Things Fall Apart

Essay notes

Format: 2 point deduction now

• Times New Roman

• Size 12

• Double space

• Indent paragraphs

• Name, due date and class period

• Center/capitalize title

Reminders:

• Turnitin.com Class ID: 3550576

Password: writing

• Set up and cite all quotes

• Eliminate Rip words (2 points each now)

• Follow outline exactly

Tips:

• Use a variety of names for a character

• Have an exciting and intriguing title

• Sentence variety – (compound and complex)

• Use a first draft to help you. Most issues can be fixed!

Goals:Use your Julius Caesar essay

What do you need and want to improve upon from last time? Be specific. What grammar? What part of organization?

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Using QuotesIf you choose dialogue, nothing has changed. Occasion, speaker and tag.When he needed assistance in starting he farm, Okonkwo reluctantly asked, “If you give me some seeds I shall not fail you” (Achebe 21)

If the part you want is just narration, use a part of a sentence inside your own sentence. The sentence should read as one, complete thought.Okonkwo was famous through all nine villages because he was like a “cat whose back would never touch the earth” (Achebe 3).* first word of quote is not capitalized

Cite with author last name and page number. The period still does on the outside.

OutlineIntro:hook: image with sensory detailsBackground: connect hook to the book; use Achebe and Things Fall ApartThesis last-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Body Paragraphs:Topic sentenceQuoteCommentary (2)QuoteCommentary (2)Concluding sentence-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Conclusion:After careful consideration of, ______________, one can conclude that _____ ______________________________________________________________. Loop back to your hook in an interesting way to tie it all together.