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Running Title: Loss

Conflict: Survive vs Die

Dramatis Personae:

Bo-Katan human female Mandalorian Death Watch lieutenant Lorka Gedyc human male Mandalorian Death Watch Overlord and Inquisitor Wren Commander human female Mandalorian Death Watch Nite Owl Sabine Wren human female Mandalorian Mandalorian Death Watch humans military Palpatine human male Supreme Chancellor of the Galactic Republic, Emperor and Sith Lord The Inquisitor Pauun male from Utapau Stormtroopers mostly human conscripts that join the Empire Mara Jade human female Emperors Hand Obi-Wan Kenobi human male Master Jedi Knight Pre- Imperials Naval Forces humans Galactic military Wilhuff Tarkin (mentioned) human male Admiral of the Galactic Military Darth Maul (mentioned) Zabrak male Sith Acolyte Black Sun (mentioned) Falleen males Criminal Smugglers Satine Kryze (mentioned) human female Mandalorian pacifist True Mandalorian clan - military

Plot tagline: Sparks of a revolution start at the worst time

Backstory: After Obi-Wan Kenobi tells Bo-Katan that it will likely lead to Galactic Republic Invasion of Mandalore, Bo-Katan tells him that they will be rid of Maul and Mandalore will survive, they will always survive. Obi-Wan Kenobi leaves only to determine that Bo-Katan is the Duchess Satine Kryzes sister and returns to Coruscant for his report before the Jedi Council and the Supreme Chancellor.

Meanwhile on Concordia, the moon of Mandalore, the Death Watch retreats back to old barracks to fend off those Death Watchmen who joined Darth Maul. The recoup their ship forces with Black Sun assistance to defend attacks by the coming Galactic Republic.

What comes is unexpected. Eight never seen before unusual starships, come out of hyperspace with rapid starfighters faster than any of the Mandalorian Gauntlet ships. (These are Star Destroyers and TIE Fighters). The starships annihilate Concordia planetary surface that destroy surface settlements and devastate Death Watch to flee other outer rim worlds.

Will the protagonists live mired in defeat or will. This story is set in dream sequences.

Settings: Concordia and Lothal

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Scene 1: Bo-Katan on Lothal wakes up screaming from a nightmare. She is asked by her lover what happened, and she freaks unable to speak. Then she goes back in time with vivid memories of Concordia. She looks above to see the sun blocked by huge unknown starships. She asks her Nite Owls to explain. They cant identify the starships. Immediately, areas as far as 2000 km are fired upon with laser type nuclear weapons. Everyone scrabbles to their ships to fight except Bo and her assistant Wren. Wren races to her barracks to grab her daughter, Sabine and begs Bo-Katan to adopt her while she fights in her starfighter. Bo-Katan reluctantly agrees and goes to a large Black Sun freighters to escape. There is blasts and smoke everywhere. Getting off moon and jumps into hyperspace to an unknown destination: Lothal. She is alone carrying a 2 year old named Sabine.

What must happen in this scene:

Bo-Katan at the beginning is speaking like in a dream to someone close to her Then Bo-Katan is there on the battlefield She explains in gross vivid detail of what happened to where she is handed Sabine Wren in her

arms and begged to care for her. She races to the Black Sun freighter to see ships shot down by these powerful Star Destroyers

and TIE Fighters that blow all Mandalorian Gauntlet Fighters from space easily Then her Black Sun ship hyperdrive is hit but not damaged as they are able to jump to lightspeed

