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In this program, Gary Kinder, of WordRake, answers questions about grammar lawyers have always wanted someone else to ask. He teaches lawyers how to remove unnecessary words to ensure their writing is concise, and shows lawyers how to enliven their sentences.

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Page 1: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

The 7 All-Time Questions

about Grammar You Always Wanted Someone Else to Ask

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7 Lay/Lie

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the confusion:

7 Lay/Lie

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the confusion: “lay” is the present tense of “to lay”

7 Lay/Lie

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the confusion: “lay” is the present tense of “to lay” but the past tense of “to lie”

7 Lay/Lie

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the confusion: “lay” is the present tense of “to lay” but the past tense of “to lie” and the two are not interchangeable

7 Lay/Lie

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the confusion: “lay” is the present tense of “to lay” but the past tense of “to lie” and the two are not interchangeable

I lay

7 Lay/Lie

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the confusion: “lay” is the present tense of “to lay” but the past tense of “to lie” and the two are not interchangeable

I lay the brief on the desk.

7 Lay/Lie

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the confusion: “lay” is the present tense of “to lay” but the past tense of “to lie” and the two are not interchangeable

I lay

7 Lay/Lie

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the confusion: “lay” is the present tense of “to lay” but the past tense of “to lie” and the two are not interchangeable

I lay down in the hammock.

7 Lay/Lie

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the confusion: “lay” is the present tense of “to lay” but the past tense of “to lie” and the two are not interchangeable

I lay

7 Lay/Lie

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the confusion: “lay” is the present tense of “to lay” but the past tense of “to lie” and the two are not interchangeable

I lay the brief on the desk.

7 Lay/Lie

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the confusion: “lay” is the present tense of “to lay” but the past tense of “to lie” and the two are not interchangeable

I lay the brief on the desk. Right now.

7 Lay/Lie

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the confusion: “lay” is the present tense of “to lay” but the past tense of “to lie” and the two are not interchangeable

I lay

7 Lay/Lie

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the confusion: “lay” is the present tense of “to lay” but the past tense of “to lie” and the two are not interchangeable

I lay down in the hammock.

7 Lay/Lie

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the confusion: “lay” is the present tense of “to lay” but the past tense of “to lie” and the two are not interchangeable

I lay down in the hammock. Yesterday.

7 Lay/Lie

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present tense

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present tense I __ down and ___ my head on the pillow.

7 Lay/Lie

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present tense I lie down and ___ my head on the pillow.

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present tense I lie down and lay my head on the pillow.

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past tense

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past tense I ___ down and ____ my head on the pillow.

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past tense I lay down and ____ my head on the pillow.

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past tense I lay down and laid my head on the pillow.

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remember:

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remember: to lay - requires an object

7 Lay/Lie

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remember: to lay - requires an object to lie - never has an object

7 Lay/Lie

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remember: to lay - requires an object - past tense is laid to lie - never has an object

7 Lay/Lie

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remember: to lay - requires an object - past tense is laid to lie - never has an object - past tense is lay

7 Lay/Lie

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6

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6 Me/Myself

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Never use “myself” in place of “I.”

6 Me/Myself

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Never use “myself” in place of “I.” My letter to Mr. Gallagher was written after our meeting earlier this year during which myself and the General Manager explained at length why the District should serve as lead agency.

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Never use “myself” in place of “I.” My letter to Mr. Gallagher was written after our meeting earlier this year during which myself and the General Manager explained at length why the District should serve as lead agency.

6 Me/Myself

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Never use “myself” in place of “I.” My letter to Mr. Gallagher was written after our meeting earlier this year during which I and the General Manager explained at length why the District should serve as lead agency.

6 Me/Myself

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Never use “myself” in place of “I.” My letter to Mr. Gallagher was written after our meeting earlier this year during which the General Manager and I explained at length why the District should serve as lead agency.

6 Me/Myself

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Never use “myself” in place of “I.” My letter to Mr. Gallagher was written after our meeting earlier this year during which the General Manager and I explained at length why the District should serve as lead agency.

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Use “myself” only as an object

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Use “myself” only as an object and only if “I” is acting on “myself.”

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Use “myself” only as an object and only if “I” is acting on “myself.”

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Use “myself” only as an object and only if “I” is acting on “myself.” I have enclosed information related to the relevant areas of practice, as well as profiles on myself and Paul.

