The Forum’s Newest ReporterIntroduce Yourself as an Archetype : (25-50 words.)

I am “The Mentor.” I give advice to the protagonist and I lead them to do the right decisions when they have external or internal conflicts. I guide the protagonist and help them accomplish what they need to do.

Introduce Yourself as a Reflective Revisionist (What has revising your writing taught you?) (25-50 words)

I am a Reflective Revisionist and revising my writing has taught me many lessons and taught me how to make my writing almost perfect. Before this year, I was not a fan of revising my writing because I thought there was no meaning to it. I just wrote my final from scratch. However, this year revising is very important.

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Gilgamesh Laments Friend’s Death

Editor’s Note 2 (10 points) We need a “Did you know” section to spice up the page. Write two sentences comparing

Guilt Cultures to Shame Cultures. Be sure to use Transitional Words between the sentences.

Editor’s Note 3 (10 points) Our readers really want an active and exciting type writing. Alas, our last writer used way too may “be”

Verbs. Please identify them by Highlighting or underlining them.

Editor’s Note 4 (10 points) You know, I think what would really work is if you offer some fixes.

Pick five sentences to “fix” and place them in the “Your fixes” column.

Your fixes Sentence #.......New Sentence

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1. The wild man is dead. 2. After an adventurous life of being raised by wolves, finding true love, wrestling with a king to defend the honor of a new bride, the wild man succumbed to a fateful dream and breathed his last. 3. The King, party boy that he was, seemed changed in that he no longer sought out hedonistic pleasures, but began a quest that we will all one day take, the quest for purpose and meaning, for longevity and legacy. 4. Thus, Gilgamesh became what we might call a dynamic character. 5. Let’s give the king props for having a Greek moment of recognition and becoming a better man. 6.The lamentation started by Gilgamesh, a demi-God in his own right, walked through a mountain. 7. Then, due to a Godly denial of his request for eternal life, Gilgamesh traveled to the flood survivor to have a one on one chat. 8. Learning of what became of the human race, Gilgamesh moved on after obtaining some important information about a flower. 9. Being strong and determined, Gilgamesh managed to locate the flower of eternal youth, but lost it to a sea serpent. 10. Finally, the King gave up, returned home, lived out his life, and died.

Did U Know

Guilt CulturesGuilt cultures is different from shame cultures. First of all, to have guilt is different from having shame. Guilt is when you did something wrong and you feel bad that you did such a thing.

Shame CulturesShame cultures is different from Guilt cultures. To have shame means that you feel embarassed and you have the need to redeem yourself.

1. The wild man died.2. The wild man took his last

breathe after his adventurous life of living with wolves and wrestling with the king to find his new love.

3. The King, whom enjoyed to party, no longer sought out hedonistic pleasures. He began a quest that we will all one day take, the quest for purpose and meaning, for longevity and legacy.

5. The King deserves a strong recognition for becoming an improved man.

6 . A demi-God in which whom the lamentation started by Gilgamesh walked right through a mountain.

Blind Prophet Right

Strophe / AntistropheStrophe (15 points)

Anti-Strophe (15 points)

I strongly believe that Oedipus Rex deserves mercy and does not need to be punished. Oedipus had no idea he killed his own father. He was cursed. Oedipus was only a new born when he was told he would kill his own father and marry his mother. Oedipus already feel ad enough that he betrayed his own town. However, I do not believe he betrayed the town. I understand that once you are cursed, you could not undo it. Oedipus is innocent and deserves to be free.

WORKING TITLE:

OPTION ALPHA “King Oedipus Bids Farewell” OR OPTION OMEGA “Internal Affairs Takes on New Meaning”

Editor’s Note 5: Using the two small articles to the right, create a

point (support for) and a counterpoint (argument against) the

following statement.

“Because Oedipus Rex is set up as a Murder Trial, the concept of

Justice demands punishment, and there should be no mercy for

Oedipus Rex.”

Be sure to use strong arguments in both pieces, including literary

referencing and not mix points. Treat each piece as individual

articles. One-Three Paragraphs (50-100 words each)

I strongly believe that Oedipus Rex deserves no Mercy. He murdered our once loved King, Laius. Adding, Laius was his own father. His own flesh in blood. The town trusted Oedipus and crowned him as King. But, he betrayed us by being a cruel murderer who killed his own father. Oedipus Rex deserves punishment and should have NO mercy.

