a trolley full of stories
DESCRIPTION
This anthology of stories was created by 120 children from Alway Primary, Glan Usk Primary, Llanmartin Primary, Lliswerry Primary, Marshfield Primary, St Gabriel’s Primary, St Woolos Primary and Ysgol Gymraeg Casnewydd. With a little help from children author and illustrator Thomas Docherty they created this book. The boys told us they had an “awesome” time with Thomas and that they now enjoy books, stories, writing and know more about their friends! One teacher told us that many of the boys are now inspired to become authors themselves! Thomas Docherty was “really pleased with how the boys have pulled together to come up with some brilliant writing…I think they're fantastic, the boys have done an amazing job”. The project was organised by Newport City Council’s Community Learning and Libraries as part of the Improving Boys’ Literacy project in Newport in 2012. These stories were presented to Newport’s LEA Literacy Advisors for them to enthuse other boys about books,TRANSCRIPT
This anthology of stories was created by 120 children from
Alway Primary, Glan Usk Primary, Llanmartin Primary, Lliswerry
Primary, Marshfield Primary, St Gabriel’s Primary, St Woolos
Primary and Ysgol Gymraeg Casnewydd. With a little help from
children author and illustrator Thomas Docherty they created
this book.
The boys told us they had an “awesome” time with Thomas and that
they now enjoy books, stories, writing and know more about their
friends! One teacher told us that many of the boys are now inspired
to become authors themselves!
Thomas Docherty was “really pleased with how the boys have pulled
together to come up with some brilliant writing…I think they're
fantastic, the boys have done an amazing job”.
The project was organised by Newport City Council’s Community
Learning and Libraries as part of the Improving Boys’ Literacy
project in Newport in 2012.
These stories were presented to Newport’s LEA Literacy Advisors
for them to enthuse other boys about books, stories and reading.
For more information about the project contact us online at
Contents
The Coin by Alway primary ....................................................... 4
00Pets (Double ´0’ Pets) by Glan Usk Primary .................. 11
The Time Wall by Lliswerry Primary .................................... 18
The Birthday Bumps by Llanmartin Primary ...................... 24
My Nan by Marshfield Primary .............................................. 30
The Wool of Life by St Gabriels RC Primary ...................... 38
My Friend Dave the Trolley by St Woolos Primary ....... 43
Help! My Sister is a Monster by Ysgol Gymraeg ........... 48
The Coin by Alway primary
Another boring holiday in Tenby with my parents. No
friends, as usual. I would rather be reading the
Yellow Pages, which tells you something… By the way,
my name is Ethan.
One day, I was bored, as usual so I decided to go to
the beach. I took my time walking down the rocky
path and I heard the crashing noise of the waves
against the wall. Then I noticed the tide coming in.
But this wasn’t an ordinary tide. It looked like an
ordinary tide but I knew that this was something
different. It came in and in and washed up an old
bottle at my feet.
It was a large glass bottle covered in seaweed, and it
seemed to contain a piece of paper. It was difficult
to open because the salt water had made the top
rusty and jammed it up. Inside there was a piece of
stained paper and a coin. Cautiously, I took out the
message. It looked ancient and crumpled up. I read
out the old fashioned writing. It said:
Do you dare flip the coin? Doom or luck, you decide!
I was intrigued by this coin. I had thought my holiday
was going to be boring, but it was going to be a lot
better now! A burst of excitement tingled up my
spine. Should I flip the coin? Ah, who cares, what
could possibly go wrong?!?
I decided to go to the arcade and play on the 2p
machines. I flipped the mysterious coin. I won lots of
2ps so I went to play on the slot machines. I flipped
the coin again. This time I lost. So I flipped the coin
again and went to the aquarium.
I didn’t know what to expect but I knew it would be
fun. I started walking through the glass tunnel with
fish flying all around me but they looked a bit
unusual, and that is when I knew something was up.
Then the water in the tank suddenly started to turn
green and the fish started gasping frantically for air.
I felt guilty for flipping the coin. How could I help
them? Maybe if I flipped the coin again I might save
the fish. I flipped the coin and the water slowly
turned back to normal and the fish started to revive.
I was relieved but also a bit ashamed. I needed
something to cheer me up. Maybe an ice cream would
do, but there were no ice cream vans in sight. Once
again I flipped the coin.
Just then, an ice cream van appeared from nowhere!
