in the midst of liberation, things are left behind
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Thomas Bailey
Dr. Michael Hobbs
10-610: Intro. to Practical & Theoretical Criticism
October 11, 2010
In the Midst of Liberation, Things are Left Behind
Chopins The Awakeninghas the hallmarks of a novel interested in the liberation of
women. It relates the story of a woman who finds herself unable to conform to the expectations
of motherhood and wifedom. She finally escapes to a world of her own choosing and, when
even this is denied her, she makes one last choice that is entirely her own suicide. A bare-bone
analysis takes the reader this far, but there is a subtle, parallel, and yet connected theme that is
missed if only the feminine mystique prevails.
Having come of age during the Civil War and being surround by Southern-culture, some
of those themes find their way into the narrative. It should not be a surprise then that the novel
takes place in New Orleans and its environs the cultural capitol of the South and that the
heroines father is a Confederate officer. Embedded into Chopins text are servant-characters
(no better than slaves), who are either African-American or Mulatto, and their treatment by Edna
Pontellier, the heroine, can be seen as a commentary on the struggle for feminine equality. She
too is trapped in the master-slave paradigm that keeps her femininity bound to her husband.
Equality that leaves anyone behind is not real; it merely readjusts the paradigm to allow the
continuation of oppression.
In this paper we will examine three characters: the little black girl, the Quadroon, and
Joe. On their own, they appear to be minor characters in the story. The young girl appears only
thrice once working the treadle of Madame Lebruns sewing machine and the other two times
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as a messenger from Edna to Robert Lebrun and from Madame Lebrun to Edna. Joes three
appearances are: first, during the argument between Edna and Lonce Pontellier at the dining
table; second, working at Ednas private residence; and third, in remembrance by the children.
The childrens nanny possess the biggest role of the servants, being mentioned throughout the
novel, generally in response to something she did not do correctly with the children. Each of
these characters however interacts with Edna at profound moments in the text.
Edna first encounters the little negro girl sweeping the galleries of the main house at
Grand Isle. It need be noted that she was specifically recalled as the girl who had been working
the sewing machine earlier (32). It calls ones attention to the fact that she is a domestic, nothing
more, that her lot in life is merely to do that which she has been told and to do it
inconspicuously. She has been told to push the treadle with her hands (21), sweep the floors
(32), and carry messages (32 & 42). All of which she does obediently and swiftly and during
which conversations happen around in which she does not participate one wonders if her life
would be any different if the story were set in the Antebellum South. However Edna in this
scene is making her first major push toward her own liberation. The narrator explains that [s]he
had never sent for [Robert] before never asked for him never seemed to want him before
and yet she was living purely in the moment of her own needs and desires (32). The young girl
is the catalyst; she bears the message, beckoning Robert to come with Edna on a pilgrimage to
the Isle of Cythera.
The little negro girl remains unnamed, Edna was unable to see beyond the predominant
master mentality; not seeing her as a woman who may desire her own freedom as well. Instead
she left her behind to continue to do only what she is told. The moment has passed and the next
and last time the girl is mentioned is to pull Edna back from her freedom. Madame Lebrun used
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the girl to summon Edna to sit with her until Robert leaves to go to Mexico (42). It is a return to
respectable womanhood, Robert and Edna chaperoned by the mature, proper madam. There is a
duty that comes with freedom and Edna recoiled to the only method she knew: the ordering of
people below her station, the same treatment that Lonce gives to Edna. Someone else took that
which she desired so greatly, her moment of freedom, away. Robert is therefore whisked away
like a mirage in the desert, to one who comes unprepared.
The other unnamed character, the Quadroon, is mentioned early in the text in
association with Ednas children (4). Throughout the remainder of the novel, mention of the
children seems to go hand-in-hand with mentioning their nanny (4, 13, 42, 48, 51, and 69).