All Staffers Required to Get a Good Pronoun Lesson

Old Timers Gather Round the Forum to Learn About Replacement Words Called Pronouns

Editor’s Note 6: Listen, There’s some serious pronoun abuse going on here. I’ve a presentation when the sun is at midday. Can you just check my presentation notes quickly by marking up these labels. (5 points) and giving samples on the bottom half (5 points)

1. Go to Delphi and the oracle. 2. We know that Oedipus is guilty of murder. 3. It is a day filled with Apollo’s bright sunlight. 4. I guess I’ll have to get to the bottom of this murder mystery myself. 5. Jocasta defied the stars. She really should not have tried to escape her fate.

A. Second Person Assumed # ____2________B. Antecedent # ___3_______C. Dummy Pronoun # ____1_______D. Reflexive # __4_______E. Editorial We # ___5_______

6. Second Person Possessive Plural- We all need to be calm.7. Pluralis Modestiae8. Third Person Male- He showed courage.9. Antecedent Agreement10. First Person Possessive Singular – I wrote this essay quickly.

(Name) Writes Exemplar Essay!

Answers Question in Beautiful Essay Form and… Uses 5 Vocabulary words correctly (10 points)!

In an incredible celebration on the streets of Hampton Roads, star reporter (fill in name here) gathers his/her fan base to share the winning of the Pulitzer Prize for this year’s Best in Essay Writing Category. The topic was daring, and the writing followed all the proper formatting of good essay writing.

Said one stunned fan, who managed to squeeze through the huge midnight crowd to catch a glimpse of the newest member of the Pulitzer winners. “I was so excited to be able to be in the same area as him/her. I mean who else could so eloquently support body paragraphs with literary referencing, offering opinion which is never unverified, but also backed up by the contents of the literature (10 points)”

Another fan – who cathartically choked up on tears during the interview – was impressed with the outstanding hook that not only attracted the reader to delve into the writing, but also managed to maintain a delicate balance of transitions (10 points).

A third bystander, one who camped out on the grounds immediately upon hearing that the famed writer may make a public appearance, respectfully disagreed with the two other fans. “I can appreciate these items, but the genius is in the conclusion, which is not only broad and didactic, but analyzes as well as summarizes. It shows – in one paragraph, mind you – the significance of all the paragraphs that come before it (10 points). Who could not just want to live life just a little bit stronger after reading such beautiful words?”

Legendary timesFeature Essay Fully Published in This Edition!!!!

- Since An Epoch Ago

And the winner is….

(Fill in your name here)

Tallwood Scholar Wins Pulitzer for Unequaled Style and Analytical Panache in World’s Coveted Prize

Legendary timesOriginal Essay! Full Text!- The World’s Most Epic News Source Since An Epoch Ago

TACIT, INTERMINABL,INDIGNANT REVERENCE, CLAMORE

When considering two characters studied thus far in class, find the similarities and differences of the characters in the following categories: Ethics, Wisdom of Action, and Motivation. After viewing these categories would you say that the two characters share the same archetype? Why or why not?

The similarity of the two characters Oedipus Rex and Gilgamesh create a shocking outcome. Oedipus Rex, the king of Thebes and Gilgamesh, king of Uruk share the same archetypes in a way that readers can tacit.

Oedipus Rex and Gilgamesh both have a motivation in both stories. Oedipus takes a journey which seems to be interminable. He had the urge to figure out who he really was as a person after he found out the devastating action he made upon himself, his family, and his town. No one had reverence for Oedipus so they punished him and banned him from Thebes. Oedipus soon had the motivation to figure himself out and try to fix the shame he was feeling. Gilgamesh also had a motivation after his “sidekick” died after eating a lotus flower. Gilgamesh was not a very nice person to his kingdom allowing the reader to have no reverence for him. Oedipus and Gilgamesh all follow the source of Ethics and the wisdom of action. However, Gilgamesh feels more of guilt and Oedipus feels shame.

In conclusion, both characters share the same archetype by sharing similar ethics, window of action, and motivation.

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Jofar (MIMICRY, HINDERING, ILLUSIVE, MALEVOLENTLY, REBUIKE), Lotow (BELLIGERANCE, DREDGED, TRUCULENT, REBUKE, ROUSE), Myath (TALISMAN, SIMPLETON, TABOO, SUPERFICIAL, LUMINOUS)

Errata: In the Midsummers’ Edition, this newspaper falsely

reported the following:Dear ReaderOccasionally we make mistakes. Our newspaper is committed to correcting any false reporting. In that light, please note the following list of errors in prior publications. Our apologies for any misleading information.