The ice cream man smiled as if he knew me and
handed me the biggest ice cream ever. How did he
know that was my favourite flavour? Chocolate chip
with sprinkles and a spectacular flake, topped off
with chocolate sauce! I thought I was dreaming. I
took a lick and the ice cream seemed to get bigger. I
took another lick and it grew and grew and grew. It
was enormous now and so heavy that I couldn’t hold it
any longer. I couldn’t flip the coin, so I threw it to
the ice cream man and asked him to do it for me. He
tossed it into the air and it landed on the sand. And
just then a seagull came swooping down and crashed
into my hand and the ice cream fell on the floor.
After the seagull took my ice cream I was fed up,
but then I saw a sand castle competition. It was £1
to enter. I paid them with my 2ps. I saw everyone’s
sand castles. They were extraordinary, how was I
going to win? I took the coin out of my pocket. I was
hoping for luck. I flipped the coin and I started
building. Time stopped, the castle just kept growing
and growing before my eyes. An astonishing castle
appeared. The judges awarded me first prize and
another ice cream. What a day!
Just then I met my Mum and Dad. “What have you
been doing?” they asked.
I didn’t know what to say, so I nervously replied,
“Nothing much, just went to the beach.”
Mum and Dad said that they were going to get a
pedal boat and go to Caldey Island. “Do you want to
come too?” they asked.
“No thanks, I want to go to the fair. I’ll see you
later.”
I decided to go on the big wheel, but just before I
got my ticket I reached into my pocket and grabbed
the coin. I crossed my fingers and hoped for good
luck. I flipped the coin anxiously and after waiting
ten minutes in the queue I got on the ride. The old,
rusty wheel eventually began to turn and it creaked
and clanked and I moved to the very top. “What a
view!” I said. Suddenly I heard a crunching noise and
the ride came to a standstill. I was nervous and
worried but I just looked at the beautiful view of
Tenby. Then something in the sea caught my eye. Two
people in a pedal boat were waving. I took a closer
look and thought, I know these people!
It was Mum and Dad and they were waving for help
because their pedal boat was sinking. I panicked and
suddenly I was searching in my pocket for the coin. I
flipped it and to my horror things got worse. The
boat started sinking faster. So I flipped it again and
this time the boat snapped in half and they both
went under the water. I was petrified, it was all going
wrong, this wasn’t meant to happen, I was meant to
save them. I flipped the coin for the last time and
Mum and Dad’s heads rose from the sea and a rescue
boat arrived and picked them up.
I was so relieved. At last the ride started going again
and when it reached the bottom I quickly jumped off
and sprinted down to the beach. I reached the
rescue boat and hugged Mum and Dad as tightly as I
could, as if I hadn’t seen them for months.
It was coming to the end of the day. I took the coin
out of my pocket and looked at it. I realised it had
caused too much trouble, plus it was too much power
for me. All the bad luck it had caused; too much guilt.
First the aquarium, with all the fish almost dying and
coming back to life, and then my Mum and Dad nearly
drowning.
I went and found the bottle and carefully put the
message and the coin back in and screwed on the lid.
Finally I put the bottle back in the sea and we
watched the tide go out as the sun set.
By boys from Alway Primary
00Pets (Double ´0’ Pets) by Glan Usk Primary
Hello, my name is Jack and I have a story to tell...
I live in Summerton Street near the park. I’ve got
three pets: Billy the parrot, George the snake and
Webster my dog, and together we fight crime and
solve mysteries. We are 00Pets. Billy is the Brains,
George is the Scout and Webster is strong, fast and
brave.
Every evening when I’m doing my homework I look out
the window at the park. One evening I saw a creepy
man walking towards a hole by a tree. It looked like
the park keeper.
The next evening the same thing happened, but this
time the man was carrying a box and he put it in the
hole. He was also carrying some sort of weird lumps
in his hands and he put them in the box too.
Then the next day at school I heard that four boys
were in the park at dusk and the park keeper stopped
them and told them to get out because it was
haunted after dark. I wondered what the creepy
park keeper was up to. What was he trying to hide? I
decided that I would go and check out the mystery.
So, the next evening I took Webster out for a walk
to the park. As we got closer to the park it got
darker and darker, when suddenly I heard a voice.
“I wouldn’t hang around here if I were you. This place
is haunted after dark.”
It was the park keeper and I couldn’t see very well
but it looked like he had some more of those weird
lumps in his hand.
“What you got there?” I asked him.
“None of your business,” he replied with a smile. “Now
off you go home, little kid!”
