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Teaching Statement for Mehraneh Ebrahim, PhD
I believe in interactive teaching that stems from a respect for students and their diverse
disciplinary and personal backgrounds. Teaching involves connecting what is already known in
the horizon of the consciousness to the vast unknown beyond, one little step at a time. in this
laborious voyage, teachers are the facilitators, the inspirers, the awakeners, the Socratic
midwifes. I believe that without knowing where the students stand, without familiarity with their
needs and expectations, their dreams and aspirations, teachers cannot inspire them enough for the
journey toward the unknown. This is what I mean by interactive teaching, teaching as a voyage
out, or a dance, where participation flows both ways. Each class for me is a learning experience.
Teachers are not dictators or one-way lecturers, they are the listeners and observers first. By
recognizing the need and the seat of motivation of their students, they can stir this group journey
forward. Interactive teaching is nothing but a deep respect on the part of the teacher toward the
students’ abilities, needs, shortcomings and potentials. If not motivated, the students will never
whole-heartedly embark on this movement from the known toward the unknown, from the
familiar to the strange. Teachers are not just a mouth-pieces of knowledge, but recruiters for a
quest for knowledge.
But how to motivate a generation who is over-stimulated through the moving screen, and thus
desensitized to the slow progress of writing and reading? How to bring them back to books, get
them to burn midnight lamp? By reminding them that the skills necessary to write are those that
are necessary to think, and this is how we change the world. That great deeds start with a road-
map, a plan of action, a brain-storm, organized thoughts on paper, and much toil. The process is
reminiscent of writing the famous 5-paragraph essay. In order to succeed in life, we ought to be
able to communicate clearly what is in the isolation of our minds to the world outside. After all,
thinking does not happen outside language.
The course I taught on Graphic Novels and Trauma
In 2014-2015 I designed the syllabus, and lectured CLC 2112B in the department of Modern
Languages for the first time. I won the “University Student's Council Award of Excellence in
Undergraduate Teaching” for teaching this course. This recognition, generally won by full-time
faculty members, is awarded to:
o recognize, celebrate and award excellence in undergraduate teaching.
o provide support and recognition for the innovative teaching methods and
techniques demonstrated by Western’s finest faculty members.
o further the quality of education that is provided for all students at Western.
o involve members of our corporate and alumni community in the promotion of
excellence in teaching.
This course not only engages the students using a variety of teaching resources such as multi-
media context, but it also teaches them sound writing skills. This is a second-year course and
students from all disciplines can attend. I worked with my T.A., Rachel Wong, as a team to keep
students engaged with the material. We held regular meetings, attended each other’s classes and
gave each other constructive feedback regarding teaching techniques. Having been a T.A. for
years myself, I could give Rachel tips about effective communication with students as well as
ways to grade essays, presentations and final papers. The course was heavily writing-based. I
know that without small writing exercises, the reading assignments would be fleeting practices.
Students were encouraged to take notes while reading and bring mini-response-papers to each
class reading. A challenging task for marking each week, yet, these short paragraphs were
valuable tools for understanding the level of students’ writing. Rachel and I became familiar with
the strengths and weaknesses of students’ writings and devoted the tutorials to improving their
academic writing techniques. Once their basic writing mistakes were corrected, I could ask for
better midterm and final papers. I believed in helping students to acquire a valuable life-lesson in
writing that is why I opted for a writing assignment instead of an exam. Although this meant
longer papers to read and grade for myself, it gave the students time to sharpen their writing
skills and argumentation abilities.
It is interesting to note that Winter 2015 coincided with the tragedy of Charlie Hebdo. This was a
salutary wake up call for Student who thought that the written word has no major impact on the
“real” world. We are, after all, living in times of war and terror. Fears of about climate change
and pollution of the earth’s natural resources are not short of apocalyptic. This course offered
students critical tools in analyzing our current traumatic conditions while reading works of
literature and art. Contemplating and writing about pains of others, whether concerned with
political tragedy or sexual identity was therapeutic, inspiring, and relatable.
Due to my efforts in creating and teaching this course and because of the outstanding student
participation and evaluations, my portrait was (humbly) displayed in the Department’s hall of
fame.
