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Mastering the Mechanics of Writing
Rachel GrammerWriting Consultant
Walden University Writing Center
A few notes before we begin…
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Session Overview
1. Parts of a Sentence
2. Commas
3. Semicolons
4. Colons
5. Periods and citations
6. Dashes
7. Hyphens
8. Word Choice
9. Clauses
10. Modifiers
Parts of a Sentence For a sentence to be complete, it must have a subject (what or whom the sentence is about) and a verb (an action, or what the subject does).
Marshall (2010) wrote. Marshall = The subject
wrote = The verb
Most sentences also have a direct object (what receives the action).
Marshall (2010) wrote an article. an article = direct object
Parts of a Sentence
Because of a gap in the literature, Marshall (2010) wrote an article.
You might also add an appositive (a phrase that defines or renames a noun).
Marshall (2010), the famed social scientist, wrote an article.
In academic writing, you’ll also often have a modifier (a clause or phrase that modifies a noun or a verb).
Finally, sentences often have prepositional phrases (phrases that can further define nouns or further explain the verb).
Marshall (2010) wrote an article about culture.
Marshall (2010) wrote from an honest perspective.
Parts of a Sentence
Parts of a Sentence:Subject-Verb Agreement
The percentage of students who called in sick and the number of students the instructor marked truant is proportional to the students’ degree of seniority.
INCORRECT: The percentage of students who called in sick AND the number of students the instructor marked truant IS proportional to the students’ degree of seniority.
CORRECT: The percentage of students who called in sick AND the number of students the instructor marked truant ARE proportional to the students’ degree of seniority.
The easiest way to account for subject-verb agreement is to break down your sentence into subjects and verb. Take just the subjects, and you have the following:
Verb: Are
Subject One: The percentage of students
Subject Two: The number of students
The percentage of students who called in sick and the number of students the instructor marked truant ARE proportional to the students’ degree of seniority.
Parts of a Sentence:Subject-Verb Agreement
Parts of a Sentence:Pronoun-Noun Agreement
INCORRECT: A client should always be knowledgeable about their medication prescription.
Nouns and pronouns should always agree in number and in gender.
Noun: Person, place, thing, idea, eventPronoun: Word that replaces a noun
CORRECT: A client should always be knowledgeable about his or her medication prescription.
Singular
Singular
Plural
Singular
Parts of a Sentence:Tense Consistency
Incorrect: When Smith tried to contact the interviewees for a follow up, some of them moved.
(This sentence wrongly implies that Smith’s contact attempt caused the moving.”)
Correct: When Smith tried to contact the interviewees for a follow up, some of them had moved.
(This sentence makes it clear that the moves had already happened prior to the contact attempt.)
Parts of a Sentence:Tense Consistency
When you are writing, try to keep your verb tense consistent throughout each paragraph. Remember, consistency is key!
Example of inconsistent verb tense: Rheinberg’s (2009) study showed that the monkeys were suffering from malnutrition. The monkeys stop climbing the tree, and they eat nothing. They were lethargic and thin, and they wanted only to sleep.
Revision: Rheinberg’s (2009) study showed that the monkeys were suffering from malnutrition. The monkeys stopped climbing the tree, and they ate nothing. They were lethargic and thin, and they wanted only to sleep.
Dependent ClausesDependent (subordinate) clauses: A group
of words that contains a subject and verb but does not express a complete thought (not a complete sentence; will help you beef up your sentences though).
Common dependent clause markers: after, although, as, as if, because, before, even if, even though, if, in order to, since, though, unless, until, whatever, when, whenever, whether, and while.
Independent Clauses
Independent clause: A group of words that contains a subject and verb and expresses a complete thought (can stand alone as a complete sentence; will help you write interesting, compound sentences).
Common independent clause markers: also, consequently, furthermore, however, moreover, nevertheless, and therefore.
Commas According to APA (2010), use a comma “between
elements (including before and and or) in a series of three or more items” (p. 88).
In the forest, there are lions, tigers, and bears.
You can make the pie with apples, pears, or bananas.
At practice today, the players will work on catching the ball, shooting with accuracy, and defending set plays.
CommasAlso use commas (pp. 88-89) to do the following:
Set off nonessential information
Jamie has a date with John, who is the nicest guy she has ever met, and she wants to make him dinner.
Separate two independent clauses joined by a conjunction (FANBOYS: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so)
Jamie went to the grocery store, and she bought dinner.
Set off nonessential clauses at the end of a sentence
Jamie went to the grocery store, which was three blocks away.
SemicolonsUse semicolons (pp. 89-90) for the following: To separate two independent clauses
Jamie went to the grocery store; she bought dinner.
To separate two independent clauses with a sentence modifier
Jamie went to the store; however, she forgot to buy candles.
To separate elements in a series that already contain commas
Jamie went to the store to buy lettuce, tomatoes, and croutons for a salad; pasta, chicken, and sauce for an entrée; and ice cream and brownies for dessert.
ColonsUse colons (p. 90) to do the following:
Introduce a list at the end of an independent clause
Jamie had everything she needed to make the perfect dinner: a salad, an entrée, and a dessert.
Introduce an illustrative or amplifying phrase or clause at the end of an independent clause
Jamie knew there were just two things she needed to complete her meal: candlelight and romantic music.
Periods Periods are used at the end of complete sentences (independent clauses). Periods are also used in citations.
In the case of a citation, the period should be placed as follows:
After the parentheses in an in-text citation.
“Grammar may be difficult to master, but it is fun to learn” (Grammer, 2012, p. 14).
Before the parentheses in a block quote.
“Long block quote of 40 words or more....” (Grammer, 2012)
Dashes
Use a dash (pp. 90-91) for the following: To indicate a sudden interruption in the continuity of
a sentence.