6 Me/Myself

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Use “myself” only as an object and only if “I” is acting on “myself.” I have enclosed information related to the relevant areas of practice, as well as profiles on myself and Paul.

6 Me/Myself

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Use “myself” only as an object and only if “I” is acting on “myself.” I have enclosed information related to the relevant areas of practice, as well as profiles on Paul and myself.

6 Me/Myself

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Use “myself” only as an object and only if “I” is acting on “myself.” I have enclosed information related to the relevant areas of practice, as well as profiles on Paul and myself.

6 Me/Myself

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5

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5 Can/May

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can

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can - capability

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can - capability

He can fix a leak with a paper clip.

5 Can/May

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can - capability

He can fix a leak with a paper clip. may

5 Can/May

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can - capability

He can fix a leak with a paper clip. may - permission

5 Can/May

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can - capability

He can fix a leak with a paper clip. may - permission

You may not come in here.

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School Can Deny Funding to Group A public law school in California can deny recognition to a Christian student group that refused to accept gay members, the Supreme Court ruled.

5 Can/May

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School Can Deny Funding to Group A public law school in California can deny recognition to a Christian student group that refused to accept gay members, the Supreme Court ruled.

5 Can/May

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School May Deny Funding to Group A public law school in California may deny recognition to a Christian student group that refused to accept gay members, the Supreme Court ruled.

5 Can/May

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School May Deny Funding to Group A public law school in California may deny recognition to a Christian student group that refused to accept gay members, the Supreme Court ruled.

5 Can/May

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4

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4 Fewer/Less

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fewer

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fewer – numbers

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fewer – numbers – can be separated

4 Fewer/Less

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fewer – numbers – can be separated less

4 Fewer/Less

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fewer – numbers – can be separated less – measurement

4 Fewer/Less

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fewer – numbers – can be separated less – measurement – cannot be separated

4 Fewer/Less

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4 Fewer/Less

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fewer trees

4 Fewer/Less

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fewer trees - less shade

4 Fewer/Less

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fewer trees - less shade

fewer drops

4 Fewer/Less

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fewer trees - less shade

fewer drops - less water

4 Fewer/Less

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Ad for new Ford Escape Hybrid:

4 Fewer/Less

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Ad for new Ford Escape Hybrid: That means less trips to the gas station.

4 Fewer/Less

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Ad for new Ford Escape Hybrid: That means less trips to the gas station.

4 Fewer/Less

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Ad for new Ford Escape Hybrid: That means fewer trips to the gas station.

4 Fewer/Less

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Ad for new Ford Escape Hybrid: That means fewer trips to the gas station.

4 Fewer/Less

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3

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3 Who/Whom

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who

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

Who did you wish to see?

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

Who did you wish to see?

Whom shall I say is calling?

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

Who Did you wish to see she?

Whom shall I say is calling?

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

Who Did you wish to see her?

Whom shall I say is calling?

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

Whom did you wish to see?

Whom shall I say is calling?

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

Whom did you wish to see?

Whom shall I say is calling?

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

Whom did you wish to see?

Whom Shall I say her is calling?

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

Whom did you wish to see?

Whom Shall I say she is calling?

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

Whom did you wish to see?

Who shall I say is calling?

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

Whom did you wish to see?

Who shall I say is calling?

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

I am writing this to _____ is in charge.

That depends on _____ you want to go.

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

I am writing this to Him is in charge.

That depends on _____ you want to go.

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

I am writing this to He is in charge.

That depends on _____ you want to go.

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

I am writing this to whoever is in charge.

That depends on _____ you want to go.

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

I am writing this to whoever is in charge.

That depends on _____ you want to go.

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

I am writing this to whoever is in charge.

That depends on Do you want he to go.

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

I am writing this to whoever is in charge.

That depends on Do you want him to go.

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

I am writing this to whoever is in charge.

That depends on whom you want to go.

3 Who/Whom

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who – subject whom – object

I am writing this to whoever is in charge.

That depends on whom you want to go.

