You are My Hero edited excerpts from Jefferson student writings

2nd Grade Edited Writing

Excerpts

My teacher is my hero because she helps us.

My mom is my hero because she helps me feel better and helps me learn.

My sister is my hero because she is funny and helpful.

My dog is my hero because she saved me one time.

My aunt is my hero because when I cry, she kisses me on the head and helps me.

My hero is my cat because she helps me.

My dog Gus is my hero because she helps clean my room.

Dave is a hero because he lets me ride his truck.

God is my hero because he gives me a home with grass, and some trees. Next he gives me good and yummy food.

God is my hero because he gives me me fresh water and awesome food, dogs and cats and other pets.

Batman and army and mom and dad and God and sister and brother.

My hero is Jesus and God because he made us.

My hero is lots of people but I don’t know which one. I think it is my friends. I just don’t know. I think it is my dad. Yeah, I think it is my dad. Maybe it is my mom.

My cat Sam is my hero because she chases mice.

My moms and dad is a hero.

My aunt is my hero for many reasons. She helps me.

My hero is Spiderman.

My hero is me. I help people.

My hero is Olaf and Elsa and Anna.

My mom is my hero for many reasons. My mom cooks for me.

My dad is my hero for many reasons. First, he plays with me.

My mom is my hero because she is nice to me.

My dad is my hero for many reasons. First, he plays with me. We play football together.

My mom is my hero for many reasons.

My grandma is my hero because she cares about me.

My mom is my hero because she does stuff.

PTO is my hero and a hero for my school.

My family is my hero. First, my mom is my hero because she saved me and drives me to school. Next, my dad is my hero. He cares about me and loves me.

My family is my hero because they’re always there for me.

My mom is my hero because she is awesome.

My mom and dad are my hero because they have done lots of things for me.

My heros are cops for two reasons. First, they keep us safe and arrest bad guys. Next, they are nice.

The Air Force is my hero.They can go 100 miles per hour. They have guns under their wings.

My mom is my hero for two reasons. First, when I get hurt she helps me like when I fell off my scooter and when I fell off my bike.

My dog is my hero.

My hero is cops, fire fighters, ambulances and God.

My dad is a hero for many reasons.

I think my mom is my hero for many reasons.

My dog is my hero for many reasons.

My friends are my heros for many reasons.

My dad is my hero.

There are two people that are my heros. First, my great great great grandpa who was in the army in World War 2 and my dad who gets money.

My mom is my hero for many reasons. She is nice and beautiful.

My mom is a hero because she gets me out of my bed if there is a spider.

My dad and mom are my heros.

My dad is my hero. He helps me. He is tall.

My dad is a hero.

My hero is my godfather.

My favorite hero is a cop.

There are two heros in my family, my grandpa and my mom.

My favorite hero is my dad.

My dad is my hero because when I am bleeding he helps.

My aunt is my hero. She tells our neighbors to stop fighting so I can sleep.

My grandpa is my hero because he killed a huge spider.

My dad is my hero because he washes my blood.

My dad is my hero because he helps me, he loves me, he takes care of me, he brings me to school.

My mom is my hero.

My mom is my hero for many reasons. She feeds my family. She feeds me. She puts me to bed. She puts my brothers and my sister to bed. Thank you for all you do, mom.

My mom is my hero for a lot of things. When I fell, she caught me and got a bandaid. She gave me medicine and she put me on the couch.

Batman is my hero because he is cool and has weapons.

My hero is a firefighter.

Third Grade Edited Hero Excerpts

My dad is a hero because he was in the army and has saved my people.

Clearwater Marine Aquarium is my hero because they save animals so they can stay alive.

My dad is my hero because he saved me from a bee, and he loves me.

My mom is my hero because she gave me food.

The first horse I ever rode named Blue is my hero. Once I got hurt and started to bleed while he was eating, and he stopped for me and helped me. He put his head down, and I grabbed on.

A lot of people in my life are my heroes, like my family, like my dad who’s a P.A. and my mom who takes care of me and my brother well that’s a big deal.

My hero is my uncle Johnny who went to the army and came home just like when he left.

My cousin is my hero. First, he is in the Air Force. He comes and helps at our grandma’s house.

My mom is my hero. She is a nurse and takes care of people that were in the army and the navy.

My heroes are my mom and stepdad.

My mom is my hero because she does all she can.

My dog is my hero.

My heros are my uncle, my mom, my brother, and a doctor.

My mom is my hero for many reasons. First, I was choking on a chip. Then, my mom gets me ater. I drink it and stop choking.

My dog is a hero for many reasons. First, my dog barks if someone bad is in the house and if someone is at the door.Next, my dog cheers me up if I am sad or hurt.

My mom and dad are my heroes for many reasons. First, they cook for me so I would not starve. Thank you for cooking for me. Second, tey take care of me. If they would not take care of me, I would not have anybody to live with me. Thank you for taking care of me. Next, they love me forever. I am glad they love me so much. If they wouldn’t, I would not have anybody to love me.

