GCSEFortismere Photography Department

GCSE Photography Assessment SheetSTUDENT: Sonni Rossi DATE: 06/01/14TEACHER(S): Mr Holden UNIT: CourseworkTITLE: courseworkTarget grade AWag C+

Comments & Targets

The pictures that you have taken in this task do show some sense of discovery. The city landscape shots are particularly strong but I would have liked to of seen a lot more of them.

The exhibition task has some has some excellent analysis and you have clearly begun to look at and describe the more complex issues involved in the construction of the image. Your wording is good and the way in which the images have clearly inspired you is great

Forces

Strand 1 - Force of nature – (T-)This should consist of two responces one in school and the other at home. It would be better if you hads contact sheets befor your enlargments.

Strand 2 - Applied Force – (T)Some interesting images but again it would be good to see contact sheets of your images

Strand 3 - Force of transformation – (T-)Some good images but you must make sure that all images are yours and not just taken from the internet

GENNERAL COMMENTS

Some good work Sonni you must make sure that you analysis the work of other photographers in full to make sure that the contextual side of the course is covered.

Development

Each of the following strands need to have two sets of observations consisting of contact sheets and chosen enlargements

1) Force of nature

2) Applied force

3) Force of transformation

Develop the idea disjointed portraits you could try printing out the images and sticking them on different sized pieces of card

so they are on a relief. You could look at the portrait work of david Hockney and experiment creating cubist portraits. This

could also be linked to the idea of breaking the faces down into different boxes

MovementPlease put all work in one tab and make it run concisely

Close up abstractionTwo observation sets one in class and then one at home. You should then select a number of images that can be put alongside 6 words. You should then develop one of these word strands which should then culminate in a final piece.

Landscape.Please put all work in one tab and make it run concisely