Teacher Dante Nery

IELTS PREP COURSE

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WRITING ARGUMENTATIVE TEXTS

THE STRUCTURE OF AN ESSAY

ESSAY

INTRODUCTION:

Orientate the reader:

The concept of ______ has always been controversial ______

__________ has always been a very debated topic.

Purpouse:

The purpouse of this essay is to discuss _________

This essay aims at discussing _________

Thesis

Three important aspects regarding ________ are _______,______ and _________.

Rethorical question:

So the ulimate question is: which is more important: ________ or _______?

BODY

BODY

Thesis:

Firstly, one important point to consider is that ________

This can be ilustraded by the situation in _______

For this reason, _______________________

Thesis:

Secondly, - or - Another point to consider is that _______

For instance, _____________

Thus, ______________________

Thesis:

Thirdly, - or – A further point to consider is that __________

The present scenario in ____________ provides a clear example of that.

Therefore, ___________________________________

CONCLUSION

CONCLUSION

Answer rethorical question:

There is no easy answer to this debate, but I reckon that ___________________

Moreover, ___________________

Or

Concerning the matters of ________ and ________, I believe that _______________.

In conclusion, ____________________________

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