3 Who/Whom

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2

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2 Possessives

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singular

2 Possessives

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singular

add ’s

2 Possessives

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singular

add ’s

the plaintiff’s brief

2 Possessives

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singular plural

add ’s

the plaintiff’s brief

2 Possessives

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singular plural

add ’s add ’

the plaintiff’s brief

2 Possessives

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singular plural

add ’s add ’

the plaintiff’s brief the plaintiffs’ brief

2 Possessives

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singular

2 Possessives

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singular (ending in s)

2 Possessives

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singular (ending in s)

add ’s

2 Possessives

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singular (ending in s)

add ’s

Andrews’s brief

2 Possessives

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singular plural (ending in s)

add ’s

Andrews’s brief

2 Possessives

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singular plural (ending in s) (not ending in s)

add ’s

Andrews’s brief

2 Possessives

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singular plural (ending in s) (not ending in s)

add ’s add ’s

Andrews’s brief

2 Possessives

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singular plural (ending in s) (not ending in s)

add ’s add ’s

Andrews’s brief the people’s rights

2 Possessives

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one BIG exception:

2 Possessives

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one BIG exception:

its

2 Possessives

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one BIG exception:

its (possessive pronoun)

2 Possessives

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one BIG exception:

its (possessive pronoun)

it’s

2 Possessives

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one BIG exception:

its (possessive pronoun)

it’s

(contraction for “it is”)

2 Possessives

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1

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1 That/Which

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that

1 That/Which

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that – restrictive

1 That/Which

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that – restrictive which

1 That/Which

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that – restrictive which – nonrestrictive

1 That/Which

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that – restrictive – essential which – nonrestrictive

1 That/Which

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that – restrictive – essential which – nonrestrictive – nonessential

1 That/Which

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that – restrictive – essential – distinguishes which – nonrestrictive – nonessential

1 That/Which

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that – restrictive – essential – distinguishes which – nonrestrictive – nonessential – merely

adds information

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank that sits at Fifth and Pine does not charge its customers to use the ATM.

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank that sits at Fifth and Pine does not charge its customers to use the ATM. How many banks?

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank that sits at Fifth and Pine does not charge its customers to use the ATM. How many banks? More than one.

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank that sits at Fifth and Pine does not charge its customers to use the ATM. How many banks? More than one. Which one are we talking about?

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank that sits at Fifth and Pine does not charge its customers to use the ATM. How many banks? More than one. Which one are we talking about? The one at Fifth and Pine.

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank that sits at Fifth and Pine does not charge its customers to use the ATM. How many banks? More than one. Which one are we talking about? The one at Fifth and Pine. The clause restricts us to that bank.

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank that sits at Fifth and Pine does not charge its customers to use the ATM. How many banks? More than one. Which one are we talking about? The one at Fifth and Pine. The clause restricts us to that bank. This is essential information.

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank, which sits at Fifth and Pine, does not charge its customers to use the ATM.

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank, which sits at Fifth and Pine, does not charge its customers to use the ATM. How many banks?

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank, which sits at Fifth and Pine, does not charge its customers to use the ATM. How many banks? Only one.

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank, which sits at Fifth and Pine, does not charge its customers to use the ATM. How many banks? Only one. Where is it?

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank, which sits at Fifth and Pine, does not charge its customers to use the ATM. How many banks? Only one. Where is it? At Fifth and Pine.

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank, which sits at Fifth and Pine, does not charge its customers to use the ATM. How many banks? Only one. Where is it? At Fifth and Pine. The clause does not distinguish this Commerce Bank from other Commerce Banks;

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank, which sits at Fifth and Pine, does not charge its customers to use the ATM. How many banks? Only one. Where is it? At Fifth and Pine. The clause does not distinguish this Commerce Bank from other Commerce Banks; it merely adds information,

1 That/Which

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The Commerce Bank, which sits at Fifth and Pine, does not charge its customers to use the ATM. How many banks? Only one. Where is it? At Fifth and Pine. The clause does not distinguish this Commerce Bank from other Commerce Banks; it merely adds information, non-essential information.

1 That/Which

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7 Signs for Spotting Useless Words

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it

7 Signs for Spotting Useless Words

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it

that

7 Signs for Spotting Useless Words

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it

that in

7 Signs for Spotting Useless Words

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it

that in of

7 Signs for Spotting Useless Words

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it

that in of .

