EVALUATING PAST STUDENTS WORK

Section Strengths Weakness MarkPlanning and Research - Each piece of analysis is very

detailed. Researches into similar audiences

17/20

Construction - Good use of shots; especially the one of the girl whom the main character likes.

- Personally I like the fact she chose the theme of sexuality because it isn’t something that most people look at and most teenagers don’t seem to look at this topic very maturely.

- The lighting in the shots of her in her room should have possibly been mid/close shots.

- There should be more low key lighting.

49/60

Evaluation - Again very detailed, thoughtful, and can recognise her flaws and refine them

18/20

Total: 84/100