Student Evaluations for the 4 courses I taught at Western: 7=Excellent 100%, 6=Very Good
90%, 5=Good 80%
Syllabus for the course: Graphic Novels and Trauma CLC 2112B Western University 2014-2015Instructor: Mehraneh Ebrahimi [email protected] T.A.: Rachel Wong [email protected] hours and location: UC27. TBA
Comic Books were generally categorized as a juvenile genre, read for pleasure and as an escape
from serious contemplation. However,
artists have recently taken to narrate
Traumatic historical topics such as the
Holocaust (Maus), or retell the private
and public dilemmas of young women
caught between revolution and exile
(Persepolis) through the Graphic Novel
medium. As the eye oscillates between
images and words, separated by the
emptiness of gutters, the imagination
flourishes to link the disparate frames.
The audience participate interactively in
filling out the narrative left blank and
fragmented. The graphic novel here
becomes a hybrid of texts and images that tells of personal as well as historical incidents. But
does the genre have the capacity to speak of such grave matters such as genocide, war, and exile
in its shorthand style? Is it ethically appropriate? These are among the questions that will be
posed through the course after reading a few texts on Trauma theory and closely reading/looking
at graphic novels. We will study and apply trauma theory and comics theory, talk about
autobiography and world history, analyze pictures as well as texts, and possibly create our own
comic books.
Grade Breakdown
Participation: 10% Mini response papers: 35% Midterm Essay: 10 % Presentation: 10% Final Essay: 35%
Active participation in class and tutorial:
Includes coming to class with reading materials, paying attention to the instructor/TA, or peers,
and participate actively in group discussions. My style of teaching is an interactive one, so I
won’t be up there talking alone. Your voices and opinions matter to me and help me guide the
discussions toward your interests.
10 mini response papers due every tutorial:
Every reading material requires one focus question and your tentative answer to that question.
When you read a text, see what sparks your attention. Try to ask a question or answer it. My
focus here is to get you engaged with the reading material. Your responses will help me
understand your comprehension and writing needs so I can help you improve them.
Midterm Essay
3-5 page MLA style essays due after the reading break. Engage critically with readings and take
note of the theory studied. During the tutorials you were prepared to write mini-responses to the
texts. In the class, we discussed the responses and learnt new theories that related to the texts. It
is now time to put your knowledge and your writing skills together to write a solid paper. This is
a great writing exercise and we are here to help you with it. Start early, come to us for help and
you will learn a valuable writing lesson.
Presentation
Students can present in groups or individually. Presentation should be focused on a few main
critical ideas. They do not have to be too inclusive of all topics related to a text. Instead, try to
teach your peers important lessons about the week’s reading. Aim at engaging the audience,
asking questions that spark curiosity. These are conversation sparkers, so ignite us!
Final Essay
Between 7 to 10 pages of MLA styled critical reflection on text. You may use ideas from your
mini essays or class presentations. You can elaborate on the questions that you have harbored
through the term. Focus will be placed on clear communication skills in writing. By the time you
write the final paper, you will have had several tutorial sessions honing your writing and editing
skills. These techniques will be evaluated in your final paper. Remember, it is better to be
understood than admired. So, write clearly, with confidence, and edit often. Your T.A. and I are
available and waiting for your questions in our office hours.
