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Blogs and Wiki’s: Tool’s to Improve English Writing of College Level ESL and EFL Students
Richard Bogdan
TECM 4700.001: Writing in the Sciences
October 21, 2015
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Summary
Hundreds of years of linguistic imperialism and the gradual spread of American culture
through literature, academics, music, and film has resulted in English being a dominant
worldwide language. English is often taught as a secondary language in nonnative English
speaking countries due to its appeal in business and academia. However, English is an incredibly
difficult language to learn for most nonnative speakers. Fortunately, as technology continues to
advance, new avenues of learning are becoming available.
Blogs and Wikis
Blogs and wikis allow users to write and publish material on the internet. Their ease of
use requires no knowledge of HTML or other computer writing language. The online nature of
blogs and wikis allow anyone with an internet connection to access them. Authors have to be
attentive of what they post because they do not know who their audience is. Users can add
comments (in blogs) or make changes (in wikis), and therefore have high potential for
collaborative writing. Both blogs and wikis have been used in journalistic and company/business
approaches, however, their use in an educational format (especially with teaching nonnative
speakers English) have little to no research. This white paper goes over the potentials of using
blogs and wikis as a tool to help English as a secondary language (ESL) and English as a foreign
language (EFL) students. By using scaffolding techniques along with blogs and wikis, teachers
can develop course materials that can benefit the majority of their students.
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Background
What Are Blogs and Wikis?
Blogs and Wikis were created in the mid-nineties when the World Wide Web began to
become more widely available to the general public. However, they didn’t start to become
popular until the early to mid-2000’s, and only just recently have started to be used in an
academic environment. Both blogs and wikis are writing tools used to publish writing on the
web. A blog can be defined as a web log, or quite literally a writing log for the web. “The entries
are updated in a linear, time-based way, similar to a personal journal or diary. Additionally the
contents are meant specifically for the public and are presented in reverse chronological order,
with more recent postings on the top and older information pushed to the bottom.” 1 Wikis on the
other hand are “collective websites where a large number of participants are allowed to create or
modify pages using their web browser.”2 Because both blogs and wikis do not require knowledge
of HTML to create content, they are easy to incorporate in a learning environment.
Why Use Blogs and Wiki’s Instead of Standard Academic Writing?
For ESL and EFL students, the standard process of learning to write in English is often
difficult for them. Writing processes such as prewriting, drafting, editing, and publishing may
discourage these students because they “de-emphasize the teaching of grammatical accuracy and
the time-consuming process of multiple drafting may fail to prepare second language (L2)
students for timed writing tests which demand a single drafting product.” 3 Standard academic
1 Sharla Jeannette Jones, Blogging and ESL Writing: A Case Study of How Students Responded to the Use of Weblogs as a Pedagogical Tool for the Writing Process Approach in a Community College ESL Writing Class (The University of Texas, Press, 2006), 102 Saovapa Wichadee, Using Wikis to Develop Summary Writing Abilities of Students in an EFL Class (Bangkok University, Press, 2010) 53 Yu-Chuan Joni Chao, Hao-Chang Lo, Students’ Perceptions of Wiki-Based Collaborative Writing for Learners of English as a Foreign Language (Providence University, Press, 2009) 395
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writing in a typical college level environment generally has one audience that the student is
writing for, and that is their professor and to a lesser extent, their classmates. Because blogs and
wikis are published on the internet, students have to be more mindful to who their audience is.
This encourages them to become more aware of their spelling, grammar, vocabulary choice and
syntax. Finally, both blogs and wikis can be used to encourage collaboration which can “play a
vital role in helping learners to build knowledge and acquire skills that facilitate learners’
integration into given discourse communities.” 4 Collaboration in both blogs and wikis allow
teachers to develop scaffolding techniques for students that best benefit them.
State of the Science
Problems ESL/EFL Students Face in Higher Learning Environments
Teaching English to native speakers, let alone nonnative speakers is a difficult task due to
English's grammatical rules that do not apply to most other languages. The fact that most higher
learning institutions feature a one to many environment; where there is a single teacher for many
students, also creates a problem. Often times the acquisition of a new language is confined to this
environment. Students learn spelling, grammar, and other language skills through lectures,
classroom activities and homework. As a result, “students are often unmotivated in learning a
second language due to being in a restricted environment that is separated from society.” 5 By
using blogs or wikis, the teacher can "extend the discourse to a large community outside of the
classroom, where there students can regularly confront "real" rhetorical situations in a social, and
supportive way." 6 By using this method, ESL/EFL students are learning English in a practical
real world environment instead of the formulaic approach from a textbook or a lesson plan. 4 Maria Kuteeva, Wikis and Academic Writing: Changing the Writer-Reader Relationship (Stockholm University, Press, 2011), 445 Nadzrah Abu Baker, Kemboja Ismail, Using Blogs to Encourage ESL Students to Write Constructively in English (AJTLHE: ASEAN Journal of Teaching and Learning in Higher Education, Press, 2009), 456 Jones, 80
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Application of Blogs and Wikis in a Higher Learning Environment
As technology advances, so does the applications to use it. Whereas blogs started off as
online diaries, it didn’t take long before journalists began to use them to spread and share news
and information with one another. From there, blogs and wikis have been used in both business
and personal environments. Employees in a company are able to share files, links, and other
information with one another, while social networking continues to be a thriving industry. The
use of blogs and wikis in an academic setting is continuing to grow, however, there is very little
research of it being used with ESL/EFL students. Although there is currently little research in
this particular field, research that has been found indicates that both blogs and wikis can facilitate
language learning due to their collaborative nature.
