Writing and Responding to Discussion Posts

Nikolas NadeauWriting Instructor

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Agenda

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What are discussion posts?

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Writing a Discussion Post

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The Writing Process: An Overview

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The Writing Process: Creating a Discussion Post

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Creating a Discussion Post: Prewriting

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Example Prompt: UndergraduatePost by Day 3 200–300 words describing one best experience and one worst experience where you chose to communicate in an electronic/computer communication channel rather than a physical presence or written/printed channel. Be sure to include answers to the following questions:•Why did you choose to communicate electronically rather than in person?•Why was the experience positive or negative?•How do the components and processes of communication apply to the electronic/computer channel?•Be sure to support your ideas by connecting them to the week's Learning Resources and something you have read, heard, seen, or experienced.

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Example Prompt: Master’s (MPA)Public administration has a variety of definitions encompassing occupational, managerial, political, and legal perspectives, among others. Essentially, public administration is the work performed by all levels of government. This work broadly includes the management of public services and the creation and implementation of public policy. Recognizing the connection between public administration and public policy is important to your understanding of the concept and context of public administration as well as what results from its policies and actions.In this Discussion, you will create your own definition of public administration and tell how it relates to public policy.•Post by Day 4 your own definition of public administration. •Then, analyze the relationship between public administration and public policy. Justify your responses.•Be sure to support your postings and responses with specific references to the Learning Resources.

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Example Prompt: Doctoral (PhD)Post by Day 3 the following in 2-3 paragraphs:•Your definitions of the following terms: philosophy of science, paradigm, epistemology, and ontology. Note that defining philosophy of science is different from asking you about your personal philosophy of your discipline, such as your philosophy of education, or your philosophy of management. •The distinction between and among these terms •An explanation of why these terms are important for researchers to know•Be sure to support your postings and responses with specific references to the reading(s) and/or media segment(s) and use APA format.

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Creating a Discussion Post: Prewriting

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Creating a Discussion PostIn this Discussion, you will address some of the features of academic writing. To prepare :•Think about the ways in which academic writing differs from most other writing.•As you read and analyze the article you selected for Assignment 1, notice interesting examples of particular features of academic writing and whether the author of the article is making any assumptions about the reader.

Post by Day 4 a paragraph or two commenting on a few of the features of academic writing that you noticed when you did this week's assignment. For example, you might mention:•Ways in which academic writing differs from most other writing with examples.•Interesting examples from the article of particular features of academic writing.•Point out features that differ from what is expected in academic writing.•Illustrations of assumptions about the background of readers that the author of the article appears to be making

Conclude your post with something you learned this week about academic writing.

(Walden University, 2013b)

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Creating a Discussion Post: Prewriting

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Example: Prewriting

• Introduction and topic information– Definition of academic writing– Thesis: Academic writing requires support from sources and an

academic tone to show information and ideas are reliable.• Using sources in academic writing

– Example of using sources – Why using sources is important

• Using an academic tone in academic writing– Example of using academic tone– Why academic tone is important

Sample Outline (hierarchical)

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Example: Prewriting Sample Outline (mind map from bubbl.us)

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Creating a Discussion Post: Drafting

• Using your outline, write your first draft

• Maintain a scholarly, respectful tone

• Cite sources and include references

• Use the MEAL plan as a guide for your paragraphs

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Example: DraftingAcademic writing, the type of writing used in academic fields, is different than other types

of writing because it has specific rules regarding tone, word choice, audience, objectivity, and use of research (“Walden University,” 2013). Two of the most important and common characteristics of academic writing is that writers are required to support ideas with sources and use an academic tone to show their information and ideas are reliable.

Using sources in academic writing shows that the writer’s ideas are based on research, not just the writer’s opinions. An example of this is in Hemmeter (1990), who included an extensive references list of 56 sources that he used throughout his article. As his reader, this allowed me to see how Hemmeter’s ideas were supported by the research others have done. This use of research thus helped me trust the information Hemmeter was providing.

Academic tone is another important characteristic of academic writing because it helps the reader see that the author is being objective. Hemmeter (1990) used an academic tone in most of his article, but some sentences used more informal language. In one such place he used the phrases “to sum up” (42). The phrase “to sum up” is a colloquial phrase used in other types of writing like letters to family or on a blog, so it should not be used in academic writing. This week’s assignments showed me that using sources and an academic tone is important in my writing at Walden. Both using research and academic tone helps me to participate in the academic community of my field. In particular, I realized that using research ensures I do not rely on opinion in my writing.

References…

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Creating a Discussion Post: Finalizing

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Responding to a Discussion Post

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Responding to a Post: Prewriting

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Responding to a Post: Prewriting

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Responding to a Discussion Post

Read a selection of your colleagues' postings. Respond by Day 6 to two of your colleagues' postings in one or more of the following ways:•Compare and contrast their observations with what you found.•Ask a probing question.•Share an insight from having read your colleague's posting.•Offer and support an opinion.•Validate an idea with your own experience.•Make a suggestion.•Expand on your colleague's posting.Return to this Discussion in a few days to read the responses to your initial posting. Note what you have learned and/or any insights you have gained as a result of the comments your colleagues made.

(Walden University, 2013b)

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Responding to a Post: Suggestions

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Example: Drafting

Helen, I thought you provided helpful insight when you mentioned that the article you read used a lot of colloquial language, which we should avoid in academic writing. As I also found in my article, it can be easy to overlook colloquial language because we use it so often in normal conversations. I found the Walden Writing Center’s (2013) examples of colloquial language and other types of word choice to avoid useful in thinking more about this topic.

References…

I agree that your source seemed to be very thorough in using sources to support his ideas, Pat. In the examples you gave, however, I noticed that the author only used quotations. The Walden Writing Center (2013) advised students to use paraphrasing more than quotations in their writing. So, while we can look to your source as a model for using sources in our writing, we should paraphrase those sources instead of quote them so much.

References…

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Reflection

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Other Resources

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Questions

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References

Walden University. (2013a). Graduate writing for non-native English speakers

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