draft 2 planning

Draft 2 planning

Pamela Younes = 7488Amy Cleary = 7388

Jodie Foster-Pilia = 7362Monae Minors Gibbs = 7413

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Fox searchlight pictures.

Establishing shot of Kensal Green.

Long shot of Jodie sitting at the station.

Mid shot of Jodie sitting on

the bench.

Side shot of Jodie sitting on the bench.

Close up of Jodie going into the flashback.

Close up of Jodie typing.

Close up of the screen.

25-28 28-29 29-31 31-33 33-36 36-38 38-40

Side shot of Jodie looking at the screen.

Over the shoulder shot of Jodie looking at the screen.

Close up of the words.

Side shot of Jodie shaking her head.

Close up of Jodie coming out of the flashback.

Long shot of Jodie on bench, her legs are shaking.

Mid shot of Jodie’s legs shaking.

Close up of Jodie’s legs shaking.

Mid shot of Jodie thinking.

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Timeline

Close up of Jodie going into the flashback.

Long shot of Jodie putting on her beard.

Side shot of Jodie putting on beard.

Over the shoulder shot of Jodie looking at herself in the mirror.

Close up of Jodie’s reflection in the mirror.

Slow zoom of Jodie coming out of the flashback.

Mid shot of Jodie wiping her tears

1.00-1.02 1.02-1.04 1.04-1.06 1.06-1.09 1.09-1.11 1.11-1.12 1.12-1.14

Close up shot of the timer.

Over head shot of Jodie.

Mid shot of Jodie

Close up shot going into the flashback .

Mid shot of Jodie dancing in the mirror.

Mid shot of Jodie’s mum.

Mid shot of Jodie

Close up of Monica’s hand on the door

Two shot of Jodie and Monica

Mid shot of Monica

Close up of Jodie Mid shot of

Monica

Long shot of Jodie sliding down the door.

Close up of Jodie shaking

her head.

Long shot of Jodie standing up.

Close up of Jodie going into flashback.

1.14-1.15 1.15-1.17 1.17-1.19 1.19-1.20 1.20-1.26 1.26-1.27 1.27-1.28 1.28-1.29

1.29-1.31 1.31-1.33 1.33-1.35 1.35-1.40 1.40-1.47 1.47-1.49 1.49-1.51 1.51-1.53

Three way shot. Mid shot of Monae

Close up of ipad Mid shot of

AmyClose up of ipad

Mid shot of Jodie

Close up of ipad

Over the shoulder shot

Mid shot of Amy and Monae

Close up of ipadMid shot of

Amy

Over the shoulder shot

Three way shot.

Long shot of Jodie

Close up of Jodie coming out of into flashback.

POV shot

Close up shot of the timer.

POV of

tracks and

train.

Close up of Jodie's feet

1.53-1.54 1.54-1.57 1.57-1.60 2.00-2.03 2.03-2.05 2.05-2.08 2.08-2.11 2.11-2.14

2.14-2.17 2.17-2.19 2.19-2.23 2.23-2.26 2.26-2.29 2.29-2.31 2.31-2.33 2.33-2.37

2.37-2.39 2.39-2.42 2.42-2.45

Actors

Jodie

Before (normal)

After (in character)

Monae

Before (normal)

After (in character)

Actors

AmyBefore (normal)

After (in character

Music and sound

This would be played at the beginning of the opening sequence (non-diegetic sound). This would be at the beginning because: Its slow paced, and there

is no tension at the beginning of the opening sequence

Its not up beat, which means the music corresponds with the footage.

Music name: Native American

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Music and sound

This would be our option 2 to be played at the beginning of the opening sequence (non-diegetic sound). This would be at the beginning because: Because its really slow and

therefore it would work well with Jodie as Jodie is walking slow and thinking which means there should be calm music

However we chose this as option 2 as its really slow and there's choir music in the background which can disturb the audience, this might make the audience focus on the music rather than Jodie.

Music name: Kyrie



Music and sound

This would be played at the end of the opening sequence (non-diegetic sound). This would be at the end because: It starts slow then speeds

up as Jodie starts thinking whether she would jump or not

This would also be god because the shots gets faster which builds up tension, and the music would have to correspond with the footage for it to make sense

Music name: Mountains



The script

Story board

Shot list

Type of shot Description Prop/costumes

Establish shot A shot of Kensal Green station N/A

Long shot Showing jodie from a distance Hat, earrings, jacket,trousers, trainers

Mid shot Of jodie thinking Hat, earrings, jacker

Side long shot Jodie thinking Hat, earrings, jacket,trousers, trainers

Close up Jodie thinking a lot, and she is about to have a flashback

Hat, earrings

Shot list


POV Jodies point of view, when she is typing on the keyboard

N/A

Establish shot A shot of the screen, so the audience are aware what she is about to research

N/A

Side long shot Of jodie on the computer searching about transgender surgury

Hat, earrings, jacket,trousers, trainers

Over shoulder We can see jodie searching on the computer from a different angle

Hat, earring, top

Extreme close up Of the word ‘surgury’ which we thought would be verry important

N/A

Shot list


Extreme close up Of the word breast removal, as this is also important

N/A

Mid shot So the audience can see jodiesreaction to what she just researched

Hat, earrings, top

Close up Of jodie coming back from her flashback, and it would be clear to the audience that she is back in reality and is in the train station

