team 1 underlined mistakes
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Team 1
Characters:
Tom
Victoria
Ralph
Marie
Sophie
Mike
CONVERSATION
SCENE 1 SEALING TICKETS (TIME: 00:00 2:34)Ralph:
Tom:Ralph:
Tom:
Ralph:
Marie:
Tom:
Marie:
Mike:
Tom:
Mike:
Good morning! There is my ticket.
Good morning! Sir. Why are you serius?Sorry!
Why are you so serius? You are great!, You have a smile
wonderful!
You should smile.
Really? Thank you.
Check it please.
You have chick wonderful. You are beautiful!
Do you think so? Thanks.
Hey! What happen here? What do you doing with these
people? Are they your friends or family?
You look great! You are so elegant. What a suit nice!
Thats a color fantastic.
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Tom: Do you think so?
You are great men! , You look very nice and fantastic!
SCENE 2 PHOTO FOR THE PASSPORT (TIME 4:05 5:21)
Victoria:
Tom:
Victoria:
No smiling is permitting here Next
You are very pretty! Can you give me a smile?
Your name is Victoria, arent you?. You has a nice name.
It is closed. I have to go. Goodbye
SCENE 3 CHANGING ATTITUDE (TIME 5:32-7:38)Tom:
Victoria:
Tom:
Victoria:
Tom:
Victoria:
Ralph:
Tom:
Ralph:
Tom:
Those the flowers are for you.
Next.
Why cant you smile? You should to smile, and you
have to smile, please.
Wait! Dont run fast.
Would you like a coffee, a tea or an ice cream?
Look at the dog!
Next
Chocolates for youThis heart is for you.
Im sad. Why cant you smile?
Im sorry. I have to work.
Can you validate it please?
Ok. You are OK.
OK: Did you say OK?
Yes, you are fine.
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SCENE 4 TRANSMITING SMILES (TIME 7: 42 8:50,9:33 9:50)Ralph and
Marie:
Tom:
Ralph:
Tom:
Sophie:
Tom:
Excuse me! Can you take a picture, please?
Sure!
Thanks.
Smile.
Do you love each other? You are a nice couple.
Thats great! You are really nice people. Great!
Other, one more, one more. Beautiful!
You have nice eyes and a nice face.
Excuse me!
You have a nice smile. Can you give a smile and take a
picture, please?
SCENE 5 FINAL MEETING (TIME 11:52-14:47)Tom:
Victoria:
I dont understanding. You are smiling.
Yes, I am. I can now.
You made smile my mom. I smile for you.
You are great!, You are amazing!, You are a great man! I
love you.
Give me a smile too.
Hi! Guys
Your dialogues are very nice. The format of the document isperfect; you used all the tools and indications I gave you.
You have to check only grammar, syntax and spelling.
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1. Use of there and here. Check dictionary to see thedifferences, you can check this dictionary online:http://www.wordreference.com/es/translation.asp?tranword=online
2. Spelling for serius, check it please.3. Use of adjectives/ Order of an adjective in a sentence.
Check this website and correct them. http://www.english-zone.com/grammar/adjective-find01.html Observe andmake the exercise.
4. Use of have and has http://www.engvid.com/english-
grammar-have-has-had/5. Use of these and those http://www.engvid.com/basic-
grammar-this-that-these-those/6. Use of the modal verb should:
http://www.engvid.com/give-advice-should-ought-to-had-better/
7. You have to use more frequency adverbs andconnectors.
Good luck my dear students!
ATTEMiss. Adriana Fernndez Daz.
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