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TELL SUCCESS STORIES THAT

CAPTIVATE AND COMPEL.

WRITE CASE HISTORIES THAT MAKE

CLIENTS WANT TO WORK WITH YOU.

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WHY Success Stories?

• Establish Credibility

• Motivate Desire to work with you

• Prospects see themselves, their situation


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1. S.A.R. or S.O.A.R. Aw, come on

2. “Play the Movie:” Borrow Hollywood’s ABCD Formula

3. Find the Hero with the “Frodo Factor”

4. Dump Dry as Toast Titles/Headlines

5. Steal 3 Powerful Story Platforms from Memoir

6. Make 2 Points Absolutely Clear: The “Thing” and the “Other Thing”

7. It’s NOT About You But About Client Outcomes—Okay, Sometimes It Is About You


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1. S.A.R. or S.O.A.R.

Don’t tell a tale from objectives to results.

(Or, from results to reasons why.)

That’s biz talk.

And it gives away the ending!

Create SUSPENSE!


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CLIENT: BLUE WATER

PROJECT: PUMP STATION & PIPING PROJECT

LOCATION: OMAHA

Blue Water, a regulated utility, needed to

enhance its public water system in the Omaha

metro area.


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Try fresh language

Challenge: Client obstacle/opportunity

Idea/Insight: What did you uncover?

Execution: How you brought about change.

Outcomes: Tangible & intangible.


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Nail it with validation

Proof: Testimonial quotation.

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Tell it like a story …

in normal human language


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2. “Play the Movie”: ABCD

Action

Backstory

Conflict/Climax

Destination


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ABCD—Hollywood’s Formula

Bang!

Drop us into the ACTION

“The Inciting Incident radically

upsets the balance of forces in the

protagonist’s life.”

Robert McKee, Story


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BACKSTORY: think flashback

Establish situation, characters

Catch us up to present moment

But, not so much background

that it becomes the story.


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NO CONFLICT. NO STORY.

What’s at stake?

What’s in it for your client?

What’s in it for you?

If they/you win or lose?


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Create scenes with …

struggle,

fears,

setbacks,

mistakes

Tell it as it was lived.

Build intrigue.


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CLIMAX

The final turning point—

the end of the quest.

What does SUCCESS

look like?


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Destination

Lessons learned

Future direction

Call to action


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Write & tell your story

with the end in mind.

Don’t meander.

Build to it.

Patricia Fripp: “Last words linger.”

Doug Stevenson: “The phrase that

pays.”


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3. Exploit the “Frodo Factor”

People like stories about people—

(not processes) who . . .

Struggle against the odds.

Achieve exceptional results.

Character: “a telling detail”

Dialogue: “the ring of truth”


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3. Dump Dry as Toast Titles

Write ads.

Direct

marketing ads!


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Telegraphic Titles That Tease

Explain

Use numbers

Use an “ing” verb

Create a need

How to Brand Your Digital Content

(Where, Why, When, What)

“77 Instant-Action Ideas to Boost Sales,

Maximize Profits, and Crush Your

Competition” (D. Newman CSP)

Telling the Brand’s Story at Every Touchpoint

Why Brands Fail Without These

Fundamentals


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Use a whole sentence

Declarative

Savvy Promotions Create Loyalty

Imperative

Embrace Social Media or Die

Interrogative

Can You Broaden Your Target and Not Lose Your Niche?


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Headlines: The Four “U’s”

USEFUL

URGENT

UNIQUE

ULTRA-SPECIFIC

American Writers & Artists


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Headlines: Get ‘em in the door

• 5-8 words

• Concrete nouns = images

• Action words = verbs (but don’t start with it)

• Tone must match story

• Write a lot of them

• Simple & clear. Forget “creative” or “clever”.


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• Creates

• Exceeds

• Builds

• Achieves

• Brightens

• Invigorates

• Learns

• Grows

• Expands

• Fulfills

• Sustains

• Surpasses

• Conducts

• Changes

• Succeeds

• Starts

• Seizes

• Nurtures

• Leads

• Directs

Action/Power Words


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“25K people drank rusty water.

Now they don’t.”

CLIENT: BLUE WATER

PROJECT: PUMP STATION & PIPING PROJECT

LOCATION: OMAHA

Blue Water, a regulated utility, needed to

enhance its public water system in the Omaha

metro area.


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5. Steal 3 Story Platforms from Memoir

1. Obstacles overcome.

E.g., faced a challenge and succeeded. What happened? • When we/they . . . • We/ they achieved

… • so we/they learned . .

. A classic story of a

hero’s journey


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2. Had it, lost it, and got it back. E.g., client or you had been successful,

but then fell down hard. What did you do? A classic story of …

invention re-invention redemption


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3. Fish out of water (Stranger in a strange land)

E.g., completely unfamiliar

territory or a challenge never faced before

A survival story: more than

endure & but perform beyond expectation


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6. Make 2 Things Clear:

The “Thing” and the “Other Thing”

The thing . . . the core story

We had a choice to make. Keep working like we were shooting down rapids in a kayak with no paddle. We were bound to drown or fix our logistics problem.

We applied systems thinking and identified every constraint in the supply chain right to customer’s door.

& the other thing . . . meaning

We draw order out of chaos.


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2 Things: Emotional

The thing . . .

The Ecuadorean mother was poor; she had to

choose between medicine for her sick infant

and food for her other children.

And the other thing . . .

No mother should have to make this choice.


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7. It’s NOT About You

But About Client OUTCOMES

Make your clients the HERO.

They had the courage to bring

you in.

Supported your ideas and

services.

It’s their SUCCESS.


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Be Authentic

• Speak from the head and the heart.

– Clients buy YOU before they buy what you are

selling.

• Use “kitchen table” English

• Fresh language (Banish jargon)

Show. Don’t tell!


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