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Rhetorical analysis
Monday, March 2, 2015
Elbow Partners
Sit with a partner whom you have not
worked with this semester!
What is rhetorical analysis?
deconstructing nonfiction texts –speeches, essays, editorials,
etc.— and evaluating how the author creates meaning, establishes
and proves his/her claim
making judgments about whether or not an author has succeeded
in his or her purpose
Rhetoric—Analyzing techniques that make persuasion possible
Audience/
Readers(Pathos)
Subject/Topic/
Message
(Logos)
Purpose
ContextContext
Context
Speaker/Writer(Ethos)
It’s not just for essays
“What Aristotle and Joshua Bell can teach us about
persuasion” by Conor Neill
Ethos- credibility of the speaker
Writers/speakers ask the audience to
o trust them (intelligence, goodwill and virtue)
o believe them
o to bear with them
o to listen to them
Readers/Audiences must question the speaker’s
authority, trustworthiness, motives.
You must consider the writer’s integrity and
attitude towards his/her audience.
Establishing Ethos
1. Demonstrating knowledge about the topic
o position, job title, experience, etc.
2. Establishing common ground with the
audience through respect and concern
3. Demonstrating fairness and evenhandedness
4. Displaying confidence
5. Presenting yourself in a suitable manner—
physical appearance
6. Connecting your beliefs to core principles that
are widely respected
7. Using appropriate language for the audience,
neither speaking above nor below their
capabilities.
8. Citing credible, reliable sources
9. Admitting limitations, exceptions, or weaknesses
of your argument. Making these concessions
(anticipating the potential rebuttals of your
audience) makes the audience belief that you
have respect for them and that you have carefully
considered your position.
Logos-logic of the argument
“word” or “reason”
Rational argument
Logic behind the arguments
Examples:
factual evidence for support
“Nine out of ten doctors agree…”
Examples of evidence:
statistics, charts, graphs, definitions, surveys, polls,
examples, narratives, personal testimonies, etc.
Evaluating Polls
There are three important aspects to consider when
evaluating polls:
1. The source —who commissioned the poll, who
published it, and any associated bias.
2. The statistical methodology—who was
interviewed, how they were interviewed.
3. The questions —how were they asked, in what
order, with what language?
Pathos– evoking emotions
PATHOS—the quality or power of evoking the audience’s emotions
Primarily achieved through the use of strong emotional diction (evocative words)
Powerful images that evoke emotions
Anecdotes —stories
Immediacy contributes to the effectiveness of emotional appeals
Pathos appeals to the heart and to one’s emotions.
Pathos—Examples
Stories or testimonials
Personal anecdotes or stories
Personal connections
Imagery and figurative language that provokes an
emotional response
Visual images or words that inspire you to empathize or
have compassion towards the idea/topic
Powerful words, phrases, or images that stir up emotion
See Handout pg. 7
1) ethos
2) pathos
3) Logos
See Handout pg. 7
Identify the rhetorical appeals
Does the commercial or advertisement (mainly)
use ethos, logos, or pathos?
Taylor Swift, a Diet Coke, & a cat.
ETHOSPeople tend to trust the choices
famous people make, so celebrity
endorsements help establish
credibility with the audience.
The Real Cost of Smoking
The Real Cost of Smoking
PathosThere are several emotionally charged words:
contract, relinquish, freedom, bound; repetition of
“you” to underscore control supposed to evoke
a sense of helplessness from the audience.
What else did you notice?
Kevin and the Train
Kevin and the Train
LOGOSThis platform safety PSA displays several facts about
the situation as it’s unfolding. It is a logical argument
to not jump onto the tracks to save your phone
because a life > a phone.
Style– Author’s choice
refers to the choices one makes that involve words, phrases, and sentences.
should be appropriate for author’s purpose and affects the way that a reader reacts to a piece.
Four aspects of style:
Diction
Imagery
Syntax
Figures of speech
Diction (…ary)
This is word choice:
General vs. Specific words.
Formal versus Informal
Denotation and connotation.
Monosyllabic words and polysyllabic words.
See handout p. 2
Diction—Charged Words
Charged words are words with strong
connotations beyond their literal meaning that
are likely to produce an emotional response.
Tyranny—evokes a feeling of fear, suggests living in a state
of terror
Liberty—suggests an ideal life characterized by freedom
Justice—can be associated with freedom and equality
Honor—evokes a sense of morality and dignity
Declaration of Independence
“[King George] is at this time transporting large
armies of foreign mercenaries to complete the
works of death, desolation, and tyranny,
already begun with circumstances of cruelty
and perfidy scarcely paralleled in the most
barbarous ages, and totally unworthy the Head
of a civilized nation.”
Charged Words
He is at this time transporting large armies of foreign
mercenaries to complete the works of death,
desolation, and tyranny, already begun with
circumstances of cruelty and perfidy scarcely
paralleled in the most barbarous ages, and totally
unworthy the head of a civilized nation.
The Effect of Charged Words
“Grandmother Arrested in Pot Sting”
The fact that the person is a grandmother has no relevance to the
fact that she was arrested on a drug charge. It may not even
reflect the fact that she is old, since I’ve known grandmothers as
young as 32. But the use of the term conjures up an image of a
sweet, gentle person, and juxtaposed against the crime, elicits far
more outrage than if the headline was …
“Local Woman Arrested in Pot Sting”
Imagery
Imagery is words that appeal to the senses.Visual - “There are black clouds of God’s wrath now hanging
directly over your head” (Edwards)
Auditory – the wind whistling through the trees, the rumbling waves rushing past
Tactile/Emotional – “How awful it is to be left behind at such a day! To see so many others feasting….” (Edwards)
Oral – the puckering twang of lemon juice
Olfactory – wet dog after a morning rain shower
Syntax
Syntax—construction of sentences.
