FEEDBACK FIRST SHOTBy Georgia Seth

First Cut Comments- Walking Shot/Skateboard Shot This was feedback from five of our peers in

lesson as they sat and watched the cut with us and these are a few of the comments that were given. Firstly, the walking shot at the beginning of the video was way too long and needed to either be cut out completely or shortened. Additionally, the skateboard shot was seen as too long and this needed to be replaced.

Minor changes

A few more of the changes we were instructed to make such as the shot of Kayleigh biting the candyfloss needed to be cut down and in the second viewing of the candyfloss being visible, the shot was not fast enough as our peers felt it was more effective to have short, sharp clips in order to be music video potential.

Ending Shot

One of the extra tips we received from our peers was to change the ending shot being the cheesy grin Kayleigh reveals to the camera. We were instructed to change this as it was not original and seemed like we added it in due to us not having any additional footage filmed specifically for the ending.

Additional Comments“Lip-syncing is out on bits”

“Repetitive”

“Good editing”

“Liked the bubbles”

“Effective locations”“Kayleigh looks a bit lonely”

“Enthusiastic”

“Not cringey”