7 Signs for Spotting Useless Words

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it

that in of .

as

7 Signs for Spotting Useless Words

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it

that in of .

as or

7 Signs for Spotting Useless Words

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It should be noted that the Appendix does not include the transcripts from the depositions.

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It should be noted that the Appendix does not include the transcripts from the depositions.

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It should be noted that the Appendix does not include the transcripts from the depositions.

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It should be noted that the Appendix does not include the transcripts from the depositions.

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The Appendix does not include the transcripts from the depositions.

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The Appendix does not include the transcripts from the depositions.

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The Appendix does not include the transcripts from the depositions.

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The Appendix does not include the transcripts from the depositions.

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The Appendix does not include the transcripts.

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The relevant provisions in Section 604 state in pertinent part:

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The relevant provisions in Section 604 state in pertinent part:

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The relevant provisions in Section 604 state in pertinent part:

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The relevant provisions in Section 604 state:

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The relevant provisions in Section 604 state:

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The provisions in Section 604 state:

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The provisions in Section 604 state:

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The provisions in Section 604 state:

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The provisions state:

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The provisions in Section 604 state:

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The provisions in Section 604 state:

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Section 604 provides:

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Section 604 provides:

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The purpose of this memorandum is to provide you with an overview of the legal aspects of trading in Germany. The first part of the memorandum provides . . . .

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The purpose of this memorandum is to provide you with an overview of the legal aspects of trading in Germany. The first part of the memorandum provides . . . .

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The purpose of this memorandum is to provide you with an overview of the legal aspects of trading in Germany. The first part of the memorandum provides . . . .

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This memorandum provides you with an overview of the legal aspects of trading in Germany. The first part provides . . . .

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This memorandum provides you with an overview of the legal aspects of trading in Germany. The first part provides . . . .

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This memorandum summarizes the legal aspects of trading in Germany. The first part provides . . . .

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This memorandum summarizes the legal aspects of trading in Germany. The first part provides . . . .

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This memorandum summarizes the legal aspects of trading in Germany. The first part provides . . . .

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This memorandum summarizes trade law in Germany. The first part provides . . . .

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This memorandum summarizes trade law in Germany. The first part provides . . . .

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This memorandum summarizes German trade law. The first part provides . . . .

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NOW, THEREFORE, it is agreed between the parties as follows:

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NOW, THEREFORE, it is agreed between the parties as follows:

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NOW, THEREFORE, it is agreed between the parties as follows:

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NOW, THEREFORE, the parties agree as follows:

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NOW, THEREFORE, the parties agree as follows:

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NOW, THEREFORE, the parties agree as follows:

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NOW, THEREFORE, the parties agree:

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At or about the same time, Paulson termi-nated his agreement with Vitrex.

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At or about the same time, Paulson termi-nated his agreement with Vitrex.

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At or about the same time, Paulson termi-nated his agreement with Vitrex.

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At the same time, Paulson terminated his agreement with Vitrex.

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At or about the same time, Paulson termi-nated his agreement with Vitrex.

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At or about the same time, Paulson termi-nated his agreement with Vitrex.

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About the same time, Paulson terminated his agreement with Vitrex.

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3 Signs for Spotting Nominalizations

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3 Signs for Spotting Nominalizations

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3 Signs for Spotting Nominalizations

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3 Signs for Spotting Nominalizations

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3 Signs for Spotting Nominalizations

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3 Signs for Spotting Nominalizations

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3 Signs for Spotting Nominalizations

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3 Signs for Spotting Nominalizations

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3 Signs for Spotting Nominalizations

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3 Signs for Spotting Nominalizations

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3 Signs for Spotting Nominalizations

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I wanted to confirm this treatment with you, so we are in agreement on the proper tax allocations.

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I wanted to confirm this treatment with you, so we are in agreement on the proper tax allocations.

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I wanted to confirm this treatment with you, so we are in agreement on the proper tax allocations.

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I wanted to confirm this treatment with you, so we are in agreement on the proper tax allocations.

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I wanted to confirm this treatment with you, so we agree on the proper tax allocations.

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I wanted to confirm this treatment with you, so we agree on the proper tax allocations.

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French law regarding patents does not provide a definition of the term “inventor.”

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French law regarding patents does not provide a definition of the term “inventor.”

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French law regarding patents does not provide a definition of the term “inventor.”

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French law regarding patents does not provide a definition of the term “inventor.”