Texts:
Art Spiegelman, Maus I and Maus II or The Complete Maus Marjane Satrapi, The Complete Persepolis as well as the film Joe Sacco, Palestine Alison Bechdel, Fun Home: A Family Tragicomic Secondary Sources: Scott McCloud, Understanding Comics
PDF available on OWL:
“LaCapra on Trauma.” Excerpts from D. LaCapra, Writing History, Writing Trauma (2001) Charles Hirschkind and Saba Mahmood, “Feminism, the Taliban, and the Politics of Counter- Insurgency” (2002) Lila Abu-Lughod, “Do Women Really Need Saving?” (2002) Marianne Hirsch, “Editor’s Column: Collateral Damage.”(2004) Naghibi, Nima & Andrew O’Malley. “Estranging the familiar: East and West in Satrapi’s Persepolis” 2005
Week Break Down (preliminary):
Week 1 –Jan 5 Introduction Week 2- Jan 12 Maus 1 (136 pages of comics) First 23 pages of Understanding Comics Marianne Hirsch “Collateral Damage” Presenter/s: Week 3 -Jan 19 Maus2 (159 pages) Chapter 2 of Understanding Comics 1. Lawrence Langer, “Deep Memory” from Holocaust Testimonies (1991) (2 sections; read both) Presenter/s: Week 4 -Jan 26 Persepolis1 Chapter 3 of Understanding Comics Lila Abu-Lughod, “Do Women Really Need Saving?” (2002) Presenter/s: Week 5 -Feb 2 Persepolis2 Chapter 4 of Understanding Comics “LaCapra on Trauma.” Excerpts from D. LaCapra,Writing History, Writing Trauma (2001) Presenter/s: Week 6 -Feb 9 Draft of Essay due in Tutorial Persepolis-The movie in class Chapter 5 of Understanding Comics Presenter/s: Family day Feb 16- no class Week 8 Feb 23 Mid Term Essays Due Chapter 6 of Understanding Comics Week 9 -March 2 Fun Home 1st Half Chapter 7 of Understanding Comics Presenter/s: Week 10 -March 9 Fun Home 2nd Half Chapter 8 & 9 of Understanding Comics Presenter/s: Week 11 March 9 Palestine 1st half Charleschkind and Saba Mahmood, “Feminism, the Taliban, and the Politics of Counter-Insurgency” (2002) Presenter/s: Week 12 -March16 Palestine 2nd Half Presenter/s: Writing Workshop
Plagiarism – Students must write their essays and assignments in their own words. Whenever students take an idea or a passage of a text from another author, they must acknowledge their debt both by using quotation marks where appropriate, and by proper referencing such as footnotes and citations. Plagiarism is a major academic offense (see Scholastic Offense Policy in the Western Academic Calendar). The University of Western Ontario uses plagiarism-checking software. Students may be required to submit their written work in electronic form for plagiarism checking.Absenteeism – Students seeking academic accommodation on medical grounds for any missed tests, exams, participation components and/or assignments must apply to the Academic Counseling office of their home Faculty and provide documentation. Academic accommodation cannot be granted by the instructor or department. UWO’s Policy on Accommodation for Medical Illness Please refer to (https://studentservices.uwo.ca/secure/index.cfm) Downloadable Student Medical Certificate (SMC): https://studentservices.uwo.ca under the Medical Documentation heading
Enjoy the Course!
Some Class Notes and Slides. A Bit on Comic Theory:
Comic books are what novels used to be -- an accessible, vernacular form with mass appeal --
and if the highbrows are right, they're a form perfectly suited to our dumbed-down culture and
collective attention deficit. Comics are also enjoying a renaissance and a newfound respectability
right now. In fact, the fastest-growing section of your local bookstore these days is apt to be the
one devoted to comics and so-called graphic novels (McGrath, Charles. “Not Funnies.” New
York Times Magazine 11 July 2004.)
The much-quoted New York Times Magazine article then goes on to mention that: to master the
skill of looking carefully and reading along requires even more concentration than skimming a
book quickly. I argue that graphic memoirs as a contemporary form of “sequential art” loom as
one of the most appropriate media for re-imagining an Other(enemy) that can be identified as
human, as a kin. In our age of occulcentricism and terror, many factors contribute to the recent
widespread appeal of graphic memoirs for recounting traumatic historical moments from a
refreshingly playful and subversive perspective. These include:
o The contingency of the visual and the verbal planes foster a “bi-ocularity”[double-
vision] (Hirsch) that constantly fluctuates the attention from the center to the margins,
allowing for multiple readings, perspectives and speakers at once.
o Graphic Memoirs defamiliarize, estrange, and refamiliarize us with the grave event
through their cartoon avatars. The abstraction of the “faces” of these avatars allow for
identification on an intimate, personal level. The more abstract the face, the easier the
identification (McCloud).
o Their scattered “frames” parallel the fragmentary nature of human memory after an
encounter with the Real, with trauma, or with loss.
o Their contemplative “aporetic” (Naghibi) pauses between the panels invite audience
interpretation and demand an interactive personal “closures”(McCloud).
o Images have an inherent, “excessive expressivity” to them (qtd from Siebers in Hirsh
1211). Images leave a direct imprint on the “sense memory”, the “memory residing in the
body” of survivors (ibid).
