Audience Feedback Draft 1

WWW:

-Costume and USP very strong and clear

-‘Urban’ locations worked well and fit the genre

-Performance was strong

-Font was suitable

-Lip Sync was strong

EBI:

-More locations

-Planned dance variety

-Slight costume/prop change

-Push and control editing

-Refine to stop continuity errors

-More shot variety

After feedback our plans and pointers are:

-Use editing conventions from other vids in this genre (Slo-mo/Speed ramp/Superimposed)

-Push camera movement and try new techniques

-Use various lenses (if we can) such as fish eye

-Use a wider range of effects that are prominent in this genre

-Add a hoody or accessory to Conor’s costume to make it more appealing/Integrated

-Plan a dance for each base track so it is not repetitive

-Source a quieter petrol station at a less busy time

-Refine/Reflect on the video so there’s no continuity errors or jump cuts

-Using ‘Filler shots’

-Adding visual aesthetics including smoke bombs

-Adding a long gold chain to Joey’s costume

-Using the ‘Alternative’ costume to make it appealing and less repetitive

-Source ‘Urban’ locations and try to use more e.g. Under Arches/Under Car park

-Take actual ancillary photos

-Use our plans and recreate them

-Source fonts that reflect our genre