Syntax discusses:
Sentence type: complex or simple?
Sentence length: short or long?
Active vs. passive sentences
Pacing. Sentence construction can speed up the
reading of a passage or slow it down.
View handout p. 2
Restatement
Repeating an idea in a variety of ways, using
different words to reinforce a point.
Anaphora
Repetition of the same word or group of words at the beginning of successive clauses, sentences, or lines.
“This royal throne of kings, this sceptred isle, This earth of majesty, this seat of Mars, This other Eden, demi-paradise, This fortress built by Nature for herself Against infection and the hand of war, This happy breed of men, this little world, This precious stone set in the silver sea…”
-John of GauntShakespeare's Richard II (2.1.40-51; 57-60)
See handout p. 3
Anastrophe… (SVO)
Inversion: anastrophe occurs whenever normal syntactical arrangement is violated for emphasis:
The verb before the subject-noun (normal syntax follows the order subject-noun, verb): Glistens the dew upon the morning grass. (Normally: The dew glistens upon the morning grass)
Adjective following the noun it modifies (normal syntax is adjective, noun): She looked at the sky dark and menacing. (Normally: She looked at the dark and menacing sky)
The object preceding its verb (normal syntax is verb followed by its object): Troubles, everybody's got. (Normally: Everybody's got troubles.)
Epistrophe
Is the reverse of anaphora; repetition of
same word or group at the end of clauses.
They saw no evil, they spoke no evil, and
they heard no evil.
Asyndeton (uh-SIN-du-ton)
Omission of conjunctions between related clauses
I came, I saw, I conquered.
deliberate use of conjunctions between each clause
in a series of clauses
This year I am taking math and English and history and
gym and physics and Spanish and creative writing and
creative photography.
Polysyndeton
Antithesis
opposition, or contrast of ideas or words in a balanced or
parallel construction. The idea is that they enhance one
another, kind of like two halves of the perfect whole:
yin and yang
sweet and sour
Good cop / Bad cop
Sink or swim.
Black or white.
“It can't be wrong if it feels so right.” --Debbie Boone
Chiasmus & Antimetabole
Arrangement of ideas in the second clause is a
reversal of the first.
1. Chiasmus is, specifically, the reversal of grammatical
structures in successive phrases or clauses:
It is hard to make money, but to spend it is easy.
2. Antimetabole is, specifically, the repetition of words, in
successive clauses, in reverse grammatical order:
“Ask not what your country can do for you; ask what you can do for
your country.” --JFK
Chiasmus & Antimetabole
When the going gets tough, the tough get going.
Woe unto them that call evil good, and good evil; that put darkness for light, and light for darkness; that put bitter for sweet, and sweet for bitter! -Isaiah 5:20
Rhetorical Question
A question posed by the speaker or writer
not to seek an answer but instead to affirm
or deny a point by simply asking the
question
Do I really need to ask you to clean your
room again?
Parallelism
Similarity of structure in a pair or series of related words, phrases, or clauses.
parallelism of words: She tried to make her pastry fluffy, sweet, and delicate.
parallelism of phrases: Singing a song or writing a poem is joyous.
parallelism of clauses: Perch are inexpensive; cod are cheap; trout are abundant; but salmon are best.
Juxtaposition
A poetic and rhetorical device in which normally
unassociated ideas, words, or phrases are placed
next to one another.
Light and dark images
Life and death
Cold and hot
Rhetorical Devices & Figurative Language
Alliteration Assonance
Consonance Simile
Metaphors Personification
Onomatopoeia Hyperbole
Understatement Litotes
Paradox Oxymoron
Pun Irony
Sarcasm Allusion
Synecdoche Metonymy
Zeugma Conceit
Litotes
Deliberate understatement, especially when expressing a
thought by denying its opposite.
She was not unmindful of the fact that she still owes me
twenty dollars.
Since he’s no small man, perhaps he should reconsider the
skinny jeans he likes so much.
Conceit
An extended metaphor. Popular during the Renaissance and typical of John Donne or John Milton.
Marke but this flea, and marke in this,
How little that which thou deny'st me is;
Me it suck'd first, and now sucks thee,
And in this flea our two bloods mingled bee;
Confesse it, this cannot be said
A sinne, or shame, or losse of maidenhead,
Yet this enjoyes before it wooe,
And pamper'd swells with one blood made of two,
And this, alas, is more than wee would doe.
-- “The Flea” John Donne
Allusion
A reference to mythological, literary, historical, or
Biblical person, place or thing
Anecdote
A brief narrative offered to capture the audience’s
attention or to contribute to the overall purpose
Synechdoche
A whole is represented by naming one of its parts
The rustler bragged he'd absconded with five hundred head of longhorns. Both "head" and "longhorns" are parts of cattle that represent them as wholes
Listen, you've got to come take a look at my new set of wheels.
He shall think differently," the musketeer threatened, "when he feels the point of my steel."
See handout p. 5
Metonymy
Reference to something or someone by naming one of its attributes.
The pen is mightier than the sword. The pen is an attribute of thoughts that are written with a pen; the sword is an attribute of military action
We await word from the crown.
The IRS is auditing me? Great. All I need is a couple of suitsarriving at my door.
Speaker
MessageAudience
Rhetorical TriangleSoaps method
Subject—the general idea, content and ideas
Occasion—time, place, context, or current situation for the writing.
Consider what events prompted the writing.
Audience—the target audience (try to be specific—education
level, beliefs and values, predisposition towards the speaker)
Purpose—what the author hopes the reader will take from the
piece.
Speaker—evaluate the ethos of the speaker
Activities
Woooh! Now you can work with your partner.
Speeches
“Inch by Inch”– Al Pacino
Braveheart– Mel Gibson