teach your text to strip: take it off—take it (almost) all off
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Want to give your messages allure? Want your copy to turn readers' heads? Come to this session, and learn how to strip away filler words, peel off the unmentionables, and get down to those bare essentials that keep audiences coming back for more.TRANSCRIPT
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Marcia Riefer Johnston@MarciaRJohnston
Teach Your Text to Strip: Take It Off—Take It (Almost) All Off
#InfoDevWorld
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A few things about conciseness
your English teacher never taught you.
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
What does concise mean (and not mean)?
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
What does concise mean (and not mean)?
Why do I care?
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
What does concise mean (and not mean)?
Why do I care?
How can I write more concisely?
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
What does concise mean (and not mean)?
Why do I care?
How can I write more concisely?Strip
lessons
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
What does concise mean (and not mean)?
Why do I care?
How can I write more concisely?Strip
lessons
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
#InfoDevWorld
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
#InfoDevWorld
No headline?
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
#InfoDevWorld
No headline?
Nobullets?
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
#InfoDevWorld
No headline?
Nobullets? No
verbiage?
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
#InfoDevWorld
No headline?
Nobullets? No
verbiage?
Howconcise!
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
What does concise not mean?
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Short
What does concise not mean?
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
Short
What does concise not mean?
Why?
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Make text, like a skirt, as long as needed.
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
What does concise mean?
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
Minimal
What does concise mean?
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Minimal
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Enough to meet your audiences’ needs
Minimal
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
Enough to meet your audiences’ needs
Enough to accomplish your purpose
Minimal
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
Enough to meet your audiences’ needs
Enough to accomplish your purpose
No more
Minimal
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
Enough to meet your audiences’ needs
Enough to accomplish your purpose
No more No less
Minimal
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
Enough to meet your audiences’ needs
Enough to accomplish your purpose
No more No less
Minimal
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
Write Tight(er): A Time-Saving, Pain-Free
Technique for Selling Yourself, Your Company, or
Your Products through Your Words
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
Audience needs:“What’s in it for me?”
Write Tight(er): A Time-Saving, Pain-Free
Technique for Selling Yourself, Your Company, or
Your Products through Your Words
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
Audience needs:“What’s in it for me?”
My purpose:Lure people
Write Tight(er): A Time-Saving, Pain-Free
Technique for Selling Yourself, Your Company, or
Your Products through Your Words
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
No more
Audience needs:“What’s in it for me?”
My purpose:Lure people
Write Tight(er): A Time-Saving, Pain-Free
Technique for Selling Yourself, Your Company, or
Your Products through Your Words
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
No more No less
Audience needs:“What’s in it for me?”
My purpose:Lure people
Write Tight(er): A Time-Saving, Pain-Free
Technique for Selling Yourself, Your Company, or
Your Products through Your Words
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Why do I care?
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
Why do I care?
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Why do I care?
“Usability was dramatically higher for the concise version [of the website]—58% better.”
Nielsen Norman Groupwww.nngroup.com/articles/how-users-read-on-the-web
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
Why do I care?
“Usability was dramatically higher for the concise version [of the website]—58% better.”
Nielsen Norman Groupwww.nngroup.com/articles/how-users-read-on-the-web
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
Write Tight (er)
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
This is your toothbrush when it’s new. The blue bristles are blue all the way to their tips.
This is your toothbrush when it’s ready to replace. The blue bristles have turned half white.
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How much $ can you save?
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?words6
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?words6
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
You may need a loan.
words6
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
Translation savings:
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
Translation savings:
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
Translation savings:
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
1 sentence, 1 language
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
Translation savings:
$ 0.25
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
1 sentence, 1 language
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
Translation savings:
$ 0.25
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
10,000 sentences, 1 language
1 sentence, 1 language
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
Translation savings:
$ 0.25
$ 2,500.00
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
10,000 sentences, 1 language
1 sentence, 1 language
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
Translation savings:
$ 0.25
$ 2,500.00
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
10,000 sentences, 25 languages
10,000 sentences, 1 language
1 sentence, 1 language
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#InfoDevWorld @MarciaRJohnston Teach Your Text to Strip HowToWriteEverything.com
You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
Translation savings:
$ 0.25
$ 2,500.00
$ 62,500.00
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
10,000 sentences, 25 languages
10,000 sentences, 1 language
1 sentence, 1 language
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You may be needing a loan.
How much $ can you save?
Translation savings:
$ 0.25
$ 2,500.00
$ 62,500.00
You may need a loan.
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10,000 sentences, 25 languages
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be-verb. Any form of the verb to be—namely, am, are, be, been, being, is, was, and were—whether used as an auxiliary verb or as a main verb.
—Bryan GarnerGarner’s Modern American Usage
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“A scheme of which every part promises delight can never be successful.”
—Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
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“A scheme of which every part promises delight can never be successful.”
—Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
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Audit logs are proof that no data breach has occurred.
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Audit logs are proof that no data breach has occurred.
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Our team wants to be predictive.
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Our team wants to be predictive.
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Our team wants to be predictive.
What does the team
want to do?
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Skydiving was fun.
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Skydiving was fun.
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Skydiving was fun.
What happened?
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“Write when there is something that you know; and not before; and not too damned much after.”
—Ernest Hemingway, Death in the Afternoon
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“Write when there is something that you know; and not before; and not too damned much after.”
—Ernest Hemingway, Death in the Afternoon
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www.hemingwayapp.com
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www.hemingwayapp.com
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www.hemingwayapp.com
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www.hemingwayapp.com
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What it is is…
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“What was found was that access points on maps were not reflective or accurate for where they are.”