“Words can be put into the service of sense memory”, but “vision has a very different
relationship to affective experience, experience which whilst it cannot be spoken as it is felt, may
register visually. The eye can often functions a mute witness through which events register as
eidetic memory images imprinted with sensation” (Jill Bennett Qtd in Hirsch 1211-12).
With their direct affective dimension, images are potent vehicles for transmitting visceral
sensations of pain or pleasure of others. Sequential images, in turn, form an interrupted
“staccato” narrative that moves with the drive of reader’s imagination. However, it is interesting
to note that the inherent vigor, violence, and accessibility in images make them a suitable vehicle
in the service of the elite in power as well: the church, the state and the police. Although images
have been used an abused by power, I argue that as
property of the people, public sequential images can never be fully appropriated. The relations
between images and violence, between the shot of the photographer and the sniper will be
discussed.
The apparent cohesion between the word, the image and the silence cannot be forced upon the
hybrid form, but is co-laborated between the reader and the hybrid text.
Some Slides and lecture notes
After reviewing Maus, I talk about the
fragmentary nature of trauma survivors memory
and how the comic medium can accommodate it,
playfully. Here because the survivor’s memory
is at times unstable about minor details (like
music playing at Auschwitz) the narrator has left
the “cello head” in the bottom frame. The comic technology allows you to have multiple
perspectives, at once, with less confusion. The fragmentary nature of memory in trauma has
playfully been drawn my Spiegleman. Now describing this in an essay, is the students’ nest task.
The distance between these two panels is called the “Gutter”. Your imagination only can create
“Closure.” You will see what happened in your mind and that is the beauty of the comic
technology
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2011-12 Course and Instructor Evaluations - Fall / WinterInstructor Comments
Unit: Modern Languages & LiteraturesInstructor. Ebrahimi Eshratabadi, Mehraneh
Course Comparative Literature & Culture 1020 [TUT]Session: 1119Mehraneh is very enthusiastic & helpful as a TA. She has quickly answered any of my emails & has met with me to help me on assignments. She also marks very quickly. Overall she is a good TA, and CLC 1020 is a great course.
Very enthusiastic and warm. Encourages participation and individual problem solving. Overall: very good.
I like that the instructor encourages students to think independently and form their own opinions and interpretations of material in class, while still guiding the discussion. A wider range of presentation methods was useful in class - i.e. a combination of small group and large group discussions, visual aids, etc.Very enthusiastic and knowledgeable. Encourages discussion and reflection. Very approachable and available for consultation. Not very clear assignments or evaluations for tutorial.
What a perfect TA. Plus also your haircut is really cute. That is all for now.
Very good! No complaints!
On the whole, I found you to be a very fair, understanding, and accommodating TA. However, at times I found discussions in tutorials were sometimes a little dry, with peer interaction stagnating rapidly. Part of this lack of involvement was caused by a lack of interest in course material by some students, but my only suggestion is to try and improve this lack of interest and generate student engagement.
She is obviously very knowledgeable and passionate about the course, which is always helpful when learning new things. However, we never really did any quizzes or definitions or even preparation essays that could have really benefitted us. What went towards our participation mark was unclear. Overall really enjoyed having her as a TA though!
I don’t think I would have liked the course as much if I didn't have a Mehraneh as a TA. The tutorials atmosphere was one where she made me feel very comfortable about participating and was always very kind and understanding. She really helped instill what was taught in lecture.
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2012-13 Course and Instructor Evaluations - Fall / WinterInstructor Comments
Unit: Modem Languages & LiteraturesInstructor: Ebrahimi Eshratabadi, MehranehCourse Comparative Literature & Culture 1023
Session: 1129Mehraneh is a very friendly person. She is very positive and I feel comfortable speaking in her class. However, I don't always know what we are trying to achieve so maybe putting an outline on the board would give a nice sense of direction. Overall, I like Mehraneh as a teaching assistant.
