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Page 1: W1 a-e; W4; W5; W9a(RL1) I can write an argument essay that supports the claim with evidence from the text. Review of Yesterday’s Prewrite and Plan. What

W1 a-e; W4; W5; W9a(RL1)

I can write an argument essay that supports the claim with evidence from the text.

Review of Yesterday’s Prewrite and Plan.

What is the plan for this week?

What kind of essay are we writing?

What is the topic of our essay?

What are we going to do today?

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Thesis Statement Practice WS

Handout from Mrs. Young Name and Number on paper

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Thesis Statement PracticeDirections: Read the prompt. Underline the topic. Circle the kind of essay you should write. Write what the TOPIC is (hint, it’s in the first sentence). Number the tasks. Then, write a thesis statement for the following hypothetical prompts.

1. Write an essay in which you delineate Cukavac’s claim that theDMV is the most horrible place on earth. Evaluate Cukavac’sarguments and specific claims, assessing whether the reasoning issound and the evidence is relevant and sufficient. Drawevidence from the passage to support your analysis. Develop your topicwith relevant, well-chosen facts, concrete details,or other information and examples. Demonstrate command of theconventions of standard English, capitalization,punctuation, and spelling in your response.

Topic: ____________________

Thesis/Claim: _____________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

1 or 2?

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Thesis Statement PracticeDirections: Read the prompt. Underline the topic. Circle the kind of essay you should write. Write what the TOPIC is (hint, it’s in the first sentence). Then, write a thesis statement for the following hypothetical prompts.

1. Write an essay in which you delineate Cukavac’s claim that theDMV is the most horrible place on earth. Evaluate Cukavac’sarguments and specific claims, assessing whether the reasoning issound and the evidence is relevant and sufficient. Drawevidence from the passage to support your analysis. Develop your topicwith relevant, well-chosen facts, concrete details,or other information and examples. Demonstrate command of theconventions of standard English, capitalization,punctuation, and spelling in your response.

Topic: ____________________

Thesis/Claim: _____________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Thesis Statement PracticeDirections: Read the prompt. Underline the topic. Circle the kind of essay you should write. Write what the TOPIC is (hint, it’s in the first sentence). Then, write a thesis statement for the following hypothetical prompts.

1. Write an essay in which you delineate Cukavac’s claim that theDMV is the most horrible place on earth. Evaluate Cukavac’sarguments and specific claims, assessing whether the reasoning

is sound and the evidence is relevant and sufficient. Drawevidence from the passage to support your analysis. Develop your topicwith relevant, well-chosen facts, concrete details,or other information and examples. Demonstrate command of theconventions of standard English, capitalization,punctuation, and spelling in your response.

Topic: DMV is a horrible place_; is his evidence relevant and sufficient (this must be written about in the body paragraphs)

Thesis/Claim: __Cukavac claims that the DMV is the most horrible place on earth because it ________, , and .

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Thesis Statement Practice

Read the prompt. Underline the topic. Circle the kind of essay you should write. Write what the TOPIC is (hint, it’s in the first sentence). Number the tasks. Then, write a thesis statement for the following hypothetical prompts.

2. Write an expository essay explaining how Cinderella’stransformation aids her in getting a prince. Analyze the impactof her fairy godmother’s bibbity bobbity boo, assessing whetherthe spell was effective and sufficient. Draw evidence from thepassage to support your analysis. Develop your topic withrelevant, well-chosen facts, concrete details, or otherInformation and examples. Demonstrate command of theconventions of standard English, capitalization, punctuation,and spelling in your response

Topic:________

Thesis: ___________________________________________

1 or 2?

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Thesis Statement Practice

Read the prompt. Underline the topic. Circle the kind of essay you should write. Write what the TOPIC is (hint, it’s in the first sentence). Then, write a thesis statement for the following hypothetical prompts.

2. Write an expository essay explaining how Cinderella’stransformation aids her in getting a prince. Analyze the impactof her fairy godmother’s bibbity bobbity boo, assessing whetherthe spell was effective and sufficient. Draw evidence from thepassage to support your analysis. Develop your topic withrelevant, well-chosen facts, concrete details, or otherInformation and examples. Demonstrate command of theconventions of standard English, capitalization, punctuation,and spelling in your response

Topic:________

Thesis: ___________________________________________

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Thesis Statement Practice

Read the prompt. Underline the topic. Circle the kind of essay you should write. Write what the TOPIC is (hint, it’s in the first sentence). Then, write a thesis statement for the following hypothetical prompts.