My hero is my mom. First of all, my mom s my hero because she takes care of me and my family and my grandpa and my grandma. Next, she cleans my bed covers and my pillowcase.

My mom is my hero for many reasons. First, my mom saved Lexy and Kristina and my dog’s lives.

My hero is my family for many reasons. First of all, my family is nice. Next, my family is my hero because they care about me.

My dad and grampa are heroes in many ways. First, my dad is in the army.

All in my family are heroes. First, we do save other families.

My family is my hero for many reasons. First of all, my family loves me. My family takes care of me more than anyone. Next, my family buys us food. They take me to school. When I get back from school, they give me food to eat. When it is night, my family always read me a book. But I never get to say thank you. But every day, I always tell them I love them.

4th grade Edited Writing Excerpts

My hero is my great-grampa who was in the war.

My hero is my dad.

My hero is God.

My hero is God. Do you have a hero and why?

My hero is my great grandpa. He served in World War II.

My hero is all the soldiers who gave us our freedom.

I have a hero and that is my mom because of a lot of reasons.

My daddy is my hero because he provides our family food, a house, water and for saving and protecting this world’s freedom.

Do you have a hero? I do, and I will tell you who. My dog is my hero for saving me when I went in the woods at my house.

My hero is so honest and helpful. He takes people to jail if they have to. They take care of us if we break an arm.

How many heroes do you have? Is it an animal? I will tell you my hero - Kobe.

Mom is my hero. She cares for me. She is kind, helpful and more.

Today I would like to tell you who and why she is my hero. My hero is my sister Jas. To begin, she cooks the food. I don’t know how to cook.

How you ever had a hero that is always with you. Well, I had a hero is always with me and takes care of me when I’m a little girl. My hero is my mom. My mom is my hero because she is always there for me.

My hero is my Uncle Ben. He served in the Air Force.

Do you have a hero that is a weird person for a hero? I do, and that person is my dad. He is my hero because first off, he loves me for who I am. My dad doesn’t try to change me.

My mom is my hero. My mom does lots of things for me. She is amazing. She loves me even when I’m bad. She tucks me into bed. She is a great mom, and I love her with all my heart.

My dad is my hero. He has taught me many things in life.

Have you ever had someone special to you? My grand is nice to me. She cooks. She buys clothes. She is the best. She always does her best. She is the bomb. She celebrates my birthday. She is kind. She buys me toys. As you can see, she is my hero.

Who is your hero? My heroes are my parents. I have many reasons why they are my heroes. The first reason is that they buy me things I need.

My hero is my mom. My mom helps me when I get hurt. The second detail is that my mom helps me do my homework. Last is that my mom is nice to me.

My dad is my hero.

I’m going to tell you about my hero. My hero works in the dirt and sun and cold. He is my dad. My dad works all day to give us food and money. He is always willing to help or do anything. My dad is the best. I couldn’t ask for another one.

My uncle is my hero because he was in the Army. He was in the World War 1 and 2.

My heroes are my mom and dad. Both take care of me and also they buy my food and clothes.

Brook Berringer (1973-1995) was a Nebraska quarterback. He is my hero because he never gave up. He played with a collapsed lung. That shows courage and never giving up. He gave back to others. He spent many times with kids and people in the hospital.

Many reasons I love my dog, Sophie. She makes me exercise. She always jumps on me. She will protect our family.

My mom is my hero because she makes me food and my dad because he is very helpful.

Do you have a hero in your life? I do. My heroes are the nurses in Columbus Nursing Home for taking care of my great-grandma, even though she died. The reason why you are my heroes is because you took great care of her, even though she was very sick. You helped her through the pain and fed her great meals.

My dad is my hero for many reasons. He cooks most of the food. He helps with homework and brings us to school.

My mom is my hero.

My mom is my hero for many reasons. My mom gives me a lot of stuff I need.

My hero is my Grandpa Schaefer. He was the best grandpa I ever had. He took me to the park when I was little. My grandpa worked for the Navy.

My hero is my dog Louie.

These are my heroes who saved and protected my favorite people. The vet saved my dog Xeda after she got her leg ran over. Another hero is my Uncle Scott was in the army and is now retired from the army. The hospital saved my dad from heart disease. What I say to those people is thank you for all you did to save and to protect those people. Thank you!

My heroes - my mom and dad. I now will tell you about someone who will always love you and who knows that kids make mistakes.

My mom and dad are my heroes for many reasons.

I’m grateful for Ivy, my dog. She plays with me and helps me. I’m grateful for mom. She feeds me and makes my bed. She helps with homework. I’m grate for dad. He is a soccer coach and plays with me.

My hero is my dog, Daisy who we got at the farm.

My dog Louie is my hero who we got when he was puppy.