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Descriptive Writing
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NOT: A girl sat down.
A shy, young girl sat down in the corner on a dirty, brown chair.
An exhausted teenage girl sat down heavily onto the plush recliner and closed her eyes.
Add details
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The kindergartener swallowed his cookie. Snow fell from tree branches.
Add details to these sentences.
The famished kindergartener hurriedly swallowed his chocolate chip cookie.
Fluffy white snow fell lightly from tree branches as they waved in the wind.
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NOT: The lady had flowers.
The gardener grew lilies.
The actress carried a bouquet of roses.
The saleswoman held up purple daisies for each customer to see.
Be Specific
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In the morning, a dog walked into the building. A boy said, “I like to play games.” The girl sat in a chair.
Make these sentences more specific:
At dawn, a German Shepherd wandered into the pet shop.
A young man exclaimed, “I enjoy playing Pictionary!”
The ten-year-old plopped onto a sofa.
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Overused Words
BORING!!!!
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intensely, powerfully, shockingly, richly, immeasurably, unusually
very
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amiable, helpful, admirable,
comforting, enjoyable, sweet, eye-catching, pleasant, soothing, radiant
good
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wicked, evil, merciless, cruel, plotting, hideous, despicable,
terrifying, grotesque, horrifying, unbelievable, selfish
bad
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overjoyed, pleased, content, delighted, cheerful, laughing,
upbeat, positive, elated
happy
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depressed, displeased, grieved, distressed, sorrowful, weeping,
teary-eyed, heartbroken, heavyhearted, melancholy
sad
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bitter, annoyed, fiery, cross, displeased, resentful, raging,
wrathful, sullen, indignant, huffy
angry
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Assignment: Add 5 details or specifics to this
paragraph to improve it.
This weekend I visited my
grandmother in her town. She
baked cookies for me and took me
to a store. She bought clothes and
books for me. Then, we went to
her home and watched movies.