I went straight home and got all my pets together.
“I think the park keeper must be burying treasure,” I
said, “like diamonds and emeralds and gold and rubies
and pearls and opals and silver. Maybe he robbed a
museum or a bank.”
“Come on Billy,” I said, “you have to come up with a
plan.”
“I’m thinking,” replied Billy, flapping his wings. “Aha!”
he screeched, “I’ve got it, but this plan must be done
properly.”
“What it is?” I asked, steaming with excitement.
“George scouts out and reports back. We get my cage
and we hook it up to a tree in the park. Then, when
the park keeper comes, we cut the rope. Webster will
pin the park keeper down and we will make him tell us
what’s going on.”
“Cool plan, Billy,” I said. “I’ll go and get the cage and
some rope. 00Pets, let’s go!”
In the park, the swings were swinging back and
forwards in the wind and we heard a creepy noise
coming from behind some trees. George went to see
what was going on. When he got back he told us that
he had discovered something.
“I found a fresh hole that has been covered over and
marked with a cross, and there are other holes
marked with crosses all over the park!”
Then we saw him: a man, standing by a group of trees,
holding a sack in one hand. On the floor he had a
shovel and a torch. It was the park keeper.
So we started setting up the trap with the rope and
Billy’s cage. We saw the park keeper walking towards
us and Webster said, “The trap’s ready, let’s go!”
Webster crept up stealthily behind the park keeper.
Just then, Billy dropped his cage on the park keeper’s
head and Webster pounced and pinned him to the
ground.
“Ouch!” shouted the park keeper. “Get off me, you
meddling parrot!”
I grabbed the torch and shone it in his face.
Webster started to dig up the treasure. It looked
like gold and silver coins and precious stones shining
in the moon light. Then something strange happened.
Suddenly Webster started to sniff the treasure,
then he started to lick it, then he began to eat it.
“Wait, this isn’t right,” I said. “Webster, what are
you doing?” But Webster’s couldn’t talk because he
had his mouth full.
“Stop! Don’t eat them, that’s not for you!” cried the
park keeper. “That’s for the kids in the treasure hunt
tomorrow.”
“Treasure hunt!” I said. “And we thought you were
burying stolen treasure.”
“I thought if anyone knew what I was doing they
would come and take the chocolate and leave nothing
for the kids tomorrow,” explained the park keeper.
“And now I’ll never have time to finish burying all the
chocolate coins and money.”
“Can we help you?” I said.
“Thank you,” said the park keeper. “It looks like I
misjudged you kids.”
So we all helped the park keeper finish off the job
and I went home to bed.
On the way home I felt in my pocket and found a
chocolate coin. I took it out and tried to open it but I
couldn’t get the wrapper off. Then I tried to bite it
but it was hard and cold.
It wasn’t chocolate, it was solid gold…
By boys from Glan Usk Primary
The Time Wall by Lliswerry Primary
One sunny day I decided to go to the park with my
friends.
In the park there was a vicious dog that wouldn’t
leave us alone. I tried to give the dog a treat but it
started barking at us. We decided to ignore it, but it
started to come towards us. We felt scared. We took
a few steps backwards. Suddenly the dog pounced.
We ran in different directions. I ran down a street
and my friends ran somewhere else. I ran into a dead
end. All that I saw was a wall. I looked at the dog and
saw blood dripping from its teeth with loads of saliva
all round its mouth. I was so scared I could hear my
heart pumping. I spun round, took a step back and
vaulted over the wall. As I pulled myself over I could
feel the dog snapping at my leg.
I landed in some soft grass and found myself in a
beautiful garden. I felt relieved that I had got away
from the dog but I was a bit shameful because I was
in someone’s garden. Then suddenly I heard a voice,
someone talking in a posh voice with a strange accent.
I turned round and saw lots of people laughing. It was
a family, and they seemed to be having a tea party.
They were all wearing suits and long dresses and they
were sipping their tea with their little fingers up in
the air.
A little boy noticed me and said, “Hello, would you
like a spot of tea?”
I nodded.
“Where did you come from?” asked the boy.
“I live just round the corner,” I said, “I got chased
by a dog and I jumped over the wall.”
“But there are no houses around here,” replied the
boy, “just grass and fields. And that wall is too big to
jump over.”
I turned round and to my amazement I saw a high
wall. Something weird was going on.
“What are you wearing?” asked the boy.
“It’s only a tracksuit,” I said.