Please note the following corrected versions below which correspond to the errors listed on the right (20 points)

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1. The chorus represents an excellent example of dynamic characters.

2. The audience in the skene had many cathartic moments in Sophocle’s play 3. Archetypes seen in literature are always stereotypical characters we can relate to.

4. Ms. Joe’s stick called “the Tickler” is an excellent example of Situational Irony.

5. Jack was not a character of wise action because of his letting the fire go out.

6. Ms Havisham is decaying, as shown in her Word Association.

7. The Parados, so beautifully executed by the Chorus, followed a moving Strophe / Antistrophe presentation

8. Oedipus Rex has a message of Fate.

9. The article’s excellent hook on the theatre performance started: “There was a play yesterday”

10. The actor exeunted when his line was complete

er·ra·ta /ɪˈrɑtə, ɪˈreɪ-, ɪˈrætə/ noun 1. plural of erratum. 2. a list of errors and their corrections inserted, usually on a separate page or slip of paper, in a book or other publication; corrigenda. Origin: 1625–35 / Usage note: Errata is originally the plural of the singular Latin noun erratum. Like many such borrowed nouns (agenda; candelabra ), it came by the mid-17th century to be used as a singular noun, meaning “a list of errors or corrections to be made (in a book).” Despite objections by some to this singular use, it is common in standard English:

BoxScores: Archetypical Self ___/ 5; Revisionistic Self ____/5 ; DidUKnow ____/10; Be Verb ID ____ / 10; Your Fixes ____/10; Strophe ____/15; Antistrophe ____/15; PN

Labeling ____/5; PN Sampling ____/5; Literary Referencing ____ / 10; Hook ____ / 10; Broad Conclusion ____/10; Use of Vocabulary ____/10; Errata ____ /20 TOTAL ____ / 150

Wrestling Book IGilgamesh v. WildmanGilgameshW-1 L-0WildmanW-0 L-1

BoxScoresBook IIGilgamesh bye weekW-1 L-0Wildman v. BirdmanWildman W-0 L-2Strange bird man in dreamW-1 L-0

Book III-XIIGilgamesh v. Sea SerpentW-1 L-1 Gilgamesh v. GilgameshW-1 L-1 T-1Gilgamesh v. Strange BirdmanW-1 L-2 T-1Gilgamesh v. GilgameshW-2 L-2 T1

BoxScoresAt the Arena:Titicus Andreicus defeated (withTrident and Studded Net) Iago the Matador.

As this was a death match, there willBe no rematch. If you purchased Round two tickets, our apologies,We cannot give out refunds.

Marius Antoinetticus lost a bout To Guy Iteen in a swift decisiveOne round tournament. Fans calledFor a umpire review of the call of theMatch, however as this was a deathMatch, there will be no umpire review.

Juliunius SeezaripmeapartubruticusWill compete during the Ides of May.He is considered an underdog despiteHis defeat of the Gauls earlier this decade.

WWCC Sports Round UP

Sweden progressed to the gold medal game after winning the 1v2 Page Play-off.

After blanking the first end, Sweden opened the scoring with a hit to score two points in the second end. The teams then swapped singles all the way to the seventh end. In the eighth end, with Sweden leading by 4-3, Muirhead drew nicely onto the button with her second stone and, in trying to winkle it out, Sweden's fourth player Maria Prytz wrecked on a front guard, giving Scotland a steal of two and

the lead for the first time in the game, at 5-4.

Sweden blanked the ninth end to retain last stone advantage in the tenth. The Scots seemed to have that end under control until Muirhead had a pick-up with her first stone, which gave Sweden a chance.

Even at that, Muirhead played a near-perfect freeze with her last, but Prytz was able to tap it out, as Sweden scored three for their win.

After the game Swedish skip and lead player Margaretha Sigfridsson, said, "that was a fantastic game and it feels so good to win. It was only the eighth end that was not so good from our side. It was so

close, we touched so many guards in that end and Eve got to steal two. But we thought we still had a good chance to win the game and we thought it was so our game."

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RESULTSSession 20: Scotland 5, Sweden 7.Session 19: USA 7, Switzerland 4.

Session 18: Russia 6, Switzerland 7.

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HOMEWORK: Finish Reading the Book Great Expectations by Charles Dickens. Please note, the Novel is actually three books in one (or sometimes called volumes).Therefore, this means you should read up to p. 160…or through Chapter 19. Online text available.