anywhere away from these new ships. They wind up on Lothal

Scene 2: Current timeline - Lorka Gedyc is captured on Lothal and brought to a Star Destroyer so that the Inquisitor who interrogates him. As the Inquisitor messes with Lorka, he also broadcasts the interrogation to Palpatine, the Inquisitorius and just for fun to all the Mandalorians to watch. The Stormtroopers beat him senseless, but he stays silent. Then the Inquisitor looks over his file and asks what happened on Concordia with an evil grin. Lorka stares at the Inquisitor and when probed deeper. It is revealed that Lorka was on one of the Star Destroyers when Concordia was bombarded. Lorka was made to watch while his people were murdered, which makes him a traitor to Mandalorians. Holograms are played. The Inquisitor asks why Lorka left the safety of the Empire when Lorka shows his Force Powers to kill the Inquistor and is shocked back with an electrostaff. Then Lorka grabs a blaster killing most of the Stormtroopers and says a comment to the Inquistor about a rebellion a really good comment. He takes a TIE fighter and returns to Lothal, and stares into the eyes of Bo-Katan and Sabine and stays silent he has been procuring battleships and been secretly giving Mandalorian Ore to the Rebellion.

What must happen in this scene:

Lorka is seen by the Empire as a deserter The Inquisitor always refers to him as Nehaat Shan

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This is torture and it is how long Lorka can withstand not using his Force Powers and eventually he has to but not as an Inquisitor, but more like a Jedi.

When he returns to Lothal he thinks Bo-Katan will be very angry and when she is not she realizes what he has been secretively doing and just nods.

There can be an emotional type scene where nothing is said but Lorka is shaken by the torture. There can be a call from a Rebel Commander saying thank you The Emperor could remark on what he sees frustrated by the lack of commitment of his Hands

and looks at child Mara Jade fighting and a picture of her mother and father (Bo-Katan and Obi-Wan Kenobi).

The Emperor looks at Tarkin and says you were too quick in destroying Concordia.

Scene 3: Back in time - Obi-Wan Kenobi sits in Jedi Council meeting when he senses a huge disturbance in the Force. The other Jedi widen their eyes as several of them see ships covering Coruscant. But the pit of his stomach his feeling was back on Mandalore and his visions were not of the ships attacking Coruscant, they were more like Venators, but bigger and more triangular. He had to defend all that he believes (The whole ROTS attack and crash landing another happy landing). He sits to meditate and the images do not leave his mind. He sees these monstrous ships, Star Destroyers, and he cannot believe they originated from a spacestation (but he cannot see its the Death Star preserve the canon). Fast forward in time he meets Bo-Katan to reminisce. They laugh then Obi-Wan asks very pointed questions about what happened when Death Watch took over Mandalore, before Satine was killed. Bo talks about the Shehn Verda and how they broke into the Banking Vaults and found an armory with blueprints to massive weapons, one of them being some spacestation. They downloaded a copy and took it with them, destroying the Vault. She had help with a clan of the True Mandalorians. Obi-Wan who did she give the plans to She never says. She clasps Obi-Wans hand and tells him Satine was killed because she would not give the plans to Darth Maul, who made it a public spectacle of you. She tried to upload the plans to the Jedi Temple Archives, the buffering took too long. By the time we could do anything, Mandalore and Concordia were decimated. We have traces, but someone erased the entire mainframe on Mandalore. He just wore a cloak and had two red lightsabers (Darth Sidious).

What must happen in this scene:

Flat out, this is about the Death Star and its plans Darth Maul did not kill Satine because of Obi-Wan, he killed her because she had the Death Star

plans and was going to give them to the Jedi and she would not give them to him. He just killed her in front of Obi-Wan to be a dick.

Bo-Katan downloaded but could not erase the plans from the Banking armory so she took them and uploaded them somewhere in a standalone server with strong passcodes.

Palpatine did not kill Maul because he knew how to get access to the plans and only a Force User could find the location of the copies, break the person who had to passcodes, and open these vaults. Maul was good at that.

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Black Sun failed to procure the passcodes overall and thats why Palpatine, and then Darth Vader had them killed repeatedly.

Partial plans were uploaded to a Jedi Temple archive in Dantooine, but not by Bo, but Satine. All to find out, Sabine was given the passcodes to the plans on her person as a baby.