“What’s a tracksuit?” said the boy, “I’ve never seen
anything like it. By the way, my name is Oliver.”
“I’m Dan,” I said.
It was sunny in the garden and I was really hot
because of running away from the dog, so I took off
my tracksuit top and showed it to Oliver. Everything
was so strange.
I suddenly felt confused and dizzy. I finished my tea
and said that I should go home.
“I will show you to the front door,” said Oliver. “It
will be my pleasure. Do come for tea another day.”
As I walked through the house I noticed it was old
fashioned. It was like going back in time. I saw a
grand piano, black and white photos on the wall, a
typewriter on an old fashioned desk and candlesticks
glowing on the mantelpiece above the fire. On the
table were teacups and a teapot. The boy guided me
to the door and I noticed a coat rack with fur coats
and fancy hats. As he opened the door it creaked.
Oliver said farewell.
I ran home as fast as I could and told my Mum all
about my day. After that she said, “Where’s your
tracksuit?” I realised I had left it in the house!
I went back the next day to get my tracksuit. As
soon as I got to that weird place I was shocked
because it was all boarded up, except one window. I
wondered if it was the right house, but then I saw
the old fashioned clothing in the window and when I
looked in I saw all the old stuff I had seen
yesterday, the grand piano and the candlesticks, but
now they seemed spooky and covered in cobwebs.
Just then, an old man walked past. “No one has lived
there for over a hundred years,” he said.
“But I was there yesterday, having a cup of tea. And
I met a boy,” I replied.
“I used to live there,” said the old man. “Are you the
boy that left the tracksuit behind?”
I stood there shocked with surprise. I couldn’t
believe it. The old man smiled and walked up the
broken path and through the door as if it wasn’t
there. Something made me look up and I saw a
ghostly figure in the top window. It was the boy from
yesterday, but he looked strange and pale. I waved to
him and he waved back. Then he disappeared. I felt
scared, but then I saw my tracksuit top at my feet,
all folded up neatly. It was a bit dusty.
I put it on, dusted myself off and pegged it home as
fast as I could.
By boys from Lliswerry Primary
The Birthday Bumps by Llanmartin Primary
The worst thing EVER happened to me on my
birthday.
For starters, my kitten woke me up and I fell out of
bed. I looked up at my kitten and it gave me a big lick
on my face. I got back into bed but as soon as I went
back to sleep my evil little sister ran in and give me a
big sloppy kiss. It was disgusting! Then she
screeched in my ear with her whiny little voice,
“HAPPY BIRTHDAY GEORGIEEEEEE!”
I knew then that it was going to be the worst
birthday ever.
Next up, it was time for my presents, brilliant! The
first present was from my devious little sister. When
I saw her smiling I knew it was going to be bad and
you know what, she came up trumps. Hideous, fluffy
pink socks, and to top it all off my Mum made me
wear them. She said, “Your sister chose them
especially for you.”
Next was a present from my rich aunt (cha-ching!).
And I wasn’t disappointed. She gave me an amazing
pair of trainers that had just come out last week. I
put them on straight away, but they were too small!
To make things worse, they fitted my sister
perfectly, so she got them. I couldn’t believe it. It
was my birthday and they were meant to be for me.
Well, she was happy about that, but I was furious.
Then my Mum and Dad came in with a big box. This is
what I had been waiting for all year, my scooter. It
was even wrapped up with scooter wrapping paper. I
was so excited I thought I was going to burst. I
ripped off the paper and opened it and there was the
scooter box. I opened the box, but instead of a
scooter there was another box and it was really
small. I opened it and inside was a tiny little badge
which said HAPPY BIRTHDAY on it.
“Surprise!” said Mum and Dad. “Happy Birthday,
George.”
“Thanks,” I managed to say, but I it was hard to hide
the expression on my face. I was gutted.
After opening all my presents, there was some good
news. We were all going to a restaurant to have
dinner. As we were leaving the house our next door
neighbour asked us if we had seen their tarantula.
They said that their daughter had been holding it and
when she wasn’t looking it has escaped. I thought
they were joking around because it was my birthday,
but they looked very serious. We were late, so we
just got into the car and left to go to the restaurant.
At last my luck was turning. It was a really posh
restaurant. Everything was going brilliantly and I had
ordered my favourite, spaghetti bolognaise. But then
I felt something hairy and wriggly crawl out of my
pocket.
“What the..?” I said.
