesn’t fit in with the rest of the magazine as it is rockier and gig where as the front of the magazine is more hip hop/ pop. Doesn’t follow through with the house style It doesn’t relate to the artists that are featured, needs more pictures of artists. Not enough variations of the picture, they are all from the same place. Make sure there are a variety of pictures.

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The whole page was just a bit too much, it had too much on the page and the pictures, colour scheme and fonts didn’t blend well.

Also doesn’t fit in with the rest of the magazine as it is rockier and gig where as the front of the magazine is more hip hop/ pop.

Doesn’t follow through with the house style

It doesn’t relate to the artists that are featured, needs more pictures of artists.

Not enough variations of the picture, they are all from the same place. Make sure there are a variety of pictures.