2. Write an expository essay explaining how Cinderella’stransformation aids her in getting a prince. Analyze the impactof her fairy godmother’s bibbity bobbity boo, assessing whetherthe spell was effective and sufficient. Draw evidence from thepassage to support your analysis. Develop your topic withrelevant, well-chosen facts, concrete details, or otherInformation and examples. Demonstrate command of theconventions of standard English, capitalization, punctuation,and spelling in your response

Topic: how and why Cinderella transforms

Thesis: Cinderella transforms in the following three ways in order to get her prince: , , and

.

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Thesis Statement Practice

Read the prompt. Underline the topic. Circle the kind of essay you should write. Write what the TOPIC is (hint, it’s in the first sentence). Then, write a thesis statement for the following hypothetical prompts.

2. Write an expository essay explaining how Cinderella’stransformation aids her in getting a prince. Analyze the impactof her fairy godmother’s bibbity bobbity boo, assessingwhether the spell was effective and sufficient. Drawevidence from he passage to support your analysis. Developyour topic with relevant, well-chosen facts, concrete details, orOther information and examples. Demonstrate command of theconventions of standard English, capitalization, punctuation,and spelling in your response

Topic: how and why Cinderella transforms; if bibbity bobbity boo spell was effective and sufficient (this will be written about in the body paragraphs)

Thesis: Cinderella transforms in the following three ways in order to get her prince: , , and

.

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Thesis Statement Practice

Read the prompt. Underline the topic. Circle the kind of essay you should write. Write what the TOPIC is (hint, it’s in the first sentence). Number the tasks. Then, write a thesis statement for the following hypothetical prompts.

3. Write an essay in which you delineate Dr, Seuss’ claims that every person is a person, no matter now small. Evaluate Seuss’word choice and illustrations, assessing whether the reasoningis sound and the evidence is relevant and sufficient. Drawevidence from the passage to support your analysis. Developyour topic with relevant, well-chosen facts, concrete details,or other information and examples. Demonstrate command ofthe conventions of standard English, capitalization,punctuation, and spelling in your response.

Topic: ____________________

Thesis: ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

1 or 2?

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Writing Workshop: Draft your Introductions using the “Funnel Method”

Writing Assessments/Prompts

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2 Kinds of Essays this Year

Argument/Persuasive Expository

both essays should have your three points listed in your Thesis/Claim.

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Last year vs. This year Flea Map New Formulas

Funnel

HookThesis

3 points

EveryoneMostSomeThesis/Claim and 3 points

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Introductions

Contain general information about your topicthat slowly gets focused.

In order to write a great introduction, youneed to have a hook and a thesis.

To get from your hook to your thesis, think ofyour writing like a funnel.

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Everyone

Most

Some

Thesis/Claim

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Sentence 1 = Hook/EveryoneHook- A broad general statement starting with

EVERYONE can get any essay started.

Example – Everyone has a favorite subject.-- Generalization words you could use

All, Most, Always, Never, Every, Some, etc.

Your hook should be related to the topic of the prompt!

Everyone

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Sentence 2 – “Most” sentence

Next, move from a really broad statement to a slightly more focused one.

• Start it with “Most”– Example: Most students like the subject

that is the easiest for them.

Most

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Sentence 3 – “Some” sentence

Move to another level of specificity.

Start your third sentence with “Some.”

– Example: Some students excel at Math while others excel at Language Arts.

Some

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Sentence 4 – Claim/Thesis Your final sentence of your introduction

should be your Thesis/Claim statement. You will copy the topic of the prompt and

add your three points.

Thesis/Claim

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Sample Introduction using the Funnel Method

Everyone has a favorite subject.Most students like the subject that isthe easiest for them. Some studentsexcel at Math while others excel atLanguage Arts. The most common favorite subject is Language Arts because ___, ___, and ___.

indent

Thesis/Claim

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Practice Writing Your IntroductionsUse this formula:

Everyone______________Most__________________________Some_________________________T hesis/Claim_____________________________________________________________, ________, and ________.

Use the Claim you wrote yesterday on

your Prewrite and Plan WS

indent

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Stop here

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Practice Writing Introduction to an opinion/argument essay:

H if getting fancy _____________ E_______________________________ M______________________________ S_______________________________ T_______________________________

Make sure you make your stance CLEAR!Use “Gangs: Keep Out!” from Junior Scholastic,

Nov. 26, 2007 as text for evidence

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“The Right to Bear Arms?” from Junior Scholastic, March 10, 2008

Read front and back What is the purpose of this text? What are some of the main points? What is your stance or viewpoint?

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H _if getting fancy __________ E_______________________________ M______________________________ S_______________________________ T_use part of the prompt and then the 3 reasons

why_____

Make sure you make your stance CLEAR!Use “The Right to Bear Arms?” from Junior Scholastic,

March 10, 2008 as text for evidence.

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