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ENSC 894: Writing for Publication
Presentation by Modupe Omueti
Communications Network LaboratorySummer 2005
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Outline
� Introduction� Highlights� Conclusion� References
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Introduction
ENSC 894: Writing for Publication� Writing process identification� Analysis of journal articles� Persuasion in writing
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Highlights
� Writing process� Organizational strategies� Publication process� Presentation strategies
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Writing process
� Rule-based� Adhere to ‘never’ rules: “That is the sort of
effrontery up with which I shall not put.”Winston Churchill
� Strategy-based� Break the ‘rules’: That is the sort of effrontery
with which I shall not put up with.
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Writing process
� Four key factors:� practices, environs, attitudes, and audiences
� Three main components:� inventing, drafting, revising
� Two broad types:� iterative and linear
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Writing process
Iterative
INVENTING
REVISING DRAFTING
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Writing process
Linear
INVENTING REVISINGDRAFTING
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Writing process
40%35%25%Experienced writer
05%45%50%Inexperienced writer
RevisingDraftingInventing
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Organizational strategies
� Issues:� time management� procrastination� outlining� organizational patterns
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� The why of procrastination:� uncertainty, perfectionism, dislike
� The how of procrastination:� questions, excellence, positive goals
Organizational strategies
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� Outlines� topical� taxonomical� chart-like (mind map)
Organizational Strategies
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Topical
� 1. Fiber Optics in Telecommunications� 1.1. Architectures� 1.1.1. Active Pedestal� 1.1.2. Double Star� 1.1.3. Star Bus� 1.2. Materials� 1.2.1. Fiber Types� 1.2.2. Strand� 1.2.2.1. Core� 1.2.2.2. Cladding� 1.3. Applications� 1.3.1. Residential� 1.3.2. Commercial� 1.4. Advantages and Disadvantages� 1.4.1. Cost� 1.4.2. Flexibility� 1.5. Installations� 1.6. Computer Simulations
� 1. Fiber Optics in Telecommunications� 1.1. Architectures� 1.1.1. Active Pedestal� 1.1.2. Double Star� 1.1.3. Star Bus� 1.2. Materials� 1.2.1. Fiber Types� 1.2.2. Strand� 1.2.2.1. Core� 1.2.2.2. Cladding� 1.3. Applications� 1.3.1. Residential� 1.3.2. Commercial� 1.4. Advantages and Disadvantages� 1.4.1. Cost� 1.4.2. Flexibility� 1.5. Installations� 1.6. Computer Simulations
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Taxonomical
Fiber Optics in TelecommunicationsArchitectures Strand
Applications Advantages
Disadvantages
Star Bus Double Star
Active Ped.
Core Cladding
Residential Commercial 1.2.3.4.5.
1.2.3.
Fiber Optics in TelecommunicationsArchitectures Strand
Applications Advantages
Disadvantages
Star Bus Double Star
Active Ped.
Core Cladding
Residential Commercial 1.2.3.4.5.
1.2.3.
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Chart-like
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Organizational strategies
� Organizational patterns:� chronological: process� spatial: object description� comparison: similarities and differences between
an old and a new design� problem solving: problem explanation, method,
solution, and recommendation
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Abstracts
� Informative: abstract� Descriptive: extended abstract� Persuasive: executive summary
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Paragraph organization
� Levels of generality:� Level 1
� Level 2� Level3
� Level 4� Transition
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Persuasion
� Analyzing audience: � age, need, values, expertise, and secondary
audience� Analyzing purpose:
� informative, instructional, regulatory, heuristic, and imaginative
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Persuasion
� Attending to tone and connotation� Utilizing persuasive appeals:
� logos (appeal to logic or reasoning)� pathos (appeal to emotions)� ethos (appeal to values, credibility)
� Employing inclusive language
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Informing
� Order in content � Connectivity of sentences� Repetition of content� Simplicity in presentation� Graphics for explanation
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Form
� Consistency in headings, paragraphs, spacing, fonts� White space between sections� Templates for documents� Conventions� Print quality
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Punctuation
� Sentence = subject / verb / object� Introduction + sentence:
After sighing loudly, the dog slept off.
� Sentence + end of line distinctions:The dog knew that he could use his motorcycle to catch the fox,who was limited by the speed and endurance of his muscles.
The dog obviously had another advantage: better technology.
The fox had clearly underestimated the extent of the dog's technical advantages -- a blunder which might well prove fatal.
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Punctuation
� Sentence + insert : � subject / verb / insert / object � subject / insert / verb / object
The dog's motorcycle, which had been modified last week, idled under a nearby tree.
The ever-observant fox, recognizing his peril, raced toward the idling bike.
