Ancillary Designs…

Lauren Hoskins

The Front Cover…

Feedback…

When I showed this image to a selection of people this is the feedback I received:

1. I like this image but I don’t think the title should be one one line, put the two words separately.

2. I really like it! Looks like its going to be really bold and in your face, like the artist!

3. Will the barbed wire make the image look to messy?

4. You should make the image darker so that everything really stands out and doesn’t look to girly.

5. If you get the lighting and shading right on the image I think it will look really good. It needs to really stand out though and not just be a picture of a girl.

The inside centre cover…

Feedback…

When I showed this image to a selection of people this is the feedback I received:

1. I don’t think you should use sepia, you should continue the colour scheme from the front cover.

2. Maybe use the same colour scheme just make the images faded?

3. I like the use of the lyrics as they kind of match the image, and the image with the scrabble ring matches the text for the front cover, which lokos really good.

4. How about having certain features of her face stand out and the rest faded?

5. I like it the images are really bold.

The inside left cover…

Feedback…

When I showed this image to a selection of people this is the feedback I received:

1. I like the fact that this image stands for L for Lily as well as be the universal sign for ‘loser’ which matches the artists attitude, really clever.

2. I’m not sure everyone will get it.

3. I like the fact you will take out the CD and the image behind it is a message that relates to a song on the album.

4. I just think you need to make sure that the colour scheme stays the same especially with this image as it’s the only side that doesn’t have a picture of an actually person on.

5. I like the use of lyrics being used, its clever.

The back cover…

Feedback…

When I showed this image to a selection of people this is the feedback I received:

1. I like the colour scheme used.

2. I like the slanted image because it makes the overall design more edgy and stands out.

3. I think you need to make sure your layout is easy to read.

4. I like the image, it really stands out.

5. I like the continued cold colour scheme. It makes the album look edgier.

The left fold…

Feedback…

When I showed this image to a selection of people this is the feedback I received:

• I like the image as it reflects the storyline of the video.

• I like the bold image and its quite humorous.

• I like the image, not sure it goes with the rest of the colour scheme though, although this in itself may make it stand out.

• I like the fact the red sign goes with the red in the title.

• I like the fact the image is basic but reflects the storyline of the video.

The right fold…

Feedback…

When I showed this image to a selection of people this is the feedback I received:

1. I like the simplicity of the image and the fact it gives a street feel.

2. Brick walls are a setting heavily features in your video so I like the fact this image reflects this.

3. The graffiti makes the image stand out and also jokes with the viewer.

4. The image reflects the attitude and character of the singer as well as the street image she has given herself.

The poster…

Feedback…

When I showed this image to a selection of people this is the feedback I received:

1. The image looks like its going to be really bold if you put some effects on it.

2. The image really needs to stand out otherwise it wont grab peoples attention.

3. I think the artists name needs to be bigger.

4. Maybe put some dates of the album release or some more information on the poster to make it look more like an advertisement and less like just a photo.

5. I think it will look really good when finished and goes nicely with the digipack.