evaluating past students work
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This is an evaluation of a previous student's work for this coursework.TRANSCRIPT
EVALUATING PAST STUDENTS WORK
Section Strengths Weakness MarkPlanning and Research - Each piece of analysis is very
detailed. Researches into similar audiences
17/20
Construction - Good use of shots; especially the one of the girl whom the main character likes.
- Personally I like the fact she chose the theme of sexuality because it isn’t something that most people look at and most teenagers don’t seem to look at this topic very maturely.
- The lighting in the shots of her in her room should have possibly been mid/close shots.
- There should be more low key lighting.
49/60
Evaluation - Again very detailed, thoughtful, and can recognise her flaws and refine them
18/20
Total: 84/100