Then I saw it. It was big and hairy and scary. It was
next door’s tarantula and it was crawling up the
waitress’s leg. She must have seen it too because she
started to scream. She threw the tray of food into
the air and CRASH! I was showered in spaghetti
bolognaise, all over me.
The meal had been a disaster. “I’m so sorry,” said
Mum. “Let’s go home, the day’s not over yet and there
might be something special waiting for you in your
room.”
But on the way home, guess what, all of a sudden
SNAP, CRUNCH, BANG, the car broke down and I
thought, can my day get any worse!
It took ages to get home from the restaurant. My
sister was whining all the way and Mum and Dad were
arguing, plus the tow truck broke down so we had to
wait for a bus. At last we arrived, and just then I
remembered what my Mum had said to me… “There’s
something special in your room.” I walked up the
stairs and I could see something shining through the
gap of my bedroom door. I rushed into my room and
there it was - my scooter. I felt brilliant.
“Thanks Mum, thanks Dad, I love you. Can I go out,
can I go out, please, please?”
“Yes, you can dear.”
“Hooray!”
I had been waiting for this all year. I picked up my
scooter, kicked the door open and in the blink of an
eye I was out. I ran to the top of the steep hill by my
house and pushed off. I was going so fast I thought I
was going to break the sound barrier. Suddenly I saw
a black dot running across the road. It was my kitten.
I had left the door open by accident. I tried to stop,
I hit a stone, I flipped over the handlebars…
CRASH!
I think you will all agree, this was the worst birthday
ever.
By boys from Llanmartin Primary
My Nan by Marshfield Primary
It was a cold, wet day when my Nan arrived. My Mum
and Dad were rushing around the house, stressing out
getting ready for their holiday, and my Nan was
coming to look after me. I had never met my Nan
before - well, not since I was a baby. She’s from
abroad.
I was on my bed when I heard a knock at the door. I
got up and answered it. I could see a small figure
with white bushy hair carrying a mysterious suitcase.
It was my Nan.
“Hello Craig,” said my Nan, “haven’t you grown!” And
she gave me a big sloppy kiss.
I was feeling a bit nervous, but Mum and Dad were in
a big rush.
“Come on, Craig,” said Mum. “Don’t be sad, you’ll have
a good time with your Nan.” “Don’t worry about us,”
said Nan cheerfully. “We’ll be fine! We’ll have a great
time, won’t we, Craig?”
I gave my parents a hug and a kiss and waved
goodbye.
“Will you come upstairs and help me unpack my
suitcase?” Nan asked. So I carried her mysterious
case up to her room.
As I helped unpack her suitcase I found a jaw-
dropping crystal skull, an African mask, a dinosaur
tooth and some crazy clothes.
“Nan, where did you get all this amazing stuff?” I
said.
“Well, I got the African mask when I was exploring
down the river Nile, and I got the crystal skull from
a pyramid in Egypt. I found the dinosaur tooth in the
East Indian desert.”
Then, after we had unpacked, she said, “I think I will
take a little nap now, Craig. I’m tired out from my
journey.”
“OK Nan,” I said. “I’ll see you in the morning, good
night.”
When my Nan came down the next morning I couldn’t
believe my eyes. She had dyed her hair red with blue
highlights and she had luminous pink eyebrows. She
was wearing a leather jacket with a World War II
medal.
“Wow!” I said. I was gob smacked. I couldn’t believe
it, my Nan was so cool.
“Come on,” she said, “you’re going to be late for
school.”
I went to school with my Nan in the car. As always, I
got bullied, and I came out of school with a black eye.
I walked out of the school gates and I couldn’t
believe it. My Nan was waiting for me, but she was
sitting on a motorbike with a sidecar. Everyone was
amazed.
“Where’s the car, Nan?” I asked.
“I swapped it for this bike. Do you like it?”
“Mum and Dad are going to be furious,” I said.
“Well, let’s keep it a secret, maybe,” she said. “Shall
we go home?”
When I woke up the next morning my Nan was
nowhere to be seen. I looked round the house, but
she wasn’t there. So I went out into the garden and I
saw her planting some weird vegetables. I picked up
one of the packets of seeds.
“What on earth is a nargly?!” I asked. My Nan turned
around.
“Oh, hello there, Craig,” she said, “I was just planting
some vegetables for tea tonight.” “I never knew you
were good at gardening, Nan,” I said. For tea that
night we had the narglies and they were absolutely
delicious!