The instructor is very enthusiastic and outgoing and has a good personality for teaching.
She is great!
Mehraneh is a fantastic TA.
The explanations of concepts addressed in lecture are very helpful. It was nice to have discussions about topics brought up in lecture that were confusing. I felt comfortable voicing my opinions and asking questions because the leaming environment was great. When addressing personal questions about essays, sometimes you were too vague but I understood what was expected. Overall, I'm very satisfied with your teachingThe instructor is open minded to discussions that are brought up by students in class time and a little too focused on own ideas regarding own topic, but pleasant to learn from!Great! Always tries to help and always smiling. Very good energy and tries to get the best out of the student.
She is a caring teaching and wants every student to succeed. She ensures that she is available to help.
The instructor makes points clear about what is expected. She keeps everyone on track, making sure we were listening and understandin . She covers most of what's necessary and prepares us very well.The instructor is very fair and understanding. She is always available for help in person or by email. She is very positive and happy and explains terms and concepts very well. She helps to understand what is being said in lecture and is helpful to go to.For the writing, I personally need space in order to fulfill my expectations. I transform into a hermit until it is exactly the way I want, which in turn conflicted with the step -by -step approach. You have been a great provider of knowledge and mentor.
I enjoy the tutorial and I feel like the questions I have about the reading and lecture are answered in tutorial. However, I would like more take-home materials that I can use to study.Excellent TA!
The TA is great at teaching. I understood her well. The amount of in-class assignments were fair and so was marking.Mehraneh will become a fantastic and clear ProfessorMay 2013
Brock UniversityDepartment ofEnglish Language and Literature
St. Catharines. Ontario Canada 1„2S 3A1
Telephone 905-688-5550 Ext. 3469Fax 905-688-4461
5 classes
20 September, 2010
To Whom it May Concern:
This letter is to confirm that Mehraneh Ebrahimi Eshratabadi is working as a Teaching Assistant under my supervision (for my ENGL IF97 course at Brock University) this academic term.
She is responsible for 5 seminar groups per week, and her employment commenced on 9 September, 2010. The term, and thus her contract, ends on 24 December, 2010.
Yours truly,
Dr. Susan SpeareyAssociate ProfessorDepartment of English Language and LiteratureAffiliated Faculty, MA in Social Justice and Equity StudiesBrock University500 Glenridge AvenueSt Catharines ON L2S 3A1Tel: (905) 688-5550 x 3885 Fax: (905) 688-4461 e-mail: [email protected]
WesternAugust 30th, 2013
Mehraneh EbrahimiDepartment of Modern Languages and Literatures Western University
Dear Mehraneh Ebrahimi:
This letter is an offer of employment as a Graduate Student Teaching Assistant (GTA) in the Department of Modern Languages and Literatures and also constitutes the letter referred to in Article 13.03 ofthe Collective Agreement between The University of Western Ontario and the Public Service Alliance of Canada. The Collective Agreement can be found at: http://uwo.ca/hr/form_doc/employee_agreements/gta.pdf
This offer of employment corresponds to a full Graduate Student Teaching Assistantship (GTAship).
Your employment as a GTA will be in the following course: CLC 1023, and your immediate supervisor will be Cälin Mihäilescu.
Your duties and responsibilities may include those functions listed in Article 17.03 of the Collective Agreement between The University of Western Ontario and the Public Service Alliance of Canada, but will primarily be as follows:
instruction, lecturing or supervision in classes, tutorials or laboratories, preparation of materials or set-up of required displays or apparatus for
classes, tutorials or laboratories. presence at designated lectures, holding of office hours and meeting with students,
grading of essays, assignments, laboratory reports, tutorials and term tests, proctoring of exams, conducting of field trips, employer required training, (including WHMIS and all other necessary health and safety training; AODA training; TA training) employer required meetings, reading and corresponding electronically with students relevant to the assigned course, and other teaching related duties
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