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“What was found was that access points on maps were not reflective or accurate for where they are.”
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“ There are known knowns. These are things we know that we know. There are known unknowns. That is to say, there are things
that we know we don’t know. But there are also unknown unknowns. There are things
we don’t know we don’t know.”(attributed to a one-time US secretary of defense)
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“ There are known knowns. These are things we know that we know. There are known unknowns. That is to say, there are things
that we know we don’t know. But there are also unknown unknowns. There are things
we don’t know we don’t know.”(attributed to a one-time US secretary of defense)
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“ There are known knowns. These are things we know that we know. There are known unknowns. That is to say, there are things
that we know we don’t know. But there are also unknown unknowns. There are things
we don’t know we don’t know.”(attributed to a one-time US secretary of defense)
We don’t know diddly—
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“ There are known knowns. These are things we know that we know. There are known unknowns. That is to say, there are things
that we know we don’t know. But there are also unknown unknowns. There are things
we don’t know we don’t know.”(attributed to a one-time US secretary of defense)
We don’t know diddly—except to avoid (most) be-verbs.
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Gypsy Rose Lee was a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act. She was also a playwright.
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Gypsy Rose Lee was a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act. She was also a playwright.Gypsy Rose Lee, a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act, also wrote plays.
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WordsGypsy Rose Lee was a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act. She was also a playwright. 19Gypsy Rose Lee, a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act, also wrote plays. 16
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Gypsy Rose Lee was a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act. She was also a playwright. 19 $4.75Gypsy Rose Lee, a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act, also wrote plays. 16 $4.00
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Gypsy Rose Lee was a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act. She was also a playwright. 19 $4.75 $118.75Gypsy Rose Lee, a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act, also wrote plays. 16 $4.00 $100.00
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Gypsy Rose Lee was a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act. She was also a playwright. 19 $4.75 $118.75 $1,187,500.00Gypsy Rose Lee, a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act, also wrote plays. 16 $4.00 $100.00 $1,000,000.00
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Cost to translate into 1 language 25 lang.
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Gypsy Rose Lee was a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act. She was also a playwright. 19 $4.75 $118.75 $1,187,500.00Gypsy Rose Lee, a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act, also wrote plays. 16 $4.00 $100.00 $1,000,000.00
Savings 16% $0.75 $18.75 $187,500.00
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Cost to translate into 1 language 25 lang.
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Gypsy Rose Lee was a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act. She was also a playwright. 19 $4.75 $118.75 $1,187,500.00Gypsy Rose Lee, a burlesque entertainer famous for her classy, witty striptease act, also wrote plays. 16 $4.00 $100.00 $1,000,000.00
Savings 16% $0.75 $18.75 $187,500.00
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Use be-verbs when they serve a purpose.
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what?
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is
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“Content is something you can run an ad alongside of.”
—Nora Ephron, I Remember Nothing
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“Content is something you can run an ad alongside of.”
—Nora Ephron, I Remember Nothing
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“Content is something you can run an ad alongside of.”
—Nora Ephron, I Remember Nothing
content
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“Content is something you can run an ad alongside of.”
—Nora Ephron, I Remember Nothing
content ads
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“Content is something you can run an ad alongside of.”
—Nora Ephron, I Remember Nothing
content ads
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See be-verbs.
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Now available
Start seeing be-verbs.HowToWriteEverything.com
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Be-verbs are everywhere. See?
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Be-verbs are everywhere. See?
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Is that a be-verb in your pocket?
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)the fact thatjustbegin to, try to, tend to, in order toperiod of timein light of, in spite of, in terms of (& of in general)proverbialdifferent (as in many different, 36 different)particularverbiageany other verbiage or unneeded words that you can pitch
Strip off these words!**unless you need them
We takethe rest off in myworkshop.
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Adjectives • absolutely certain, absolutely essential, absolutely
guaranteed, completely necessary, totally sure• bald-headed• best ever, first ever• blue in color, few in number, long in duration, nubbly in
texture, round in shape, slovenly in appearance, short in height, slow in speed, small in size, tall in stature
• booked solid• exact same, same exact, same identical• filled to capacity• incredible to believe, visible to the eye, warm to the touch
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Nouns • actual experience, actual fact• added bonus• advance notice, advance planning, advance preview,
advance reservations, advance warning• all-time favorite, all-time record• alternative choice• anonymous stranger• annual anniversary• armed gunman• artificial prosthesis• autobiography of her own life, biography of his life
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Nouns • actual experience, actual fact• added bonus• advance notice, advance planning, advance preview,
advance reservations, advance warning• all-time favorite, all-time record• alternative choice• anonymous stranger• annual anniversary• armed gunman• artificial prosthesis• autobiography of her own life, biography of his life
And that’s justthe a’s.
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Verbs • add an additional• aid and abet, cease and desist, pick and choose• allow you to be able to• always include• ask the question• assemble together, attach together, blend together,
collaborate together, combine together, confer together, connect together, cooperate together, fuse together, gather together, join together, integrate together, meet together, merge together, mingle together, mix together, pool together, share together, splice together
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Odds and Ends
• 6 a.m. in the morning, 10 p.m. in the evening, twelve noon, twelve midnight
• and etc.
• ATM machine, GOP party, GRE exam, HIV virus, ISBN number, LCD display, PIN number, RAM memory, UPC code—and my favorite: Please RSVP
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www.HowToWriteEverything.com/Annals-of-Redundancy-Annals/
More on redundancy …
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