Hat, earrings

Long shot Of jodie body reaction and facial expression


Close up shot Of jodies legs shaking Trousers, trainers

Shot list


Extreme close up A shot of jodies leg shaking a bitmore

Trainers, trousers

Long shot Jodie thinking Hat, earrings, jacket,trousers, trainers


Hat, earrings

Establish shot Of jodie in her room, applying her beard

Hat, earrings, waist coat, trousers, trainers

Mid shot Of jodie applying her beard and can see her reflection on the mirror

Hat, earrings, waist coat

Shot list


Close up To show clearly to the audience how jodie is applying it, and you can also see her reflection on the mirror

Hat, earing

Side mid shot Of jodie looking at her self in the mirror

Hat, earring, waist coat

Extreme close up of jodies eye tearing up N/A

Close up Of jodie coming back from her flashback, and it would be clear to the audience that she is back in reality and is in the train station, while is she crying

Hat, earring

Mid shot Showing jodie wiping away her tears, because a man should never cry

Hat, earrings, jacket

Shot list


Over head Of jodie siting on the bench and thinking about what she will do about her life


Mid shot Of jodie thinking Hat, earrings


Hat, earrings

Establish shot Jodie dancing like a guy infornt of the mirror, and can see her reflection on the mirror

Waist coat, top, trousers,trainers, hat, earrings

Long shot from the back

A shot of jodies mum walking towards jodies room while on the phone

Top, trousers, Uggs

Shot list Type of shot Description Prop/costumes

Extreme close up Jodies mum pushing the door to come into jodies room

N/A

Establish shot of jodie mum in jodies room, and jodie stops dancing, and them having a conversation

Jodies mum: top,trousers, Uggs

Jodie: Waist coat, top, trousers, trainers, hat, earrings

Long shot Of jodie slidding down the door, because she is feeling upset

Waist coat, top, trousers,trainers, hat, earrings

Close up Of jodie coming back from her flashback, and it would be clear to the audience that she is back in reality and is in the train station

Hat, earrings

Long shot Showing jodie getting up from the bench, walking towards the end of the platform



Close up Of jodies leg walkig towards near the edge of the platform

Trousers, trainers

Establish shot The timer until the train comes build tension

N/A

Mid shot fromthe back

The mid shot from the back to show that she is at the edge of the train station

Jacket, hat, earrings


Hat, earrings

Establish shot Of amy, moane and jdie talking, having a conversation

Amy: top, trousers, conversers, ipad

Moane: top, trousers, boots, ipad

Jodie: hoodie, trousers, trainers, ipad

Shot list


Mid shot Amy talking to moane top, ipad

Close up Amys ipad showing monae what shes going to wear to prom

Ipad

Mid shot Mid shot of monae replying to amy

top, ipad

Close up Monae’s ipad showing monae what shes going to wear to prom

Ipad

Mid shot Jodie on her ipad looking at suits for prom

Hoodie, ipad, hat, earrings


Two shot Amy and moane asking jodie what she will wear to prom



Close up Amy snatching jodies ipad so she is able to see what jodie is looking at for prom

Ipad

Two shot Showing amy;s and monae’sreaction to jodies thoughts about what she wants to wear to prom



Mid shot Jodie saying what they should think about her situation

Hoodie, hat, earrings

Long shot Of jodie leaving the room hoodie, trousers, trainers, hat, earrings


Long shot Jodie leaving g the room Hoodie, trousers, trainers,hat, earrings

Close up To show Jodie's expression from the flashback, When Jodie comes back to reality and carries on thinking when she's on the train platform

Hat, earrings

Mid shot A shot behind Jodie looking at the platform

Top, hat, earrings

POV Shot of the tracks N/A

Close up To show her facial expression to how she is feeling about suicide (confusion)

Hat, earrings

Shot list


POV Shot of the train tracks N/A

Establish shot Shot of the train approaching N/A

Close up To show how she is feeling before she commits suicide

Hat, earrings

Establish shot Of the tracks N/A

Establish shot A shot of the train beside Jodie Top, hat, earrings

Date Time Peopleattended

Agenda (points to discuss)

Targets Due date/deadline

Notes

21/2/13 2pm-8pm Whole group Discuss the preliminary

Did the storyboard, script, short list

25/2/13

25/2/13 3.20pm Whole group Discussed ideas for our opening sequence

Had to put together a strong idea

1/3/13

26/3/13 11am Monae, Jodie and Pam

Discussed more ideas and putting it together

Had a clearer idea.

1/3/13 Monae and Amy further discussed.

1/3/13 3.20-4.30pm Monae and Ms Connell

Discussed everyone’s ideas.

Change of idea.Change of storyline.

Discussed with everyone in group

Group meeting record

Date Time Peopleattended

Agenda Targets Due date/deadline

Notes

4/3/13 10.40am The group Cleared upthe idea of the opening sequence

Had the fullidea of the opening sequence

5/3/13 9.50am The group Discussedthe timeline (planning)

Inputs onthe timeline and backup plan

8/3/13

6/3/13 3.30pm Monae,Jodie, Amy

Discussed the storyboard,script

Finished storyboard and script

8/3/13 Went through this with Pam

Group meeting record continued

Long term Planning

Short Term planning

Day & time Filming what scene? Travel How will you get there?

Equipment/costume/propschecklist (what do you need to bring with you)

Sat Mar 9 - Filming all the train station scene

On bus Camera, tripod, ipad, costumes

Sun Mar 10 - Filming at Jodie's house On bus Camera, tripod, ipad, long mirror (in bedroom), computer, costume, paper and pencil

Saturday 23 march

- Filming at Jodie’s house Bus Camera, tripod, iPad, costumes

Sunday 24 march

- Filming at the train station

Bus Camera, tripod, iPad, long mirror (in bedroom), computer, costume, paper and pencil

draft 2 planning

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