These two things—candlelight and romantic music—would set the mood for her third date with John.
That’s it! Don’t use dashes for anything else!
Also, be sure to use long dashes—not hyphens.
HyphensHyphens are used to link together words that work
together to describe something if those words come before the object described.
The good-looking man walked away.
Here, good and looking work together to describe the man, and they both occur in the sentence before the
word man.
That man is good looking.
Notice here there is no hyphen.
Hyphens
In APA format, most words with prefixes such as non, semi, pre, post, anti, multi, co, and inter are not
hyphenated:
pretest, posttest, antibiotic, antisocial, nonprofit, semipro, multiphased, subsample.
However, there are a few words that are still hyphenated:
self-esteem, self-concept.
Hyphen Examples
• Coworker
• Pretest
• Posttest
• Nontraditional
• Multinational
• pre-Kindergarten
Possessive Nouns
To make a proper noun that ends in s possessive, add ’s:
Rogers’s love of APA, Jones’s hatred of APA
The ladies’ restroom is located on the first floor.
Do not use an apostrophe to make a year or abbreviation plural:
In the 1960s; ESLs
Word Choice
That Restrictive clauses. Essential to the meaningThat defines one in a bunch.The dip that Sally brought was the best.
WhichNonrestrictive clauses.Add more informationSet off with commasFurther describes a lone object.The dip, which Sally bought, was the best.
That That for things.The book that we found was valuable.
Who Who for people.The student who found the book got a reward.
Word ChoiceWhile While links events occurring simultaneouslyHeidi took a nap while Jamie talked about grammar.
Although Use although, whereas, and, or but in place of while.Although the argument seemed solid, there were holes in his reasoning.
Because Since is used to indicate time. Because should be used in all other instances.You left because I wasn’t breathing.
SinceSince=time. Meaning: after that.Since you’ve been gone I can breathe for the first time.
Word ChoiceFartherUse farther for physical distances.I ran farther than he.
FurtherUse further for figurative distances.She couldn’t have been further from the truth.Everyday
A routine occurrence, common, usualThat’s an everyday shoe she’s wearing.Other than the monkeys escaping their cages, it was a normal everyday scene at the zoo.
Every dayEach dayShe gets coffee every day.He missed her every day she was gone.
Word Choice
May May=permissionMay I go to the bathroom?
Might Might=possibilityI might go to the bathroom before we go.
Can Can=abilityCan I go to the bathroom?
Word ChoiceLayTo lay= to putI will lay the book on the table.
LieTo lie= to rest or be at rest.I’m going to go lie down. Exception= lie in the past tense:I lay down yesterday for a nap.
LessFor things you can’t count.I had less confidence after I fell on my face.
FewerFor things you can count.He went to the 10 items or fewer lane at the grocery store.
Word ChoiceAffectAffect=ActionThe study was about how the earthquake in Japan affected the entire world.
EffectEffect=Event (hint: it will usually be used with the or a.) I wonder what the effects of the earthquake in Japan will be.
ClausesMisplaced clauses: When a subordinate clause is
embedded in the middle of a sentence
This is awkward: Use of the Writing Center at Walden, because of recent marketing strategies, is increasing rapidly.
Instead, place the subordinate clause at the beginning or end of the sentence:
Use of the Writing Center at Walden is increasing rapidly because of recent marketing strategies.
Because of recent marketing strategies, use of the Writing Center at Walden is increasing rapidly.
Misplaced Modifiers
The client was sent to the clinic with many medical conditions.
Which one had many medical conditions? The client or the clinic?
Right now it sounds as thought the clinic has medical conditions. However, the writer meant for the description to be attached to the client. How can we change it? Make sure to put the modifier directly next to the word it is describing.
The client with many medical conditions was sent to the clinic .
Modifiers
Dangling Modifiers
Reviewing the literature, a correlation emerged between obesity and the number of hours spent sitting.
Who or what is reviewing the literature? That person or thing should be the word that comes directly after the comma.
Reviewing the literature, the researchers discovered a correlation emerged between obesity and the number of hours spent sitting.
Modifiers
Putting the hat on her head, her cat began to meow.
Putting her hat on her head, the woman heard her cat begin to meow.
As the woman put her hat on her head, her cat began to meow.
Other Academic Writing Nuances: Anthropomorphism
Anthropomorphism:
The study suggested that the sky was blue.
Corrected version:
In his study, Timmerman (2002) suggested that the sky was blue.
Other Academic Writing Nuances:Active and Passive Voice
Passive
The participant was interviewed and the survey results were compiled.
Active
I interviewed the participant and compiled the survey results.
Passive
A trend was shown that proved ice cream makes one’s intelligence increase.
Active
The research showed a trend that proved ice
cream makes one’s intelligence increase.
Other Academic Writing Nuances:Parallelism
INCORRECT: To obtain Magnet status, hospitals must maintain high standards of service, implement evidence-based practice, and allowing staff input.
REVISED: To obtain Magnet status, hospitals must maintain high standards of service, implement evidence-based practice, and allow staff input.
Using parallelism is the same as being consistent in your writing style, especially in lists. When you have ideas that are of equal value, you need to present them in a way that shows they are equal or parallel.
Website Resources
This information can be found on our Grammar page on our website
Check out our many other resources as well!
Grammarly
• An automated grammar and revision tool
• Appropriate for a draft in need of grammar review, submitted before the use of one-on-one Walden tutoring
• Accessible through the Writing Center website
Grammarly
Does not “fix” paper but instructional and shows patterns.
Requires critical thinking by the student; much like MS Word grammar check, not all suggestions will be appropriate.
Supplements rather than replaces the live tutors, who can focus on other issues.
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