The fox knew the motorcycle (i.e., a Yamaha 1200) possessed a top speed of 200 mph.
The fox was afraid -- although he would never admit it -- that the dog would use the bike to catch him.
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Publication process
� Informal publication: � self-publication and online journals
� Semi-formal publication: � poster presentations and conference presentations
� Formal publication: � journal publication and textbooks
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Poster presentation process
� Find a conference� Submit application and extended abstract:
In some cases, you might be given an opportunity to choose between a formal presentation and a poster presentation, but this is usually assigned.
� Wait for approval� Write paper following specific guidelines (revise on
your own)� Design, assemble, and transport poster� Attend poster session
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Conference presentation process
� Find conference� Submit application and extended abstract� Wait for approval� Write paper following specific guidelines (revise on
your own)� Submit paper� Prepare presentation� Practice� Deliver presentation
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Journal publication process
� Submit paper to journal� Associate editor sends to reviewers� Reviewer comments, and accepts, accepts with
revisions, or rejects� Back to author for revisions� Back to society� Copy editor proofs article� Reviewed by author (sometimes)� Transfer copyright to journal� Published
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Revision of publication
� Order problems� empty sentence openers:
There are many aspects of the problem thathave not yet been considered.Many aspects of the problem have not yet been considered.
It is clear that the kiln contributes to the problemClearly, the kiln contributes to the problem.
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Revision of publication
� embedded phrases:
Engineers, because they inadvertently write in ways that, all too often, use technical jargon, lengthy noun strings, and the passive voice, have difficulty communicating with non-specialists.
Because engineers inadvertently write in ways that often use technical jargon, lengthy noun strings, and the passive voice, they have difficulty communicating with non-specialists.
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� weak endings :
The information provided in the report suggesting the cause of the crash was due to mechanical failure is not persuasive for the most part.
For the most part, the information provided in the report suggesting the cause of the crash was due to mechanical failure is not persuasive.
Revision of publication
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� passive voice:An explanation of atmospheric stability and a detailed evaluation of its application to this air quality evaluation is contained in Appendix A.
Appendix A contains an explanation of atmospheric stability and a detailed evaluation of its application to this air quality evaluation.
ORAppendix A explains atmospheric stability and evaluates its application to this air quality evaluation.
Revision of Publication
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Revision of Publication
� connection problems� unnecessary repetition:
The length of the transistor that can function as a long channel device is strongly related to its junction depth. The junction depth, of the boron source/drain implant, can be reduced by lowering the implant energy. However, lowering the implant energyincreases the channeling probability for boron ions. The channeling probability for boron ions . . .
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Revision of Publication
� unnecessary repetition:
The length of the transistor that can function as a long channel device is strongly related to its junction depth. Lowering the implant energy (and thereby increasing the channeling probability for boron ions) reduces the junction depth of the boron source/drain implant. The channeling probability for boron ions . . .
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Revision of publication
� parallel structure:
In order to improve our facilities, we must do the following:
• repair our existing PCs
• purchase 11 more hard drives
• security is insufficient
• expand our operating hours
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Revision of publication
� parallel structure
In order to improve our facilities, we must do the following:
• repair our existing PCs
• purchase 11 more hard drives
• increase system security
• expand our operating hours
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Revision of publication
� Clarity problems:� Short sentences� General language:
The experiment was more or less as expected.The accuracy of the measurement was quite good.
� Jargons and acronyms’ definition
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Revision of publication
� noun string:
Because the predicted ambient total suspended particulate concentrations met Department of Environment, Lands and Parks' Level B ambient air quality objectives, a further evaluation was not required.
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Revision of publication
� noun string:
Because the predicted total concentrations of ambient suspended particulates met the level B ambient air quality objectives mandated by the Department of Environment, Lands and Parks, a further evaluation was not required.
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Revision of publication
� prepositional phrases:
More detailed analysis, using Cepstrum technique, is applied based on computation of the power spectrum of the logarithm of the power spectrum of the vibration data obtained from the accelerometer onthe truck frame in different positions.
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Revision of publication
� prepositional phrases:A more detailed analysis uses Cepstrum technique to compute the power spectrum as a logarithm of the various vibration spectra measured by the accelerometer at different positions on the truck's frame.
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Presentation strategies
� Audience and purpose� Organization� Layout and format� Graphics and multimedia� Location and technology� Movement and voice
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Conclusion
"You persuade a man only insofar as you can talk his language by speech, gesture, tonality, order, image,
attitude, idea, identifying your ways with his."Kenneth Burke
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References
� S. Whitmore and S. Stevenson, Strategies for Engineering Communication. Canada: John Wiley & Sons Inc.
� http://www.ensc.sfu.ca/~whitmore/courses/ensc894/lecture.htm