Collaborative Writing with Blogs and Wikis
Collaborative writing is writing that involves multiple authors to create a piece of written
work. For ESL/EFL students, collaborative writing proves to be a useful method for process
writing. "The process in group planning, co-creating written work, peer-reviewing, and co-
editing can engage learners to become active and responsible."7 Collaborative writing is also an
essential tool for assisting students through their own zone of proximal development (ZPD). ZPD
is a concept developed by psychologist Lev Vygotsky that is defined as "the gap between what
the learner could accomplish alone and what they could accomplish in cooperation with others
who are more skilled or experienced."8 The teacher can then create individual scaffolding
techniques for students in the hopes of having those students achieve tasks that they couldn't do
on their own, by themselves. The collaborative writing process between blogs and wikis are
different, but they both share the same objective of improving English in ESL/EFL students.
7 Chao, Lo, 3968 Ibid, 396
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Collaborative Writing Benefits of Blogs
Unlike wikis, blogs allow ESL/EFL students to post their own personal views and
opinions on a topic. Acting as an online journal, "blogs allow the learners to participate actively
in their own learning, determine their learning goals, and share their own knowledge and
understanding of the target learning activities." 9 Other students can then reply on the comment,
which promotes interactive discussion and a collective understanding of the subject between the
students. Additionally, "blogs reinforce critical thinking skills by acquainting students with the
basics of internet content development."10 Blogs can also be used as a supplemental aid for
teachers allowing them to view interactions between students. Teachers can then use these
interactions to "create, edit, or delete their teaching handouts such as notes, homework and
review materials."11 This allows teachers to modify their lesson plans so that it becomes
beneficial to a greater majority of students (if not all) in their classroom.
Collaborative Writing Benefits of Wikis
Wikis are highly collaborative making teamwork a necessity for success. Students work
together to produce content and share common objectives when it comes to completing an
assignment. Unlike blogs, collaboration writing in a wiki requires the alteration of a previous
entry, and not just a comment. "Wikis as a medium to focus on language can assist EFL learners
to raise metalinguistic awareness in writing, as the 'history' feature in the wiki lists all the edits in
which changes are highlighted."12 This helps ESL/EFL students identify changes easily due to it
being presented in a noticeable form and creates the opportunity to learn from previous edits.
9 Nadzrah Abu Barker, Hafizah Latif, and Azizah Ya'acob, "ESL Students feedback on the use of blogs for language learning" (University Kebangsaan Malaysia, Press, 2010), 12210 Mah, Boon Yih, and Liaw, Shun Chone ”Bringing Blogs Into ESL Writing Classroom" (Universiti Teknologi MARA (UiTM, Penang Campus, Press, 2008), 211 Wen-shuenn Wu, "Using blogs in an EFL writing class" (Chung Hua University, Press, 2005), 42712 Chao, Lo, 398
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Benefits of Online Interaction
Due to classroom time restraints, the use of blogs and wikis offer students the opportunity
to continue their classwork from the comfort of their own home. They are able to work at their
own pace, without having to worry about being rushed. I previously mentioned that blogs and
wikis are highly collaborative because they create a shared writing environment. There, students
(and teachers) can offer suggestions, corrections, and give other types of feedback. Because
blogs and wikis are online and open to the public, students learn to develop writing that is
focused on a broader audience, and not just their teacher or classmates. The thought of someone
other than the students' teacher reading their work can lead to better quality work.
Using Scaffolding Techniques
Blogs and wikis alone will not improve English learning and writing skills. Without
proper guidance, blogs and wikis are useless tools for improving English skills in ESL/EFL
students. Scaffolding techniques are often used along with blogs and wikis. Yu-Chuan Joni Chao
and Hao-Chang Lo describe scaffolding as a two-step process. The first step is to provide some
kind of support that exceeds the ESL/EFL students' abilities alone. The second step is to
gradually remove that support as students build up certain knowledge and skills to the point
where they can work independently.13 Using scaffolding techniques are limitless in the learning
environment. A teacher could split students into groups and have them write an entry on a
particular subject in a wiki. The first step would involve students interacting with one another as
they develop drafts and other pre-writing materials. Group interaction allows sharing of ideas
and can alleviate writing anxieties that an ESL/EFL student may face while writing alone. Once
a firm structure is created and the pre-writing phase is over, students' can use the ideas that were
13 Ibid, 396
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developed during the pre-writing phase to write an individual part of the assignment on their
own. This two part procedure allows information to be shared and developed between peers and
later requires students to develop their own ideas on how to apply their knowledge to the final
project.
Future ResearchThe Effects of Peer Editing
Additional research needs to be conducted to see whether or not peer editing between
ESL/EFL students is effective in blog/wiki environments. According to research by Sharla Jones,
she states that ESL/EFL students often feel that they cannot give effective feedback because of
their lack in grammar and vocabulary. 14 Similarly, many of the students lack trust in their
classmates when it comes to peer editing. This might be caused by the absence of face-to-face
interaction in an online environment. Further research needs to be conducted to see whether or
not this is the case.
Suggestion for Research in Peer Editing
Considering that blogs and wikis are open to the public, a practical approach would be to
get outside native English speakers to provide insight. Teachers from the same school can
collaborate and create assignments that benefit their students. Students in the ESL/EFL class can
still participate in their groups to create written content, and the native English students can add
feedback if they notice something that hasn't been suggested or corrected.
ConclusionBlogs and wikis can have incredible potential in helping ESL/EFL students better
understand the English language when used alongside scaffolding techniques. They ease the
14 Jones, 251
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restrictiveness of learning the standard writing process by allowing students to collaborate, and
work comfortably at their own pace. Blogs and wikis only require a computer and internet
connection, allowing students' flexibility in work environment. Despite these advantages, blogs
and wikis have very limited research of them being used to help ESL and EFL students with
English. With English growing and becoming the more prominent language in both business and
academia, I suggest that more time and effort go into investing this cause.
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