The next day was a sunny afternoon. We were
walking in the park when I saw the bullies from
school playing football. The ball flew over to Nan.
She did a few kick ups and booted it into the top left
corner of the goal. One of the boys said, “I wanna
hang out with him! Hey Craig, see you at school.”
“Thanks, Nan,” I said, and Nan just smiled.
That night I was doing my homework and I needed
help. Nan was doing yoga. I asked her if she could
help me and she said yes. When we had finished, I
asked if she could teach me yoga, and she did.
With my Nan staying, things got a lot better at
school. Everyone wanted to be my friend and play
with me and come over to mine for tea. On the way to
school the next day I asked my Nan when she was
going, because I knew that I was really going to miss
her. “I’ll miss you too,” said Nan, “but don’t worry
about me, I’ll be back. Your Mum and Dad are coming
home tomorrow so we’ll have to go pick up the car and
finish the narglies. I’ve put some narglies in your
sandwiches.”
“Thanks, Nan,” I said, “that’s lovely.”
The next morning I woke up, made myself some toast
and called to my Nan. She came downstairs with her
old white bushy hair. She was holding her mysterious
suitcase, all packed and ready to go.
“What’s happened to you, Nan? I said. “You’re back to
normal!” She just winked.
Just then, the door opened and my parents stumbled
in. I rushed through the house and gave them a big
hug and gasped, “Mum, Dad, I’m so glad to see you.”
“You missed us?” said Dad.
“A bit,” I replied.
“Have a good time with your Nan?” said Mum.
“It was awes… I mean it was kinda OK,” I said ,with a
smile on my face.
After lunch, Nan was standing in the hallway waiting
to go. The bus came to pick her up, she gave me a big
sloppy kiss and suddenly she was gone!
A few weeks later, when I got back from school I
found a decorated parcel on the mat. It was from my
Nan. Inside the parcel was a postcard, a packet of
nargly seeds and a yoga DVD. The postcard read:
Dear Craig,
How is school? I’m off to the Andes, would you like to
come? Hope you enjoy the narglies,
Love Nan xxx
By boys from Marshfield Primary
The Wool of Life by St Gabriels RC Primary
One cold day, me and my mates, Mike and Jim, were
walking home from school. We had just walked past
MacKay’s Mechanics when we saw an old man in a dark
corner, rocking on his chair. He had short, grey,
messy hair and his eyes were as red as lava. He had
scars, scrapes and bruises, and no teeth. There was
something in his lap, but we didn’t know what it was.
He turned his head and looked at us with his big
beady eyes. A shiver went down my spine. We turned
and sprinted away.
The next day it was very blustery. We went back
after school to the old man in the alley, he glared at
us and his eyes were as bright as the sun in the
desert. He turned his head back down to the thing in
his lap. I wanted to get closer to see what he was
doing. I sneaked, as quiet as a mouse, scurrying along
the street. Then I looked in his lap, but I only saw a
strand of wool. The old man was knitting something!
The next day at school, we discussed the scary old
man.
“Maybe he’s a ghost,” said Mike.
“Maybe he’s cursed,” said Jim.
“Maybe he’s homeless,” I said. “He could be knitting a
blanket, to keep him warm.” “Or a teddy bear,” Mike
added.
“Maybe he’s magic and he’s knitting the whole world!”
said Jim.
“What if he could be knitting money!” I cried.
“Don’t be stupid!” shouted Mike, “it’s obviously
lottery cards, because where else could they come
from?”
“That’s the most stupid idea ever,” I said. “It’s
definitely furniture!”
“Furniture?” said Jim. “That’s impossible!”
“Well, the only way to find out,” I said, “is to GO
BACK!”
So after school we went back to see what he was up
to.
It was gloomy in the alley and we hid in the shadows.
I crept up behind the old man and looked over his
shoulder. I could just see that he was knitting a
pattern. The pattern was colourful, it was black and
yellow and green and blue with stripes and dots, but I
couldn’t see what it was going to be. I suddenly felt
sorry for him. He looked very old and he didn’t have
any food. I decided to go the shop to get him
something to eat. We got him a chocolate bar and a
drink but it was late, so we ran home. We decided to
go back tomorrow and give him the food.
The next day we set off to the old man in the
alleyway. When we got there the alley seemed darker
than usual. We peered into the gloom but we couldn’t
see the old man. We looked at his empty rocking
chair. All that was left was a strand of wool. The old
man had disappeared.
