Mock-up Feedback from Rebecca

Kris Erice

Really liked the graphic lights behind the picture

Decent picture

Simple stuff

Rebecca said how the blue lights already represented the electronic genre

I argued how the laptop could be seen as a synergy product as the laptop was featured in the music video (BLACK MAC)

She also said that the picture on the right should take up the entire left panel instead.

Rebecca said that the rule of third would be hard to follow if my advertisement was portrait

She also mentioned how Rolling Stone would be unlikely to review electronic artists

The original artist being reviewed by Rolling Stone

James Blake, also an Electronic artist, reviewed

My reason for including Rolling Stone in my advert