Through the internal dialogue at the beginning of chapter 4, it becomes apparent that the
nursemaid is the mother to Ednas children that she herself is not. The narrator explains that
[t]he mother-women seemed to prevail that summer [i]t was easy to know them, fluttering
about with extend, protecting wings when any harm, real or imaginary, threatened their precious
brood. They were women who idolized their children and esteemed it a holy privilege to
efface themselves as individuals (9) in scene-after-scene that is what the au pairis doing. She
is caring for the Pontellier children as if they were her own.
In a strange twist of irony, it is the Quadroons presence that allows Edna the freedom
to pursue her own freedom. The nannys motherly-qualities creates within Edna a certain
jealousy of her for she is present to the children; they are maturing well, and yet the nursemaid is
also able to find time for herself The quadroon had vanished (39). Two events mark this
emotive response by Edna in The Awakening. The first is shortly after Robert had informed
Edna that he was leaving for Mexico presently. She went directly to her room. She began
to set the toilet-stand to rights, grumbling at the negligence of the quadroon, who was in the
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adjoining room putting the children to bed (42). The object of Ednas perceived freedom,
Robert, was slipping from her grasp. The nanny, having decided to focus her priorities toward
the children at that moment, had neglected the periphery of a well-organized toilet the
Quadroon had made a choice. Edna, consumed with her personal freedom and its loss, was
unable to recognize in her servant a kindred spirit longing for freedom. Instead she grumbles at
her lack of duty and Edna sent the Quadroon away to her supper and told her not to return (42).
The patriarchal system has been so ingrained into all the characters that Edna cannot be free to
appreciate the freedom and responsibility that the Quadroon has found. A duplicate event
occurs in the following chapter, only the particulars change. Edna had lost Robert, evidenced by
only the passing reference to her by Robert in Madame Lebruns letter, and the nursemaid
allowed the children to play in the sun. Edna scolds the governess for not being more attentive
(45).
The final character is the African-American steward named Joe. It gives pause for
speculation as to why this individual is one of the few servants who are named in the story. We
are only going to focus on Joes primary scene, though he is mentioned in two additional scenes,
which is at the dinner table, shortly after the Pontelliers return from Grand Isle. He is first
referenced as the boy in waiting and later revealed as Joe (48-49). Joe is the exact opposite in
symbolism of the little black girl mentioned earlier. Instead of being the catalyst to an
opportunity for freedom, he is the symbol of the ancien rgime. He is the one that answers the
door for the Tuesday callers and he collect their cards. When Lonce desired to know whom did
Edna not properly receive, Edna asked Joe to bring the cards. To show her disdain for the
activity of waiting on callers, she ordered, not requested, Joe to give it to her husband. She feels
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that she has found her freedom from the expectations that Lonce has placed upon her. Yet her
freedom came at a price, she is free because Joe must remain in bondage.
The male servant is never given the opportunity to be a free person in the text; he is
obedient, industrious (81), never in error, and dear to the children (90). In a way he is the
perfection of the womanhood from which Edna rebels. He is named because he is perfectly
controlled by the master. It is similar to the way Adam names those creatures of which he
controls in the book of Genesis (Genesis 2:19-20), naming his wife Eve only after the expulsion
from the Garden of Eden (Genesis 3:20). Edna is unable to take notice of Joe as an individual,
only as a person to serve someone elses will. The cycle of repression remains and her freedom
is now at risk. The following morning Lonce makes his first observations about Ednas health
(51) that will lead him to consider doing something about her she doesn't act well [s]he's
odd, she's not like herself (62).
Ednas inability to see her own struggles for freedom as linked with the freedom of her
slaves is what makes a life of liberation impossible for her. Her greatest moments of freedom,
doing what she desires or wills in the end always comes to nothing. Even when she achieves her
greatest desire, Robert, all has been tainted by his belief that he can possess her in the same way
Lonce owned her (102). In a subtle way, The Awakeningis not a novel solely about the sought
for liberation of women but the means too. To be free is never possible when others remain in
bondage or hidden; it only shifts the object to be imprisoned.
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Works Cited
Chopin, Kate. The Awakening. New York: W.W. Norton & Company, 1994. Print