format for writing poem mrs. phelps’s hello poem editing and revising hello poem hello poem...
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• Format for Writing Poem• Mrs. Phelps’s Hello Poem• Editing and Revising Hello Poem
Hello Poem Requirements
Hello!
__________________Write your first name
__________, __________, __________, __________List four strong, precise adjectives that describe you
Brother/Sister of…OR Son/Daughter of ________________________________________ (Choose one)
Who loves __________________________, and ___________________.(Write 2 phrases)
Who feels __________________________, and ___________________.
(Write 2 phrases)
Who fears __________________________, and ___________________.(Write 2 phrases)
Who would love to see __________________, and __________________.(Write 2 phrases)
Who respects people who _________________________, and ___________________.(Write 2 phrases)
_______________
Last name
Hello!
Angie
dependable, kind-hearted, thoughtful, gracious
Wife of Jacob
Who loves a restful night at home playing board games with her children and a full day swimming at a waterpark
Who feels relaxed when reading a romantic drama book and energized after an extended conversation with an great friend
Who fears snakes and alligators at the zoo and being alone in a car in an unknown place
Who would like to see what my children will be like when they grow up and the statue of liberty in New York City
Who respects people who serves others without a thank you
and has passion for something and acts on it
Phelps
Hello!~Edit/Revise*Box the 4 adjectives in line 2….double check that each is an adjective…make changes as needed
*Circle two words that could be changed to something more descriptive…….make changes
*Underline pronouns in lines 4-7 (words used in place of your name). Be sure each is 3rd person: he/she; him/her; etc.
*Check lines 4-8 to be sure each includes phrases….also check that verbs are all same tense…make needed corrections (For example: do all of your verbs end in –ing or –ed?)
*Make sure each line begins with a capital letter…make corrections
*Check that lines 4-7 end in a period….make corrections.
*Be sure items in a series are separated with commas….make corrections