draft 1 assignment
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Audience Feedback Draft 1
WWW:
-Costume and USP very strong and clear
-‘Urban’ locations worked well and fit the genre
-Performance was strong
-Font was suitable
-Lip Sync was strong
EBI:
-More locations
-Planned dance variety
-Slight costume/prop change
-Push and control editing
-Refine to stop continuity errors
-More shot variety
After feedback our plans and pointers are:
-Use editing conventions from other vids in this genre (Slo-mo/Speed ramp/Superimposed)
-Push camera movement and try new techniques
-Use various lenses (if we can) such as fish eye
-Use a wider range of effects that are prominent in this genre
-Add a hoody or accessory to Conor’s costume to make it more appealing/Integrated
-Plan a dance for each base track so it is not repetitive
-Source a quieter petrol station at a less busy time
-Refine/Reflect on the video so there’s no continuity errors or jump cuts
-Using ‘Filler shots’
-Adding visual aesthetics including smoke bombs
-Adding a long gold chain to Joey’s costume
-Using the ‘Alternative’ costume to make it appealing and less repetitive
-Source ‘Urban’ locations and try to use more e.g. Under Arches/Under Car park
-Take actual ancillary photos
-Use our plans and recreate them
-Source fonts that reflect our genre