tense consistency exercise the second reason why i am in college is i want to complete my dream of...
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Tense Consistency Exercise
• The second reason why I am in college is I want to complete my dream of becoming a nurse. Why I have this dream is because when I was young, my grandmother always GOT sick and went to the hospital, also my relatives WERE very busy with their jobs, so if my grandmother GOT sick, I HAD to stay at hospital to take care her. USUALLY, when someone gets sick their mood is very bad, but sometimes I saw that the nurses DID NOT TAKE OF care the patientS very well. They WERE not very nice to the patients. Maybe they DIDN’T know when the patients were in a bad mood. From that time, I WANTED to become a nurse to do by best to take care of patients.
• Though it is very hard to become a nurse in United Stated. However, I will work hard to make my dream come true. If I want to become a nurse the only way it fulfill my dream is to go to school. Therefore, I want a college education because I WANT to complete my dream to become a nurse try my best to take care of patients.
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Modifiers
Adjectives
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Adjective + Noun
• the college student
• the Private School
• a disadvantaged child
• larger classes
• a six-year-old child
• An IQ test
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Adjective Clauses
• The school, which is located by the river, is a good school.
• The school that has quotas is an affirmative action school.
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Adjective Phrases
• The school near the river is a good school.
• The ideal location for a college is in a small town.
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Adverbs + Verbs
• He studies hard.
• He learns quickly.
• He hardly studies.
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Adverb + Adjective
• The students studied very hard.
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Adverb + Adverb
• He progressed quite slowly.
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Adverbial Phrases
• My dad takes a brisk walk before breakfast every day of his life.
• My grandmother was born in an old house on the plains of northern Nebraska.
• She promised to meet him for lunch next Tuesday.
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Rule
• Modifiers go as close as possible to word they modify.
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Misplaced Modifier
• Charlotte brought the bicycle to the repair shop that she bought.
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• Charlotte brought the bicycle to the repair shop that she bought.
• Charlotte brought the bicycle that she bought to the repair shop.
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Misplaced Modifiers
• The student finished the test with the long hair.
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Misplaced modifiers
• The student finished the test with the long hair.
• The student with the long hair finished the test.
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Misplaced Modifiers
• John walked his dog with the flu.
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Misplaced Modifiers
• John walked his dog with the flu.
• With the flu, John walked his dog.
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Misplaced Modifiers
• We saw a car in front of the store that was red.
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Misplaced Modifiers
• We saw a car in front of the store that was red.
• We saw a car that was red in front of the store.