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French law regarding patents does not define the term “inventor.”

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French law regarding patents does not define the term “inventor.”

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French law regarding patents does not define the term “inventor.”

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French law regarding patents does not define the term “inventor.”

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French law does not define “inventor.”

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By applying for the permit, Arnofsky was in violation of state licensing laws.

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By applying for the permit, Arnofsky was in violation of state licensing laws.

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By applying for the permit, Arnofsky was in violation of state licensing laws.

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By applying for the permit, Arnofsky was in violation of state licensing laws.

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By applying for the permit, Arnofsky was in violation of state licensing laws.

Page 235: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

By applying for the permit, Arnofsky violated state licensing laws.

Page 236: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

By applying for the permit, Arnofsky violated state licensing laws.

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This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 239: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 240: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 241: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 242: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 243: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 244: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 245: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 246: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 247: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 248: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 249: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 250: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 251: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 252: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 253: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided in con-nection with our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in the state of India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the terms of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard form of Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accord-ingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of the treatment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 254: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided . . . our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 255: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided . . . our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 256: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided . . . our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 257: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided . . . our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 258: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided . . . our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 259: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided . . . our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 260: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided . . . our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 261: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided . . . our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 262: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided . . . our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 263: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

This memorandum is being provided . . . our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 264: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight’s (the “Company”) proposed outsourcing of certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 265: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”), proposes to outsource certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum provides a comparative analysis of the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 266: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”), proposes to outsource certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum compares the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, please find an assessment of such provision under the Far East form.

Page 267: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”), proposes to outsource certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum compares the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 268: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”), proposes to outsource certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum compares the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 269: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”), proposes to outsource certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum compares the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 270: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”), proposes to outsource certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum compares the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 271: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”), proposes to outsource certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum compares the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 272: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”), proposes to outsource certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum compares the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 273: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”), proposes to outsource certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum compares the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 274: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”), proposes to outsource certain diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor based in India. Specifically, this memorandum compares the proposed agreement as provided by Far East, vis-à-vis the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Accordingly, set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 275: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”) wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor in India.

This memorandum compares the proposed agreement as provided by Far East to the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 276: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”) wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor in India.

This memorandum compares the proposed agreement as provided by Far East to the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 277: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”) wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor in India.

This memorandum compares the proposed agreement as provided by Far East to the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 278: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”) wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor in India.

This memorandum compares the proposed agreement as provided by Far East to the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 279: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”) wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor in India.

This memorandum compares the proposed agreement as provided by Far East to the standard provisions under Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 280: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”) wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor in India.

This memorandum compares Far East’s proposed agreement to Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 281: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”) wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor in India.

This memorandum compares Far East’s proposed agreement to Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 282: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”) wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor in India.

This memorandum compares Far East’s proposed agreement to Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”). Set forth below, under each referenced provision of the Preston Form, I have assessed such provision under the Far East form.

Page 283: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”) wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor in India.

This memorandum compares each provision of Far East’s proposed agreement to a similar provision in Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”).

Page 284: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”) wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor in India.

This memorandum compares each provision of Far East’s proposed agreement to a similar provision in Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”).

Page 285: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

Our client, NetRight (the “Company”) wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises (“Far East”), an independent contractor in India.

This memorandum compares each provision of Far East’s proposed agreement to a similar provision in Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement (“Preston Form”).

Page 286: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

NetRight wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises, an independent contractor in India.

This memorandum compares each provision of Far East’s proposed agreement to a similar provision in Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement.

Page 287: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

NetRight wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises, an independent contractor in India. This memorandum compares each provision of Far East’s proposed agreement to a similar provision in Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement.

Page 288: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

NetRight wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises, an independent contractor in India. This memorandum compares each provision of Far East’s proposed agreement to a similar provision in Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement.

Page 289: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

NetRight wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises, an independent contractor in India. In this memorandum I compare each provision of Far East’s proposed agreement to a similar provision in Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement.

Page 290: Writing, Editing and Grammar Tips for Lawyers

NetRight wants to outsource diagnostic testing and quality assurance services to Far East Enterprises, an independent contractor in India. In this memorandum I compare each provision of Far East’s proposed agreement to a similar provision in Preston’s standard Contractor Agreement.