We felt worried. We wondered what had happened to
him and if we would ever see him again. We thought
he might have died, but to think of it happier, we
pretended he had just gone on holiday for a long
time.
Just then, we saw a little girl coming down the road
with her mum and dad. She was wearing a woolly hat
and a jumper. I took a good look, and then I saw the
pattern. It was black and yellow and green and blue,
with stripes and dots. It was the same pattern that
the old man had been knitting. After all that had
happened, at last we knew. He wasn’t a scary man, he
was a generous man. I felt happy.
In life, it’s like everyone is knitting their own story.
When the wool runs out, that’s the end of the story,
but whatever you have knitted stays behind.
So we left the bar of chocolate and the drink on the
rocking chair, in case the old man came back, and we
went home for our tea.
By boys from St Gabriel’s RC Primary
My Friend Dave the Trolley by St Woolos Primary
Hello, my name is John Smith and I am 8 years old.
My best friend Dave disappeared two days ago and no
one has seen him since. The last time I saw him it was
a cold, dark, stormy night. I was walking home with
Dave from football practice and we were chatting
about the match scores and arguing. I said it was
time to split up and go home, but I couldn’t see Dave
at all. I shouted out his name, but the only thing in
the street was a supermarket trolley. As I walked
home, the trolley seemed to follow me.
The next day I saw that same trolley again, opposite
my school. I didn’t think anything of it. Probably it
got stolen from the local shopping centre. But the
next day I noticed it on the road near my house, the
same trolley again! It seemed to be coming closer and
closer, and I felt it was looking at me.
On the third day, the trolley was outside my front
gate and I had to jump over the fence to get out. I
turned and ran. Then the trolley ran after me! That
night, I heard a dustbin crash and when I looked out
of my window I saw the trolley all alone against the
night sky. I was thinking, it really wants to stay with
me or something.
The next morning I went to play some football. I put
on my football shirt, but then I thought, “Oh no, not
the trolley again!” It was in the middle of the street
and it was wearing the same football kit and it even
had a football in it. I felt sorry for it. When I saw
that the trolley had the same football kit as me, I
thought it wanted to be my friend. It followed me to
the park. Then it started to play football. It was
weird, because the trolley had the same skills as
Dave. Then the trolley went in goal and it was really
good, just like Dave! That’s when I started to
wonder. So I asked the trolley its name.
There were some cans and scraps on the ground and
the trolley pushed them around with its wheels. I was
shocked! I looked closer and they spelled out D A V
E.
“Are you really Dave?” I asked, and the trolley
jumped up and down like it was saying, “Yes!”
I couldn’t believe it, my best friend was a trolley. I
felt confused and started panicking and I wondered
what I was going to do. Then suddenly I had an idea.
I knew I had a mission to do. I had to get Dave back.
I had to make a special potion.
I took Dave to his house when his mum wasn’t there,
because I knew she would get upset if she found out
that Dave was a trolley. I sneaked round the back
and opened the rusty wooden doors to the garden.
The key was under the mat, so first we went to the
kitchen and found some of Dave’s favourite foods,
like jelly babies, apples, chocolate and cherryade.
Next we went to his room and got his football kit and
a wrestling figure, and then we went to my house to
make the potion.
When I got home I asked Mum and Dad to go over to
Auntie’s house because I needed a bit of time alone
to do my homework in peace and quiet. They said
“OK”, and as soon as they were outside I got Dave
and started getting all the ingredients - the
chocolate, apples, jelly babies, cherryade, football kit
and his wrestling figure. I put on the gas and chucked
the weird ingredients into a big pan and left them to
cook and melt. I took the lid off to look at it. It was
multicoloured and really thick with popping bubbles
and it smelt disgusting. I took it off the gas and let
it cool down.
Now I had to decide how to give the potion to Dave.
It would be difficult because he didn’t have a mouth.
Finally I decided to take him into the garden and put
the potion on with a sponge, and rub it on his wheels
and handlebars.
I had to wait about 15 seconds. Then, suddenly, there
was a flash of light. I was blinded for a moment, and
then there was a noise which sounded like a firework
going off close to me: BOOM! BOOM! The smoke soon
disappeared and there was Dave, standing by my side.
He looked dirty, confused and dizzy. I shook him
gently.
“Dave, are you OK?”
“I’m so tired,” said Dave. “But when I’ve got my
breath back, do you want to go and play football at
the park?”
