Blog feedback

Consider this to improve

Don’t have long list of pics/videos

These are much better

Excelllleeennntttt!

More visuals needed!

• This planning is basic!• Doesn’t show media skills!

Good music research

• Finding music takes long!• Don’t forget about this!!!!!!!!!!!!• Bad music can ruin an OTS

Independent work and good presentation

Bad time management!

Poor presentation of textDiff text

Good presentation/research evidence

Great presentation of text

Bullet points, bold, underline, consistent font etc…. = good!

Poor presentation

You can change this in layout/template/settings

Everyone needs to brand their blog !!!!!!!

Incorrect format!

Good range for location planning

Ummmmmm really?? LEVEL 1!!!!!!

Level 1 planning

Name the assignment!!!!!!!

Good photos of production but need caption and better presentation/organisation

Other good stuffShows engagement with research(not just a simple video or block of text)

Great use of screen grabs and new media technology

More great tech evidence

Title and work don’t match!

Incorrect format?(tip – look at the model)

It should be this!

Blogs with good aspects…..

JAKEIDREESCHARLIESAM

CIARANHARRYJACKJAKE

ALISTAIRCONORWILL

Well done to a good start

Overall• Most people have not finished all research and planning tasks

• More technology/websites to present work (most photos)

• Most people are in level 1 due to incompletion

• A lot of work is VERY minimal and rushed, however some good have made good use of time and great effort.

• Use this week to get caught up! Free periods, afterschool etc !!!!!!!!!!

• Include test shots/footage to show PROGRESS!!!!!!