“Yeah,” I answered, “I’ll just get my football kit. But
don’t you think we should go and tell your mum first?”
“Oh yeah,” said Dave. “Come on, let’s go and surprise
her.”
By boys from St Woolos Primary
Help! My Sister is a Monster by Ysgol Gymraeg
I woke up slowly from a strange dream. It was a
bright and frosty day and I was feeling drowsy, so I
went to the bathroom and threw some ice-cold water
onto my face. I opened my eyes and saw my
toothbrush. It had slime and teeth marks on it.
I ran downstairs into the living room and stepped on a
big black fur ball. I nearly fell over! Then I sat down
on the sofa and something sharp dug into my back.
“Aaaaah!” I cried. “I wonder what that was?”
When I looked, I saw that it was a giant nail clipping.
I walked into the kitchen to get some breakfast. I
noticed that there were some big chunks taken out
of the cereal packets, food scattered all over the
floor and footprints going to the fridge.
I followed the footprints out into the garden.
Outside, I found monster droppings on the grass and
giant footprints in the vegetable patch.
I came inside from the garden and I saw Mum and
Dad cleaning up all the mess. One of the fur balls was
too big for the Hoover and had clogged it up and
made it blow a fuse. As I came in, I tripped and fell
over with a crash. Mum and Dad turned round to see
what all the racket was.
“What on earth are you doing?” said Mum.
“Are you all right?” asked Dad.
“I just tripped,” I said in a nervous voice, with
chattering teeth. “Why are you cleaning up? You don’t
normally clean up this early.”
“N-nothing to worry about, dear,” said Mum. “Why
don’t you go back up to your room and let us clear up.”
But I didn’t go up to my room. I went straight to my
sister’s room to investigate.
In my sister’s room there was slime dripping slowly
from the door handle and when I looked in her bed
there was thick fur all over her pillow and quilt, and I
saw scratch marks on the wall. I felt weird and
strange and fearful. This was too suspicious. It was
then that I decided that my sister must be a
monster!
That night, when everyone was asleep, I set up a
camera with a trip wire and an alarm. I put out some
coco pops to lure her out of her room and some
talcum powder to measure her footprints. I put the
alarm in my bedroom and I went to sleep.
I had a dream of catching the monster and the world
was like a big hair ball. Suddenly I woke up. It was
the morning. The alarm hadn’t gone off! What had
gone wrong? I walked out of my room and realised
that the coco pops had been eaten and there was a
paw print in the talcum powder. I went to look at the
camera and saw the blurred outline of a furry
bottom. I had enough evidence now to catch the
monster red-handed.
That evening I decided to stay up all night. It was
difficult. I had to slap myself to keep myself awake.
I had nearly fallen asleep but then I heard a
floorboard creak. I was really scared, I didn’t move
in case it heard me. I heard a bang in my sister’s
room, then I saw the door of my sister’s room open
slowly and a big hairy foot poked out. I was so scared
I ran back to my room and grabbed my binoculars to
see if it was real.
The monster came out of her room and walked
straight past my door. I tiptoed downstairs and
followed the monster into the kitchen. The fridge
was open and I saw the monster scoffing all the food.
I think she knew that I was spying on her because
suddenly she turned her ugly face around. She was
brown and very hairy, like a beast, with horns coming
out of her head, and her eyes were red like fire. Her
eyes filled with fear.
“Aaaaaah!!” I screamed. “Mum, Dad, my sister is a
monster!”
And I ran up the stairs at the speed of light,
straight into my Mum and Dad’s bedroom.
“It’s time for you to know the truth,” said Dad. “Look
in the mirror.”
It was then that I discovered that I was a monster
too! I was brown and very hairy and I had horns
coming out of my head. I turned back around to look
at my Mum and Dad, I saw fur all over the covers and
slime everywhere. They pulled down the covers, and I
couldn’t believe what I saw. My parents were also
brown and hairy with horns coming out of their
heads. I didn’t know what to think.
“Don’t worry,” said Dad, “everyone’s different. You
can’t judge a book by its cover. Come on, let’s party
and have some fun.”
So we played Pass the Fur Ball and Musical Monsters
and danced the Monster Macarena. There were
chocolate toenails and fizzy snot and we emptied the
fridge and the cupboards and scattered the food all
over the table and floor. It was a monstertastic
party and we didn’t even need to worry about clearing
up afterwards.
Maybe being a monster is not so bad after all.
By boys from Ysgol Gymraeg Casnewydd